new OS Ek Naya Aihsaas:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rathore:- team ek new case aaya hai, Let's go!
Arjun: par kaha? , i mean case kya hai?
Rahore: ek VIP ka murder ho gaya hai, usi ka case handle karna hai
Arjun: OK
Shree, chotu, Aisha, Lisa and a new member including in the team and she is Murnal (still have not decided her name in the show , so i have decided her name is Jiya like Riya name in my OS, n she is a journalism )😉 😃

ab ek VIP ka murder hua hai to vaha press valo ka aana to banta hi hai, after all apne newspaper ke liye kuch to masala chahiye unhe bhi...lolz
ETF team is reached there. Lisa dead body ko dekhti hai aur apne analysis se batati hai ki this is a murder.😃
Shree: to kya pata lagaya tumne ki kya hua hoga iske sath..?
Lisa: (in full attitude) murder hua hain, aur thodi der mere kaam me archan ki na to m tumhara murder kar dungi.😆
Shree: oye tum samjhti kya ho apne aap ko😲
Lisa: Forensic Expert!!!!!!, samjhye ya samjhaun !!!!!!😉
Shree: ye to arjun sir ka dialg hai, vaise bi mujhe tumse kuch ni samjhna...huh⭐️
Lisa: pata hai arj sir ka hi dialg hai, but tumhe samjhana bahut jarrori tha yaha😆
Rathore: Demmit!!! tum log yaha jaghra karne aaye ho ya phizul ki bakwas karne!!
tum log agar kaam ni karna chahte to bata do mujhe, dono ka transfer karva deta hu!!
Shree: no sir! , hum log kaam hi kar rahe thy...😳
Rathore: dikh raha hai, kaise kaam kar rahe thy aur ab jaldi pata lagao ki iske phone me ye last no. kiska hai?
Chotu: Aree shree baba! ye to dekh lete ki yaha demmit!! pahle se hi khada hai 😆 , uper se samjhye ya samjhun! , andhe ho gaye ho kya tum dono? bin bulaye maut ka samna karna chahte ho , meri to akha maja satak jata hai in dono ko sath me dekhkar!
Aisha: bilkool sahi kah raha hai chotu , in logo ke itana samjhane par bhi tumhe samjh ni aata, abhi tum dono ko kar dete na spread out!!
khair chotu bhais ke aage bin bajane se kya fayda..😆 😆.
Shree n Lisa: looks to each other 😲 😆
Jiya: just smiles (becz she is new in the team)

(a reporter comes into them between work ) pure sahar me din-dahade 1 VIP ka murder ho jata hai aur aap log kya karte rahte hai😡

Arjun:hum apna kaam bahut acche se kar rahe hai, bahut jald hi qatil ka pata chal jayega😃
Reporter: to kya pata lagaya hai aapne iss case me!
Arjun: abhi aap ko hum log kuch ni bata sakte hai, vakat aane par aapko pata lag jayega, hume humara kaam karne dijiye aur aap apna kijiye, samjhye ya samjhun!!!!!😎
Reporter: kuch ni kar sakte aap log sivaye hath par hath rakhne ki bajaye
(then quickly interfere Jiya between them)

Jiya to reporter: inhone aapko itna samjhya , aapko samjh nahi aaya kya?ye log apni jaan baazi par laga kar dusro ki , aam janta ki hifazat karte hai, bina ye soche-samjhye ki agle hi pal inki zindgi kaha se kaha ho sakti hai aur aap mujhe batayiye ki aap log kya karte hai?😡 aap logo ka bhi kuch farz hai ya nahi? aap inka sath dene ki bajaye inhi par ungli uttha rahe ho,😡
ETF ne aaj tak vo cases handle kiye hai jo local police kabhi nahi kar saki aur vo bhi bahut kam time me, samjhye! aap logo ko to ek bahana aur ek news chahiye jis par namak -mirch laga kar apne newspaper ke front par chapa ja sake!!😃
Reporter to Jiya: Sorry madam!!😃
arjun is sooo impress for jiya n looks at her.
Arjun to Jiya:dukh to iss baat ka hai ki ye log kabhi is tarah ki bate samjhte hi nahi hai ya phir jan-bujhkar nahi samjhna chahte.😕 😃
Jiya: zarror smajhyege Sir aur vaise bhi ab ye kaam mera hain ...
Arjun: kayon sa kaam?😕
Jiya: jiske liye main ETF me aai hu, logo ko samjhane ka !! 😆 😉
aur jiya vaha se chali jati hain aur arjun usye dekhta raha jata hai
Rathod to Ravte: aaurat ki kabiliyat par kabhi shaq ni karna chahiye, samjhye!!😉 😃


Rathod to himself: aaj jis tarah se Jiya ne Arjun ka sath diya hain , Baghwan kare ye dono ek dusre ka sath aisye hi dete rahe aur ek dusre ko bhi samjhye.😃


the end😃


sorry guys my ist OS,ist story 😃
m thodi kabari type ki writer hu
chota sa try kiya hai vo bhi forums ki post ke liye😃
plz be tolerate😳
exam chal rahe hai, sara din mujhse padha bhi ni jata
kuch topic ni mil rahe yaha forums me kisi ko
aur kaha se laye itne topic 😕
1 to ye sp valo ne jeena haram kar rakha hai
sat-sun ko hi show aata tha aur last week vo bi ni aaya😡
sooo plz read this OS n do full commt with hit like😳



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Posted: 12 years ago
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naish...
i mean nice...
i loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Di ap bhi writer hehe
grt
superb wrk
want to knw ur name n age lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONGRATULATIONS
amazing cwk...very well written
loved it very much
keep writing..
love ya
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏👏 kya baat hai its awesum i lyk it
pata nahi tha ki aunty mein ek writer bhi chupi baithi hai😆
i mean aaj tak tu hame apni shayari,poems se pareshan karti thi ab os bhi likh dala reham karo yaar hum bechare frnds par🤣🤣(just joking)
jokes apart its really gud
loved nok jhok between shree -liza😊😆
full of funny dialogues🤣🤣
intersesting yaar jiya to pehle se hi impressed hai arjun se😉
rofl rathore at the end🤣🤣 ek dusre ko samjhate rahe 😆

vry nice madam waise maine terese funny os hi expect kiya tha and its really gud😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My first OS lekho subject me pls,subject he samjh nai aaya mujhe.
Tum ne jiya rakkha name?i think RJ b rakhne wali hai wo name😆
Fist time lekha hai mast hai👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shona14

👏👏 kya baat hai its awesum i lyk it
pata nahi tha ki aunty mein ek writer bhi chupi baithi hai😆
i mean aaj tak tu hame apni shayari,poems se pareshan karti thi ab os bhi likh dala reham karo yaar hum bechare frnds par🤣🤣(just joking)
jokes apart its really gud
loved nok jhok between shree -liza😊😆
full of funny dialogues🤣🤣
intersesting yaar jiya to pehle se hi impressed hai arjun se😉
rofl rathore at the end🤣🤣 ek dusre ko samjhate rahe 😆

vry nice madam waise maine terese funny os hi expect kiya tha and its really gud😊


aur vo gandi si siggi bhul gai😆 😆
khub pakati hu na
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Posted: 12 years ago
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are baba m sorry aunty main to bas maje le rahi thi😆😭 sorry
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u guys
pari, KKK, payal, shonu, Aliya, Sanchi
really thanks 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Manju name mast hai os ka:)

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