os: beete lamhein

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this is an emotional story about Arni...this is on request by payal di...
the song used here is beeti lamhe from Train...
hope all those who read,like it...


There she sat in a dimly lit starry night…it was her sanctuary… the canopy which he had got done especially for her…. Only for her…and him…..for them….

It was their fourth marriage anniversary…

She saw the canopy with green creepers…. Around which she, with his help had laid number of rose plants….roses….symbol of love. Their love….

dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai
Beete Lamhein……….

*flashback*

"excuse me mister… I have ordered them first. How dare you take it?"

"o I am soo sorry misss….."

"Roshni… Roshni Rathod.. o wait aren't you ACP Arjun… Sammy's friend?"

"yeah I am ACP Arjun suryakant raute…. And if I am not wrong you are speaking about ACP Sameer Rathod….. and I guess you must be roshni…. His younger sister from London!!"

"yap…absolutely right…. but I am angry. Why did you take those roses? They were not ordered by you but me….for my brother…."

"I was here to buy them for your brother aswell"

"what??? Red roses for my brother…. Look ACP…. You are getting him wrong…. He is absolutely perfect gentleman….."

"What the…. Madam….. even I am a perfect MAN….and these flowers were asked by your GENTLEMAN bro to give to his GF….."

*flashback ends*

dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai
Beete Lamhein……….

That was their first MULAKAAT……she smiled…….

She recalled how frequently they met afterwards…. Soon they were good friends…really good friends…. Kab dosti pyaar mein badla, usse khud nahin pata tha…..

Chand Lamhaaat Ke Waaste Hi Sahi
Muskuraakar Mili Thi Mujhe Jindagi
Teri Aaghosh Mein Din The Mere Kate

It was about 7 months after their first meeting at the flower shop, Arjun proposed her…it was valentine's day….

*flashback*

" Arjun…. ARRRJUUNNN………. Aaj kya special hai bolo na????..."

" kya hua roshni…. Aaj kya special hai? Bus 14th feb hi to hai? Na aaj tumhara na mera bday hai…."

"uff….unromantic kahika…. Ye kabhi nahin sudhrega…"

"roshni mujhe aaj sunset dekhna ka bahut mann hai…. Chalo beach chalte hai…"

They had been there many times… but that day was special…

"she stood on the water barrier, held arjun's hand and walked few pases slowly..

Arjun pulled her down and held her hand.

"roshni…. You might be thinking main kitna unromantic hoon right… nahin roshni.. main darta hun kahin main tumhe bhi na kho du…just like I lost my parents…. But ab aur tumse door nahin raha jaata…I love you roshni… will you make me complete? Will you marry me? Will you be grand mom of OUR grandchildren???

"yes Arjun…. I wanted this happen to me….. yes yes yes……"

Soon they were married and had a blissful life….

*flashback ends*

Teri Baahon Mein Thi Meri Raate Kati
Aaj Bhi Jab Woh Pal Mujhko Yaad Aate Hai
Dil Se Saare Gamon Ko Bhula Jaate Hai

" roshni I don't believe ki main papa banne waala hun….. O My God….. I am sooo happy…."

dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai
Beete Lamhein……….

"Yaad hai Arjun….kaise tum mere kaaandhe pe sir rakhke sa jaate the…. You would be sooo tired ki sofa se uthke jaane tak ki energy nahin hoti thi…*chukles*

Aaj bhi mujhe yaad hai kaise tum mere seene main apna chehra chupate the jab bhi emotional ho jaate the the…. I knew you missed your parents….. but I was helpless.. I could not bring them back……you always seeked solace in me Arjun….. phir aisa kya hogaya ki tum mujhe hamesha ke liye chodke chale gaye??? Tumhe mere godi me sar rakhke sone se man bhar gaya…. Kyun mujhe aur humare bete ko akela chod ke apne parents ke paas chale gaye Arjun kyun?????"

*sob**sob*

mere Kaandhe Pe Sir Ko Jhukaana Tera
Mere Sine Mein Khud Ko Chhupaana Tera
Aake Meri Panaahon Mein Shaamo Sehar

*flashback*

"please sikander…. Usse kuch mat karo…..i beg you sikander….."

"kyun roshni? Kyun karti ho uss insaan se itna pyaar? Kya hai usme jo mujhme nahin hai????"

There he was her love….tied to a hanging tool…..badly beated…his legs in air…..below his foot was fire…raging fire… she sat there, clutching her pregnant belly, as if protecting her unborn….

"Arjun wo insaan hai jo tum kabhi nahin ban sakte sikander…. Wo insaan ko ehmiyat dete hai, tumhari tarah paison ko nahin…. Main unhe isliye pyaar nahin karti ki unke paas paise hai….balki isliye ki woe k saccha insaan hai…."

"accha…. Ab dekho main tumhare iss sacche pyaar ke saath kya karta hun…"

Sikander slowly went to Arjun drawing knife… he stabbed him in his ribs….twisted it very badly…allowed trail of blood to flow…. He saw the pain reflected in him…. "ye mujhse meri roshni ko cheen ne ke liye…"

"dekha roshni, agar tum iss ACP se pyaar nahin karti to ise aaj dard sehna nahin padta…. Bechara…"

Then he made fire rise up a new level… it now almost touched Arjun's feet…. He tried to pull his legs up…. He wanted to live… for himself, for his roshni….for their baby……

He felt sharp pain shoot up in his abdomen…. He saw down and saw a vile creature named sikander had stabbed him again and was now twisting the knife." Sika….ander…. chahe tu mera kuch bhi kar… nahin hi main roshni se pyaar karna chodungs, na wo mujhse pyaar karna chodegi….." another pain shot up in his abdomen. Again and again. He groaned in pain…. The pain continued till he breathed his last breath…his parting words were just,'rosh……ni……i…la………..'

*flashback ends*

"ARRRJJJUUUNNN………………………."

Suddenly a loud cry broke her trance… she saw her little boy of 2 crying badly…. She picked him up and made him sleep again, cradling him against her chest. It was ansh….their kid… arjun's ansh…. He was born on same day when Arjun died…..thanks to her brother that they could atleast save him.

she spoke looking at sky...

"happy anniversary arjun... i miss you... main tumhare paas aana chahti hun...par ansh... humara ansh... main usse chodke nahin aa sakti na... but i promise...jaise hi mera yahan kaam khatm hoga i ll come to you... i love you arjun...i love a lot"

*sob*sob*


Kaanch Ki Tarah Woh Toot Jaana Tera
Aaj Bhi Jab Woh Manjar Nazar Aate Hai
Dil Ki Viraaniyo Ko Mita Jaate Hai
dard Mein Bhi Yeh Lab Muskura Jaate Hai
Beete Lamhein Hamein Jab Bhi Yaad Aate Hai
Dard Mein…. Beete Lamhein

The pain she had in her was too much…. Much more than she could actually bear…. She had seen her love, daredevil Arjun die infront of her…. But her son….their son, always brought her good memories she had with his dad…which amidst her pain, made her smile…..


i know its quiet big...

hope it is good... accha ho ya na ho... please do comment and lemme know...

please comment karo...

payal di...hope you like it...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb os dr...!!
very emotional...!!
you have portrayed roshni's pain very well...!!! had tears in my eyes...!!!😭
their first meeting was awsum...!!! and the proposal by arjun was lovely...!!!
ooo that sik...!!!😡 he killed arjun infront of roshni...!!!😭
glad that ansh makes her remember happy moments she spent with arjun...!!!
yayyy me first...!!!!!😳
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh...it was very emotional dear
beautifully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome yar... beautifully written... emotional OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Pari dear hugs..tightly..
love u..
thank u fr fulfiling my request so early..
beautiful
emotional
ansh wow..
rosh really a brave girl
aww arjun..
i dnt lyk infact loved it
claps
hats off!!
Moumimon thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really very very emotional yrr...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very emotional dr...
me crying...😭.😭.😭.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Payal_156

Pari dear hugs..tightly..
love u..
thank u fr fulfiling my request so early..
beautiful
emotional
ansh wow..
rosh really a brave girl
aww arjun..
i dnt lyk infact loved it
claps
hats off!!



aap ko accha laga mujhe bhi accha laga...😊
i am happy that you liked it di...

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