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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
ariya is superb
he is missing her but still scolding her omg🤣
cont soon!!!
thx for the pm
Edited by madmadona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nakshatra92

awesome...


he's getting his own medicine ... lykd it 😆

missing badly arjun's signature line " laparwahi ki hadd hoti hai riya."

bahut miss karthi hoon...

update soon...



me too miss it a lot in the show😭

one of my favorite dialogue of arjun " laparwahi ki hadd hoti hai riya."

very special using for our riya only😆


Edited by madmadona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was such a fantastic update :) loved it
awww arjun was angry and happy at the same time 😆
hmmm so aisha is kind of attracted towards arjun interesting
awww riya ordered the chai for him and he was missing her
flashback was lovely
riya was so happy hearing his voice and then she was crying
and awww riya thought all that as her dream
store room scene was awesome ❤️
awww arjun brought mineral water bottle for riya :)
arjun fell on top of riya <3
sneeza na 😡😆
again arjun was scolding riya and riya got mad at him too
loved arjun's dialogue "sayad aaj kal footbaal khelne ka jada sauk hai."
precap seems interesting
can't wait to read more
continue soon

P.S. : it's part 11
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vampu is baar jaldi update karna.
Varna samjhe ya samjhun
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOl so Rawte ji is angry and happy both...confused insan :P 😆
hmmm Ayesha is attracted towards Arjun..
and the cutting chai comes...and Arjun ji is missing Riya :P
the flash back was super sweet!!!
mineral water bottle seal k sath😆
Arjun fell on top of her <3
n then achooo 😆
and he scolded her AGAIN ..yeh Arjun bhi na, kabhi nahi sudhrega :|
football😆

great part, contd soon :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oye vampu ji its part 11
awesum
lov it
lol mis each other
bhaiya always scold riya
wow!
love it
cute n sweet gestures of ariya
grt wrk dear..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update vampu... lvld each bite..
lvld present n past..!!'
arjun was lost in riya's thought..!!
lolll rathor scolding ...arjunn..!!!'
ye ayesha ka ...!!!!
kya chaker hai,..,!!!
why she is taking so much interest in arjun..!!''
cutting chai na riya ke yaad dila de..!!!
He feel her on phone..!!'
that was my fave scence..!!!
wgen she closing her
eyes...!!!!!!
n arjun r very near
to her..!!!
she think it was only her dreams poor girls...!!!!
Riya's outbrust was awesome...!!!!!
Update soon n dont take so much time...!!!!
PS:-update ice vali story plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...lovely update!
great reading this after so long...thanks for the pm...do continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
*knock*knock*
surprise..
Itni jaldi dekh ke shocked mat ho jao..
I too missed this piece of mine..
So here is the next part
*...*...*


PART-12 ..(thnx to fatima di and didu , me bhullakad]

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Riya entered in side the hotel and the hotel members's dirty eye fell on her. She felt disgust. But also she have to prove arjun..

So she asked the manager about the old coustmer. The manager first denied to answer as he was passing dirty looks to her. Then she showed her ID card and that angered the mamager. He first holds her hand, which she replied with a punch on his face.
He got ever angrier, at the same time other memberes of the hotel came forward to attack her.
One man came towards her and touched her face and she kicked him, she used her martial art.
She throws a vase from nearby table and another man came forward. Both the men holds her hand. And the 3rd man came forward with evil smile. She strugguled to free, but the grip is very tight. She fliped up and kicked on the face of the man infront of her. But still she needs support/help.
She killed one man who was trying to hit her..
Her hands are not shaking or shivering anymore. Thanks to her chief's training. She can protect herself. And its the hardwork of both of them. She owed her chief, ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod. The best mentor ever.
And how could she forget arjun, he is also her strength and her weakness more.

And now she felt weak, she needs her team, she needs him.
She saw one man coming towards her with a knife in his hand. She couldn't do anything.her gun is lying on the floor. But she is not scared at the same time. She closed her eyes.
That man is about to stab her, but she heard a gunshot and found that man lying dead. And then her eye fell on him. Yes he is here, for her. To protect her.
''arjun sir.. Yaha''- one word escaped from her mouth. But she also remembers her words, she have show him , what she is??

She ignored him, and that angered him a lot. He is here , for her breaking all the rules of traffic running for his lifes sake and she is ignoring him. What the!!! But at the same time these street dogs need a lesson for hurting his girl as well , he thought.
My girl.. What ever .. Now these dogs. He kicked one goon, but a hand holds him back.
He looked at the person and it is none other than rathod.
Rathod- raute chodo usse..
Arjun- kya keh rahe ho rathod?
Rathod- wahi jo tum sun rahe ho.. Chodo usse. Riya will hadle him.
Arjun left the man, not because he obeyed his order, because he heard the unexpected thing from his chief's mouth. He could see the pride, and the strong belief in his eyes for riya. And he looked at riya, who is busy in fighting.
Arjun was confused. Rathod saw a person, who was following riya, and is about to shot riya, but he is quick enough to stop him.
Rathod hold his collar, - piche se waar karke kamse kam mardangi ko toh badnam mat karo..
He said as he shot him dead .

After all the action and chase, she bent on her knees panting heavily, and she could see two pair of eyes looking at her. One with counfusion and anothe with pride. She passed a smile to his chief, to which he responed with a smirk which irritated him a lot. Acp arjun ke haton se kuch chut gaya..

Arjun rushed towards riya and supported her to get up. But riya ignored him and tried herself to get up.
She got up and moved towards the counter where the manager was. But not anymore alive now. She picked up the register and comes out of the hotel. Where arjun and rathod was waiting for her.
Rathod passed a smile confusing him more. Riya was enjoying his uneasiness.
Arjun took the driving sit, and thought she will come and will took the front seat but , unpredictable this girl is!! She left in her SUV and that to with rathod. He is now like a hot lava. He hits the stearing with his hand which cause pain later. So her silentely took the root towards ETF office.

But he was very scared when he heard that she is going to that hotel.

Flashback-

arjun was cursing himself for hurting her one more time. He is about to enter in his cabin, when he heard her voice. She was on the phone talking with shree.
She asked- shree , tumhari madat chahiye... Sharda hotel, kuch bata sakte ho..
Shree typed the name and he gave her the address.
By the time chotu entered and she cut the call.
Chotu- kise baat kar rahe the..
Shree- riya se aur kise!
Ayesha- kyun!! Wo kis ke bare mai puch rahi thi.
Shree- sharda hotel ke bare mai..
Ayesha- usse kaise pata chala,, ye toh iss case se related hai..
Shree- ayesha she is the best research speacialist.
Ayesha nodded her head. Shree could see the horrified expression of chotu's face.
Shree- chotu tere sakal ke bara kyun baje hue hain?
Chotu- bara toh abhi bajne wale hain!
Shree- matlab!
Chotu- wo sharda hotel toh gundon ka adda hai...kafi dangerous hai..
Shree- toh..
Chotu- tohh..
Shree- shitt..
Riyyaaa..
Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here is arjun is not much in better condition. He is very scared. He aksed shree for the address.
Shree- sir aap..
Arjun- shree mujhe wo address do.. Abhi.. Samjhe ya samjhaun?
Shree is scared to see this side of his. But one thing he knows that he couldn't see riya in danger. Shree gave him the address and he rushed out of the room, like a maniac. He couldn't lose her again,. He only kept himself away from her, only because of her. He wanted to protect in all senses. But he is putting her in more danger, in this way. But still he never realised this.

He pulled the break of his SUV infront of the hotle and finally he saw her fighting with that man.
His heart was beating heavily, as it would stop beating if somthing will happen to her. She pulled the trigger of his gun and shot the man. He sighed as he found her safe. How badly he wanted to embrace her in a hug, as if never let her go, but her one look and it shattered his heart again.
He couldn't afford this hurt anymore.

Flashback end-


he pulled the break infront of the office, as he rushed inside.

In the conf room
arjun was searching for her but she was not there.
He asked shree- riya kahan hai shree???
Shree fumbled with his anwser..
A..wo.a.ba. Riya yaha nahi aayi..
Arjun- damn IT ..ab kahan gayi?? Aur rathod??
He knows that riya came with rathod.
Shree- wo toh apne cabin..
Arjun- what??
Shree- kyun ?kya hua?
Arjun none of ur buisness.

Shree felt his behaviour very odd. And ayesha, chotu are also confused.

At the same time they heard-'' may I come in sir??''.
And he turned. There she is!! But she looking like a volcano ready to blast.

So he lowered his gaze as he remembered his talk with her in store room... And not forgetting the kick to the bottle.

Shree- ree, tujhe yaha aane ke liya kabse permission chahiye??
Riya- I am not a part of ETF ,Mr.Shreekant Sen.
And the shocked everyone as well as ayesha.
It was the first time that, she is meeting with her, but its more like two fier crackers in one room. One riya, second ayesha.
''come in Miss .Riya mukharjee.-'' said her chief, as she entered the room. Everyone looked at the duo, and they are hell confused with their behaviour.

She walked in, and saluted rathod and then walked towards arjun. She holds his hand and placed the file on his hand. And signalled him to look at the watch. Its perfet time. And yes she proved herself. Arjun could see a winning smile on her face, as he never forget her words, '' aurat ke kabiliat pe kabi shak nahi karna chahiye..''

he glanced at file and goes throus the pages, and he is satisfied with the reports.

Rathod ordered them to take seat for the case discussion. She also took her seat, but this time she took the seat near by rathod, and another side shree where arjun was opposite to her facing her.

They were discussing about the case when shree's pen fell down and shouted in shock.
'' uribaba'' ree.. Ye khun..
All of them looked at her direction, while she passed a confused look.
Shree grabs her arm..
''oouuchhh'. Shrreee ...
She screamed in pain..
Arjun too noticed this. Now this is limit. He couldn't control himself and rushed to her side.
He colud see the blood drops on the floor...

He forcefully holds her one arm and dragged her towards his cabin. Everyone followed him.
Rathod- raute chodo usse , kya kar rahe ho??
Arjun gave a look to him and slammed the door on his face, and he was taken aback, as the team was in shock as well.
He dragged her inside, but she pushed him from her..
'' sir aap kya kar rahe hain?? ''.
She shouted on top of her voice, while he tried to calm her. He walked towards her, as she took back step. He could feel her hot breaths, as her heart is beating loudly.
'' riya you are hurt.!!''- he said.
Riya - toh kya? Aapko kya?
Mujhe kisi ki sahara nahi chahiye?
Arjun- sahara nahi saath de raha hoon..
Riya remembered those words are said by her.
She questioned him back- kyun???
Arjun- jabab tum khud ho riya? Abhi bhi kuch sawal baki hai?
He said in a calm voice. And hse calmed down completely.
He made her sit on the couch.
He took out the first-aid box. And looked at her. But she seemed lost some where.
She was wearing a black full sleev shirt. So he couldn't notice her blood.

He first thought, what would he do? Then he sat on the couch by her side making her comes out of her cains of thoughts.

She turned her head to look at the person, infront of her. And again she felt him like a stranger. She see the care in his eyes for her.
Arjun eyed her to look at her hand.
Then she looked at her wounder hand which he was holding.
He told her, '' riya wo tumhari shirt''..


Pre-
Special treatment by acp raute. And also . '' laparwahi ki bhi hadd hoyi hai riya.
''


sorry guys. Its not as per the precap. But i will make up with it for sure. Trust me.
And plss, juste mat marna..


Pehele hi bahaut kah chuki hoon.
And mishti ab naraz mat hona plss..


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Thank u.
~vq❤️
Edited by Vampire-queen - 12 years ago

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