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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

ok here it goes...I already many things about you...so tough to ask qns to u...anyways, will give a small one... [you are right dear!!! you know me well...than many others]
1) Why is ur name kunchu in this forum?? its my nickname at home. so used it...
2) If you get the opportunity to become a character of a FF in this forum, which one would it be? REVA... honestly I would love to be the PRESENT Reva...
3) What is that one moment which you regret the most in life? the day I saw something terrible in my life... too personal Chechi.. cant say it loud... wished I was never born to see that day...
4) which was the most embarrassing moment of ur life? (you know it Chechi..) the day that I got some comments!!!
5) One film which you would never get bored of : Yodha, Mohobathein, Lord of the rings, Walk to remember...
6) If given a chance to meet me, will you take it up...[you dont have to be diplomatic...i am mature enough to hear the truth...I am sensible and not sensitive, ok?] wont be diplomatic at all... I would loe to meet you some day and also your kids too...
7) my challenge for u...write a OS in max 300 words...Make Arjun propose to Aisha before the entire ETF team surprising them or rather shocking them! ok, will do it soon... 3 OS pending... so please give me some time... its actually something I'm really looking forward to do...
[I know i am being naughty here and trapping u...but thats the challenge na? so go on...am waiting!] my naughty Chechi... I'm ready for your challenge...


thanks dear!! hope that was good enough!!😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Piyarani

Congr8888
helu i knew it...
ab to sonchana us baare main..
its a double party time...
lv u dr...


thanks dear!!
wil think about it
so you will be in my Queue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
thanks Kunchu...I knew many of the answers while i asked the qns...
anyways...nice knowing many new things too!

so enjoy the time here and also writing the OSs...Waiting for it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Di me back lolz
philosphical ques lol
1. life mean to u
2. frndship mean to u
3. care mean to u
4. love mean to u
5. if a day wid me where would u like to go ??
6. relationship mean to to u
7. ur dream man
8. one thing u want to change in me
9. advice fr me
10. hws it lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
ARE BAAP RE... AGAIN!!!
OK PHILOSPHICAL HUH??
OK... LEMME SEE...

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Di me back lolz
philosphical ques lol
1. life mean to u : ek aise safar jo akele katna boho mushkil hai!!!
2. frndship mean to u : jeene ke sahara, umr bhar ko hai nibhana...
3. care mean to u : jo maa ke aanchal me ho... jo baap ke saye me ho.. jo bhai ke bathon me ho.. jo ek humsafar ke ankhon me ho...
4. love mean to u: ek aisa ehsaas... jo dil se shuru ho aur ankhon me jhalakthe ho...
5. if a day wid me where would u like to go ?? apke ghar, want to taste the food made by you...
6. relationship mean to to u : rishta, zindagi ke buniyad. jab kisi pal me mile tho hamesha rahe...
7. ur dream man: mere tharah fit honi chahiye..😆.. mein jaise hu, waise apnaye.. jo mujhse bohot pyaar kare aur mere viswas kabhi na thode...
8. one thing u want to change in me : apke ruutna...
9. advice fr me : aise khush raho, aur kabhi mujhe math bhoolna...
10. hws it lol :superb


kaise lagi meri philosophy??
Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Haye di dil jeet liye aapne
too gud hmm..
love u di
tc..
p.s. if my devil mind wrk again be ready rofl..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Haye di dil jeet liye aapne
too gud hmm..
love u di
tc..
p.s. if my devil mind wrk again be ready rofl..


AGAIN?? OMG...
LEGTHA HAI KE VIDYA'S DEVIL IS WITH YOU NOW A DAYS!!!😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: kunchu



AGAIN?? OMG...
LEGTHA HAI KE VIDYA'S DEVIL IS WITH YOU NOW A DAYS!!!😆😆😆


Yup di rofl...
me pakka wapis aaongi pura week h abi
2nd day lol today
evil laugh
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Here goes my next challenge di evil grin..
arjun n shree r bro
arjun knws shree love a girl bt afraid of parents!!!
hw do arjun help shree
its upto u nw ...
u want to write in emotional or comedy maner!
hope u lyk it..



your next challenge...
now 3 more OS pending... will give all soon!! I promise...

Arjun was pissed off. He was walking up and down in his room. "ya mom samajthe kya hai?? agar meine na kaha, tho uske matlab na hi hoge right?? Tho fir ithne zid kyu kar rahe hai?? aur fir wo dialog… ke, Arjun zid math karo beta…. I'm fed up of all this… (he turns around) ab tu aise chup kyu hai??? bhai kehthe ho apne aap ko. Bada acha farz nibha rahe ho!! help me yaar!!!"

Shree smiles at him and gets up from Arjun's bed. He walks towards his big brother and places a hand on his shoulder. "Chill brother… aap aise tension lerahe ho, jaise aapke shadi kal hone wale hai!! ma aur papa ne uss ladki ko dekliya, pasand kiya. Ab wo sirf ye chahthe hai ke aap ek bar usse milo. Baath karo. Simple. Isme tension kyu lerahe ho??"

Arj: Shree, they actually liked the girl. So obviously they expect me to like her too. I'm not ready for a marriage now.

Sre: its ok brother relax. Aap tho janthe hai ke apke marzi ke bina papa kuch nahi karege. So just relax. Jao jaake change karke aao. Wo apko uss mall ke food court me wait kar rahe hoge. Now be a good boy.

Arj: what?? Tum bhi yahi chahthe ho?

Sre: are bhai agar apko shadi nahi karne hai then its ok, aap bas usse ek bar milo, say the matter to her. Else milne ke baad aap papa se kehdo ke aapko uss ladki pasand nahi hai. case closed. Now go na…

Arj: ok. But ek shart pe. You will come with me. Agar nahi aoge tho mien bhi nahi jaunga.

Sre: ok.. I'll come. Now go and change.

Arjun goes to the washroom, while Sree sits on the bed exhausted and smiles to himself. ACP Arjun Rawte worried to meet a girl?? WOW…

After a while they reach the mall's food court. They look around.

Arj: red top, black jeans. Ab ithne bade mall me kithne log aise kapde pehne hoge. Ab usse kaise dhoondu…

They look around and then…

Arj: that may be her.

He points a girl who was sitting facing their side, though she haven't seen them. Sree's heart skips a beat. "Misha.." a low whisper comes in his lips.

Arj: kuch kaha tumne??

Sre: ha… nahi… are you sure… ye wahi ladki hai..

Arj: yaha aur koi red top and black jeans wali nahi hai… chalo milthe hai…

Sre: bhai… wo… aap aage chaliye.. mien… mien abhi aya…

Arj: but you said…

Sre: bhai please its urgent… please…

Before Arjun could say anything, he rushes away. "ab isse kya hua?" he takes a deep breath and walks to her. "excuse me…( she looks up. She had a bit gloomy face)Misha Agarwal?? (she nods yes) hi, Arjun Rawte…"

She gets up to greet him.

Arj: please sit down.

They sit down facing each other.

Sree had moved away from them and was hiding behind a pillar. He felt a pain in his heart. "So Misha bhai ke bare me batha rahi thi.. oh God ab kya karu??" he felt moist in his eyes.

He peeped at them. Misha was facing his side, while Arjun the opposite side. She had a smile but it didn't reach the eyes.

Sree turned away. "agar bhai ko pasand aya tho… tho kuch nahi Sree, anything for him… unke khushi hi sabse badi hai!!"

Flashback:

Misha: Sree mujhe dekhne koi policewale ke parents aarahe hai. I swear, mien usse shadi nahi karungi. I love you sree, I cant marry anyone else.

Sre: I know meri jaan. Don't worry kuch nahi hoga.

After the parents went away, she called him again. "wo bohot ache parents hai Sree, I think they like me. Ab mien kya karu? Shayad uske beta mujhse milne ayege. I really don't know what to do"

Sre: I am also confused dear. I am thinking to speak about the matter to bhai. Akhir wo hi mujhe samajthe hai. will call you soon.

Flashback ends.

He couldn't speak to Arjun as Arjun was himself tensed. So he waited for a while. and it reached this moment.

He looked at them again. Misha was smiling happily now. And he could guess Arjun was happy too. Sree was happy for Arjun. but felt a bit sad too.

He felt a hand on his shoulder.

Arj: are tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Sre: wo mien.. phone… kya hua? Baath kiya??

Arj: ha… and she went too. Aur ab hame jaldi ghar pohonchna hai!!

Sre: kyu??

Arj: ghar pe patha chalega.

They reached home. The parents were eagerly waiting for them. Arjun's happy face gave them relief.

Mom: beta kya hua? Baath kiya? Kaise hai wo?

Arj: she is really good mom. Apke choice bohot ache hai.

Sree was feeling terrible but gave a small weak smile to Arjun.

Arj: aap uske family se baath kijiye. Ke hamare ghar se rishta keliya 'ha' hai… magar…

Papa: magar kya??

Arj: wo rishta mere naam ke nahi….(turning to Sree) balke chote ke naam me hai…

Papa: kya? Ye kaise mazak hai Arjun??

Sree is in a shock state now, with eyes wide open.

Arj: mazak nahi hai dad.

He turns to sree and holds his shoulder. "tumhe kya laga ke meine kuch notice nahi kiya? I heard you taking her name. usse dekhkar tumar ramg uthar gaye the… aur fir achanak chup gaye.. aur jab hum bathein kar rahe the, tho uss pillar ke piche se dekh rahe the. I couldn't see you directly. But there was a mirror right in front of me and I saw you there. Tumhe aur tumhare ankhon ke nami bhi. Are budhu, mere liya apne pyaar ko kaise bhoolne ke koshish kiya tumne?? I asked her. To be honest, she is braver than you. She told me everything. Aur mujhe koi problem nahi hai. she is a good girl aur mom-dad ko bhi pasand hai."

He turns to his dad and continues. "dad, please in dono ke shaadi karwao"

Sree looks at his dad. He looked angry and was walking towards him. "Sree, kya ye sab sach hai??"

Arjun saw Sree was really frightened.so thought of speaking for him. "Dad… wo…"

His dad raises a finger and silences Arjun. "I am talking to you Sree. Do you like her?"

Shree lowers his head and say a slight yes.

Dad: suna nahi… zor se bolo? You love her??

Sree looks at his dad with moist eyes. "yes dad, I love her…"

He saw his dad raising his hands. He knew a tight slap was on its way. so he closes his eyes. But he was shocked to feel a hug. "are budhu, tho pehle kyu nahi bathaya? Mien there dad hu, koi hitler nahi. If you like her, its fine. ab hum tumhare rishta leke jayege. They will understand."

Sree hugs his father and cries. Mom hugs Arjun sideways and place her head on his chest. And then Sree hugs Arjun. "thanks bhai. Thanks a lot…"

Arj: its ok chote… after all I'm your bhai right??

Mom: wow, Misha ab iss ghar ke bahu banegi. Ab mujhe ek aur bahu dhundni hai!!

Arj: mom… please give it a rest.

Sre: mom, aap fikar math kijiye. Bhai keliye ek ladki mien dhund lugi.. bilkul unke type ke. Ab aap fikar math karo…

Dad: ha, ab tum wo kaam zaroor karoge. Kyunki jab thak Arjun ke shadi nahi hoge, thab thak tumhare bhi nahi hoge. Koi baath nahi, is bahane tum kuch tho karoge, wo bhi pure dil se…

Sre: (whispers to Arjun's ears) dad ne teekh kaha hai. ab mere gadi track me le ane keliye, apko ek gadi dhundne hoge… hai kya kismath hai mera??

Arj: Shree ke bache… abhi dikahtha hu tumhe…

Arjun starts running behind Sree and the parents stands there, watching them amused.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank u so much di..
again fr fulfiling d chalenge...
u prove again dat u r best at emotions
loved it
feel lyk watching it
grt di
love u
tc
hugs di..

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