New Arakshi- FF - humsafar ke liye- character sketch- pg 2 updt

Pls suggest ny caption of this ff i mean the title..
Mere dimag mai kuch ghus nahi raha...

Come to the story..




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A girl of her mid 23 was sitting in a media centre conf room...

The T.V ws playing the recent case solved by ETF.
'' ek aur baar ETF k kabil officers ne mumbai mai kiya gaya terrorist trap ko krack kark pure mumbai ko bacha liye''

'' hamare kabil officer ACP arjun suryakant raute ne apni jaan ki bazi laga kar uss bomb ko diffuse kiya, aur ismai unka saath diya hai ETF chief acp sameer rathod jinhone janata ko bahrosa dilaya k wo unhe kuch nahi hone denge''

aur yahi nahi , unhone un atankwadiyon ko bhi pakad liya''

crime reprter karan k saath India times ''

the girl switched off the TV..
N after that she removed her head phones..

All other members of the conf r shocked to see her like this..

She turned her head around..

A man asked her' tum sun b rahi thi ya nahi..'

the girl- jo janti usse sunk mere kano ko kyun pareshan karu,..kuch aur intresting ho toh batao

the man showed a pic on the other side of the room on the screen..

'' Acp .Arjun suryakant raute...
Intresting...very intresting...''- said the girl..

The man- tumhe pata hai na tumhe kya karna hai..sun rahi ho..

The girl- kaan kharab nahi hai mera..
Bewajah noise pollution kyun kar rahe ho..
In her mind- wait acp arjun ..just wait ..i m coming..
Bt itni bhi kya jaldi hai..

She stood up n walked out of the room leaving behind the more shocked member...

One memb- oh god..ye ladki...
Ab kaun samjhayega usse..

( obviously hamare samjhe ya samjhaun...he he )

she walked out of the media centre...

Here in the ETF conf room..

Aisha, shree n chotu r there discussing abt the current situation of the two boss of theirs..

Shree- yaar uss din toh ye ek dushre ko marne k chakker mai the..

Chotu- haan yaar..

Aisha- bas koi aa jaye jo indono ko shaant kar de ..
Khaas kar k arjun sir ko..

Shree- haan, waise b comm sir bol rahe the ki koi naya off aane wala hai..

Aisha- tumhe kaise pata..
Shree- wo rathod sir se...



Near the temple in a very small garden:

he stands there staring at the sunset..
How is life is just like this sunset no sign of morning for him from tht day...

'' roshni aaj sirf aur sirf tumhari wajah se hamare saath nahi hai''

'mai tumhe kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta raute'

the words of his best friends mouth still echoing in his ears..

Once again he is in that helpless condition where destiny left him only to give him pain, only to live the pain,
just a person who is cutted by all relation , wounded by love... Immersed in guilt...

He started to walk out of the garden when he felt some ones presence in that lonley garden..

He turned his head bt found nothing..
He goes to his suv n wheeled to a direction where he can only reach at the address of peace..

Unware of the fact that some one is behind him..

The girl comes out of the garden ..
She goes to her car..
Looked at the mirror..n looked at her eyes..
She thought-

galat nahi sunatha acp arjun..
Ho aap kafi intresting.. Iss bar bahaut maja aayega..
Till then wait..


Hey guys tell me how is it..
I knw 1st part hai n thoda boring hai..
Pls if i get +ve response i wll continue..

I wll come saterday afternoon..
Pls if u guys want i wll continue then pls pls comment n

pls suggest a caption.

Thank u..

Awesome start !
Been waiting for a FF with Mrunal/Sakshi :D
Can't wait to read more :)
Hope you update soon !

Originally posted by: Liza.

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Been waiting for a FF with Mrunal/Sakshi :D
Can't wait to read more :)
Hope you update soon !
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thank u dear..
Hope much ppl wll like this
fingers crossed..

Wow...
My Vampu,i loved it...
Great start.
Continue karte raho.

Waooo vampu..
ek or story..
vo bhi new lead..
grate grate update soon..
first part is not a boring..
its realy interestinggg dr..
staring is very interesting..
or ye girl..
kuch to chal raha hai dimag main..
interesting..
what about title dr...
1-the new begning..
2-*******
3-phir se...
4-ABHI ABHI TO MILE HAI..
lolll mere dimag main kuch ne aa raha...

Wow
Amazng start
I wanted 2 read a story wid ariun n sakshi now gt a chance n loved it
Pleeez continue 😊

Well nice start !
continue soon :)

Character sketch

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1. Acp- arjun suryakant raute-

the second command in chief of etf. No nonsence cop. Angry young man look always.. Lost his wife. Seeking for the murderer of his wife roshni arjun raute.

2. Sakshi anand-

secret agent of NIA ( national investigative agent ). She hav taken the mission in her hand for report the information abt sikander. Bubly chirpy girl, single.
Always unpredictable. She had a strong relation with roshni.
Still working as a journalist .

3. Acp sameer damshing rathod- chief of ETF. Have a great problem with acp arjun. Very caring for team members. Best friend of roshni.

4. Shreekant sen-
the technical expert of etf.

5. Liza d cruz- gorensic expert of Etf.

6. Aisha kapoor- encounter specialist of etf.

7. Chotu- commando of etf.

8. Riya mukharjee- dead- research specialst of etf.
( don't worry guys, i won't have riya in this)



its only n only on arakshi...

How is it guys pls tell me..
I need ur support.

suberb cs
continue soon
yeah me first
yipee

please do update and pm me the ff updates...