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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
hey nice start keep on writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Important note




I am sorry 4 late here me busy in other works nd exams so I can't update I am sorryyy
Kan pakad Kerr sorry
I will update after 25april 😊
Thanx 4 all lovely comment which is very valuable nd crucial 4 me
Thanx dr big wala hu sab ko🤗
Love u alll
Edited by Jass_k5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
continue soon ,
i am waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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We are waiting for your update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
firstly sorry for late comment...i guess missed it...
But koi nahi aaj Mila hai na:)
Loved the starting I guess the boy and gal is shree and riya...
Start was good...hope the next update wil be a long one:)
Take ur own sweet time and update...lakin a big one k...
All the best for ur exams...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rocking_gal

firstly sorry for late comment...i guess missed it...

But koi nahi aaj Mila hai na:)
Loved the starting I guess the boy and gal is shree and riya...
Start was good...hope the next update wil be a long one:)
Take ur own sweet time and update...lakin a big one k...
All the best for ur exams...:)

Thanx swt hrt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for late nice part please cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai dr frnds sorry big wala sorry dr
Thanx 4 all valuable comment and liking and I hope 2 part like kro
Girl cut the phone and came to hall and ask shanti
(shanti middle aged woman who very important 4 her she is like as maa so she call dj means dai Jaan)
Girl:uska phone aya?
Shanti:no baby Aaj nahi ,kal aap nahi thay us nay apko call kiya tha bt ur mble swith off tha
Girl:ha vo...
(nxt Kush keh pati her phone ring)
Girl:jai hind sir
Voice:jai hind ,Riya I want to talk smthing important to u can u coming nw
Riya:sure sir
(chalo pata chal gay girl kon hai...)
Voice :ok
Riya:jai hind sir
Sir:jai hind
She cut the phone and ask to dj
Riya :vo kab ayegi?
Shanti:Mai apko Batana bhul gae ki vo picnic pr gae hai
Riya:what ,dj apko pata hai na...
(vo puri bat keh pati tab hi door bell hoti hai)
Shanti to Riya : don't worry dr Mai dekhti ho
She open the door and found a handsome ,smart boy
Boy: hai girl frnd hw r u,meray bina kaisai din cut rhay hai
Shanti:sharm kr Mai tumari maa ki umer ki ho sharm kr
Boy:sharam kaisai Kro vo to mainay kal he sell kr di gf
Riya:rehan Tum Itni jaldi yaha coffe pinay ki Itni jaldi
Rohan:hai Riya hw r u? Vo kaha hai?
Riya : me fine vo picnic pr gae hai aur coffe pr Jana cancel commission sir nay call THI mujhay bhulaya hai
Rohan:kyu ?dad nay tumay q bolay
Riya :pata nahi chal Tum appni gf k sath time spend Kro Mai chalti ho kabab Mai hadi q bano...
Shanti:bus karo Tum dono
Riya go to commission 's office
Riya can I come in ?
Com:yes dr
Riya enter
Com :take a seat beta
Riya :Thanx sir aap mujhsai koe bat...
Com:uski lead mil gae hai
(yeh sun kr Riya expression changed in angry )
Com continue..or vo case Mumbai eft ko diya jayga
Kya Tum...
Riya stood and said :Mai transfer chahti ho Mumbai Mai
(com knew the reason why she want)
Com:ok Riya Mai tumara tumara transfer Mumbai Mai kr deta ho pr us say phlay vaha k commission mr .pertap damsingh rathod sai baat krta ho
Riya:pls sir ok sir jai hind
(vo janay lagti hai tab hi com.)
Com:beta,r u ok
Riya:yes kaka
Com:phir sai ik baar sochlo apnay baray Mai or usk baray Mai
Riya: u know kaka usk lea Mai Kush bhi kr sakti ho uski maa baba ,behen,frnd sabh Kush ho uski safety k lea Kush bhi kr sakti ho...
Usk lea Jaan day sakti ho aur lay bhi sakti ho pr meray jinda rehtay usay anch na anay dongi
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Riya : maa aap Kahi nahi jaa rhi ho aap hemesha
Hmray sath rahogi
Maa:nahi ,Mai Kahi nahi jaa rhe ho,bus sirf yeh body chod rhe ho bt my soul always with u ,Tum uska khayal rakhna promise me
Riya:promise krti ho Mai uska pura khayal rakhogi
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Tears fall from her wonderful eyes
Com.came to her and said
Com:ok beta ready ho jao Mumbai k lea or ik baat yad rakhna tumara kaka hemesha tumary pass hai






Ok dr frnds
I hope apko asha lagay
Sorry 4 late update and any mistakes
Give ur opinion to me
I am glad u like it



Edited by Mishti_k5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
loved it...thnxx for pm...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Awesome update.
So the girl is riya.
And is that ariya story.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.

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