Ariya SS: You're the one I desire..NOTE Pg. 23

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Prakrithy

@Arya1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Woah.
Woman what aretyou trying do to me?!
You should've put up an advisory "Cold water must be kept within arm's reach."
So hottt!!!!!

And. Cliffhangers..I share a love-hate relationship with them.

So. Where were we?
Whaat the hell are Shree, Chotu and Ayiesha up to?
Aur...Uss letter mein hai kya?
Is Rathore in on their plan too?
And what happened the night of the party????

God. So many questions.
Atleast ai know your writing hasn't mad me lose my ability to think.

So.
DEFINITELY looking forward to your next update.
And. DESPERATELY hoping it's soon.

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samiya.059

@samiya.059

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Is it only me who is reading it again n again...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: samiya.059
Is it only me who is reading it again n again...

hey you are not the only one i read it when she posted it for the first time and now i read it again to comment on it and now i am going to read it again 😆

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Di 🤗
Title 🥳
Jo behne bbs nhi thi wo bi ho jaengi 🤣
Omg!!!
after watching bet scene in epi
nw quite easy to imagine ayesha masti wid shreetu..
haila itna hot n romantic..
after waking up frm my fainting sessions
i took quick chiled shower to calm myself down..
hayee me blush n grin hard
di ye kiya apne!!!!!!!!
loved it
claps!!
pls meri request bi jaldi se fulfil kr do pls pls
love u di
tc..!!

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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grad2011

@grad2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

really nice plzz do update soon!!!

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NeethuEli

@NeethuEli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

That was too superb. My heart was during marathons the whole time I was reading th update. (Imagine blushing near parents.) The part was tooo good! Why did you have to stop it?????

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

OH my gosh ...i am almost blushing ...believe me it takes a lot to make me blush ...total dhamaka

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jumbo_dumbo

@jumbo_dumbo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

My heart started beating erractically when i was reading ur update.. N still is beating in the same way.. God!!!! What r u upto???? U shouldnt put in cliffhangers... They r bad,, Damn bad..

The tittle is so apt for the story...

The way u described Arjun's feeling is so realistic..

What are those three musketeers upto???

Does rathod know abt the plan??

What was written in the letter??

Gosh.. So many questions...

Update soon.. Please...

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

SO lye I dont follow the show AT ALL. I onli knew ARjun was a sort of a detective crime thriller. I did not noe the background nor did I know the lady love was named 'Riya'. BUT I am hooked already! Bring it on... I am soo waiting for more!

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Naveen Arshad

@xaviara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Usually I am a silent reader, but I could not resist commenting here, because I was absolutely dying to read your work on Ariya because for me no one writes Ariya and the relationship they share, the way you do !! Hats off to you !! :) I was really craving Ariya because have been missing them so damn much ! Ur work on them is my only way to feed my Ariya addiction !!

Coming to this SS !! Needless to say, what an amazing start !! I swear while reading the first part, I was going through the same emotions Riya must have been feeling ! Even my heart was racing madly, because I could actually imagine the entire scene so vividly !! Can't wait for the next update, really wanna see what are the next dhamakay's the ETF gang has planned for Ariya !! Lol !!! ;)

PS. I know am being really greedy, but when are you updating SYTPH next ?

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