OS: Mera Jeevan Kora Kagaaz - Page 3

Superb os!!
Poor girl.. Had to go through so much just bcz she loved Arjun!! :'(
Even chotu nd shree were accusing her?! :(
Do write a sequel!
Im waiting!!

Originally posted by: ..Sneha..

It is superb!!
Poor girl.. Had to go through so much just bcz she loved Arjun!! :'(
Even chotu nd shree were accusing her?! :(
Do write a sequel!
Im waiting!!

thanks,Sneha.
Planned to write the sequel ,as well.

Originally posted by: princess_pari

zebbie... ye kya tha???? mujhe rulane ka thaan rakha hai kya?😭😭😭???
sooper work dea...😊

sorry,dear.
Thanks for liking it.
Planned to write a sequel for it.

Emontional update yar... i cried while reading this... Poor Riya... hw cn dese ppl behav lik this evn Shree nd Chotu... update soon...

emotional update .. beautifully written poor riya

😭

ye parhke ek shayari yaad ayi, yuh kahu k humne ye khud hi likha hai... Suniyega zara,
Arz kia hai...

YU KAHU K DARD MOHABBAT KI PARCHAYI HAI,
YA PHIR IS GHAM MEI HUMARI BHALAI HAI...
YAARON KI MEHFIL MEI TANHAI NA SATAYE...
PAR JAB TANHA HO DIL, KOI YAAR NA AAYE...
BANANE CHALE THE HUM APNI PEHCHAN MAGAR BHOOL GAYE K HAI HUM KHUD SE HI ANJAAN...
HUM TO SIRF VEERAN ZINDAGI MEI KHUSHIYA BHARNI CHAHI,
PAR AAP KO YE ISHQ HUMARI SAMAJH MEI NA AAYI.
______
KHAMOSHI YE HUMARI NA SAMJHIYEGA KAMZORI...
YE TO KHWAHISH HAI HUMARI NA KOI MAJBOORI.
______
DIL JO LAGAYA HAI JURMANA BHI BHARENGE.
KYA SOCHTE HAI AAPSE AB AUR MOHABBAT NA KARENGE...
YE GHALAT FEHMI NA RAKHIYE JANAM...
AAP TO BAS HUMARE HAI, HUMARE HI SANAM...
________

ek chota sa attempt tha bt zebu myndblowng behen... Ye dard mujhe bohot bhaa gayi... Aansu aye aur gussa bhi.. Bohot khub...
i luvd it.
(Hw was my poem?)

superb os yr...
very emotional... :'(
beautifully written...
poor riya... everybody is insulting her just because she fell in love with arjun... :(
how could they insult her...

Originally posted by: sumuZAMAN

ye parhke ek shayari yaad ayi, yuh kahu k humne ye khud hi likha hai... Suniyega zara,
Arz kia hai...

YU KAHU K DARD MOHABBAT KI PARCHAYI HAI,
YA PHIR IS GHAM MEI HUMARI BHALAI HAI...
YAARON KI MEHFIL MEI TANHAI NA SATAYE...
PAR JAB TANHA HO DIL, KOI YAAR NA AAYE...
BANANE CHALE THE HUM APNI PEHCHAN MAGAR BHOOL GAYE K HAI HUM KHUD SE HI ANJAAN...
HUM TO SIRF VEERAN ZINDAGI MEI KHUSHIYA BHARNI CHAHI,
PAR AAP KO YE ISHQ HUMARI SAMAJH MEI NA AAYI.
______
KHAMOSHI YE HUMARI NA SAMJHIYEGA KAMZORI...
YE TO KHWAHISH HAI HUMARI NA KOI MAJBOORI.
______
DIL JO LAGAYA HAI JURMANA BHI BHARENGE.
KYA SOCHTE HAI AAPSE AB AUR MOHABBAT NA KARENGE...
YE GHALAT FEHMI NA RAKHIYE JANAM...
AAP TO BAS HUMARE HAI, HUMARE HI SANAM...
________

ek chota sa attempt tha bt zebu myndblowng behen... Ye dard mujhe bohot bhaa gayi... Aansu aye aur gussa bhi.. Bohot khub...
i luvd it.
(Hw was my poem?)

thank u,my love...
I also loved ur poem a lot.
Ur poem described my story in short.
Poem was indeed very heart touching.
I loved it.