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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey sumaya...
first bada waala sorry...
i could not keep my promise... i am soo late... padhke batao ki kaisa hai...
sorry once again dear...
and you will keep the name for this story😊😊😊😊


It was a romantic, rainy evening...

He sat there, sipping his cutting chai...


"ye lijiye...garama garam pakode... dhyaan se... jal jayega..."

"tum bhi aao na sumaya...main akela bore ho raha hun..."

"Arjun mujhe thoda kaam hai... bas 10 min..."

"pakka?"

"pakka"

"sochlo...agar 10 min mein you are not here then I ll get my way...den don't blame me ki maine sam aur Aisha ke saamne ye kiya wo kiya... samjhi ya samjhau???"

"samajh gayi ji... aap baitho... main yun gayi aur yun aayi..."


After 10 min...sumaya wasn't out of kitchen. She was very busy with Aisha helping her making cake...


"ab to main isse chodunga nahin... hamesha aise hi karti hai... aaj nahin chodunga..."


Saying so, Arjun directly went to kitchen and lifted his wife in his arms. To say Aisha was shocked was understatement. Arjun threw sumaya over his shoulders and walked out to backyard.


Sameer saw this from hall and smirked.

"ab to sumaya gayi... Aisha don't expect her back any time soon..."

"I know sameer..."

They both share a healthy laugh...


Backyard.

Arjun directly took her out in rain and swirled her round...

"Arjun, hume neeche utariye...abhi..."

"kyun jaan... kaha than a maine ki late mat hona..."

"Arjun please..."

"accha thik hai..."


He saw her, all wet due to rain...water drops falling on her wetting her clothes, water dripping from her hair...


She looked...umm...tempting to him...

He saw her lips quiver due to cold...

He went and hugged her tight, shielding her from rain... he bent his head and claimed her lips...after good couple of min they came up for air... Arjun rested his forehead against her's and whispered...


"I love you sumaya..."

"I love you too Arjun..."


He immediately lifted her in his arms and took her to their room and locked the door...


Down in hall

"aisha, shayad bohut jald hi humaare bete ke saath kelne koi aane waala hai..."

"haan... dekh ke to yahin lagta hai sameer..."



kaisa tha??? accha laga to acche comments and likes karo...
accha na laga to bhi comments karo ki main kahan chuki and how i should improve...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Hahahaha...
Super awesome...

Sumaya kahan hai...plzzz comment...
Apke comment k intezar m hu...

Pari...last line was super hilarious...

Ab to bas Sumaya hi bata sakti h ki kya kya hua locked door k andar...

But really...maan na padega arjun ko...banda jo kahta h wahi karta hai .. Lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Saumya kahan hain

i agree wid BB /...me also waitng for Saumya's comment

awesum work


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweet n cute love story hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dear what n os
love it more if u can convert it into ss
n abt ajun just wanna say banda yeh bindaas hai
hey dear ru talking abt me means sumaya or saumya confused
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
pariii!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luv u luvm u luv u.
awsum threesum
PARISUUM.

DIL KHUSH KARDIYA MERA TUMNE,
WWWOOW!!!!!!!

ummm...
naam rakhdo...
'BARSAAT ME PYAAR KI BAHAAR'

Pari, agr tujhe naam pasand na aaya ho mtu hi kuch rakhde,
wese bhi tune mujhe kuch soch ne k Kabil nhi chora, :P
seriously I LOVED IT.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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@ Mrs. Ankita Rathor

]😛😊[😳🥱

🤣
ANKI...
lo kar diya comnt
wese tere sam se zara keh dey ki ummm😳
koi khelne waale k aane mei bohot dayr hone ko hai.


mai to lal gulaabi ho gayi.
Edited by Sumu4JayD - 12 years ago

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