Ariya OS:Ek Romentic lv story(valentine's)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

brilliant update :) loved it

the kiss was so romantic ❤️

so siya is her twin sister and that day sameer prrposed siya

lets see how arjun is going to pacify her

eagerly waiting for the next part

thanks for the PM :)

continue soon

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rocking_gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

read ur story in one complete go and njyed it...wow nice concept...! Lived the twins twist...waiting for more...want to c hw Arjun clears thngs between them..

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

awesome
arjun mistook siya as riya
if he asked her immediately, the problem would be solved out
but he spoilt everything
poor ariya
let's see how ll he pacify her
cont soon

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devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

awsum update...!!!

loved it...!!!

the kiss was amazing...!!!😉😳

siya riya twin sis...!!! and arjun thought siya to be riya...!!!😲

arjun bhi na...!!! uss din sab clear leta to acha hota...!!!

precap is interesting...!!!

continue soon...!!!

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vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

WOW nice OS

twins twist was great!

cont soon!

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Gorasiya Priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

it was amazing

and yes twist is too good twins ya

if this is your first try to write os so this is for you it's not enouf

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and it's beautifully pen down

i like the relationship of shree riya and pihu

and i also like the relationship of jiju and sali (riya and sammer) it's too good dear

and why r u close it soon pls writ something about arjun marriage and their relationship

pls try to write

vary good update dear

and u pm me tnx dear

pls update soon and pm me i am eagerly waiting for your pm

Edited by 12pr - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

PART=5
Uff janta huin galti ho gaye..ab to maaf ker do..
jis aag main tum jali..mainbhi use aag main jal raha huin..
ab bahot huye galat phehami
ab to ehse
"EK ROMENTIC LV STORY" banane do

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Scence-riya angry on arjun n left that place n arjun shouted from behind...
riya rukoo plz ..plz meri baat suno..
i kno i heart u ..but..befor arjun culd explaine..riya already left..
Ar-ohh god ye maine kya ker diya..i kno i do a big mistake..kyun maine us ke pyar per trust nahi kiya..
arjun moves his hand in his hair due to fustration..
shit..!!
ab kahan gaye hogi riya..he searches riya here n there..but no sighn of her..
main last valentine's party main riya ko propose kerne vala..but all my mistake..
but not now..aaj ke party main use propose ker ke rahunga..
sudenly pihu comes there..
Pihu-uncle aap kise ko dhund rahe hai..
Ar-in sad voice..humm
Pihu-uncle mujhe pata hai aap kise dhund rahe hai
Arjun enqurily looked in her..
Pihu-aap masi ko dhund rahe hai..
Ar-how u kno..
Pihu-proudly..akhir acp sameer rathor ke baiti huin..
arjun smiles ..hum to kaphi smart ho..
arjun imediatly goes that place..
Arjun opened the door of roon n saw..
riya laying on a bed..her face covered by pillow..
may be she is crying...
riya laying opposite on a bed..due to this..arjun can easly saw her bare back..
there was only single dorry that support her blouse.
Arjun slowly comes inside
n sit near to her.
Ar-riya.
but no response stil hiding her face on pillow.
Ar-riya i kno i heart u.
but belive me maine bhi aaj tak bus tumhara he wait kiya hai .
riya meri taraf dekho na..plz..ab or nahi reh sakta tumse ek pal door..plz
arjun leand down..n kissed her back..hop she turn back but he fail arjun arjun slowly remove her hair from her back n giv many lines of kissing...
his tuch of kiss sending a

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

on her body..she tightly hold bed sheet..
arjun leand closer to her n move near to her ears..n wishper n huski voice riyaaa..
his breath hits her face..
n say one romentic poem..
(hop u like plc read by me)

"kyun tumhen es kader chahate hai..
ke tumhare na hone per bhi tumhara ehsas her pal hota hai..
kyun tumhen es kader chahte hai ke her taraf..
bus tum he najer ate ho..
teri yadain akser rula jati hai..
kyun tumhen phir se apna banana chahte hai..
kyun tumhen apne etane karib lana chahten hai..
ab jo huye galti.
use maaf ker.
tumhen phir se apna banal chahte hai."

Ar-riya will u marry me..
she culd not hold herself any more..she trun back n stood..arjun open his arms already for her..
riya hug arjun tightly..arjun encircled her in his tight arms..
Ri-how culd u do this haan.
tumhen koe idea bhi hai main kaise rahi ho tumhare bina...but kno ek baar bhi pucha nahi mujhase..or jhud ker chale gaye mujhe.
ager main kise or se marrige ker leti to..tab pata chalta..

she is stil sobbing..she hv kno idea what she says.
arjun can feel her hot tears.
Arjun culd not help but smile..he parted hug n cub her face..shhh ab ye bachhon ke tarah rona band karo..dekho kya hal bana liya hai ankhon ka.
arjun moves bit closer to her face..n kiss her both eyes.
omg etane bade bade tears..hum..bahot gusaa ho.
she nodded in positive.
ab etani badi galti ke hai to naraj to hogi.
he leand toward her both cheeks n kissed her tear..or u can say..suck her tears..again tuch of his wet kiss sending shiver in her body..she closed her eyes n tightly hold his arms.
Ar-heyy riya open ur eyes..she nodded in negtive
Ar-sonch lo..so without further thining..arjun move closer to her n hold her by her wrist more closer to him

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

more closer to his n bent down near her lips n capture her lip by her lips..
riya opens her eyes in a shock when she feel arjuns lip on her...
arjun kissed her n very soft way..but she did not respond..
she manage to wishper . arjunn..arjun took that apotunity..n picked her open lips..now his taung moving up n down in her mouth..she culd feel the warmth..she melted like a hot chocklated..
if they r not on bed..definitly she culd be fall..the intencity of kiss burning her body..
her hand sidly moves around his chest..
riya culd not hold herself any more..she respond his kiss..
arjun pull her more closer to him..
arjun slides his hand around her bare back..
they passionatly kissed each other for some times..
after few minute..he release her...they taking long breath..arjun stil holding riya..both smiles on each other..
arjun hug her mor tighly n his head moving around her neck..arjun rub his nose..n slowly bits there..
arjunn.!!..riya jerked with pain..she hold arjun more tightly..arjun kissed there to remove this pain..

arjun again bent his face..wanna to kiss her again but riya pull arjun away n run from there..
she stood near window ..n try to control her breath..she close her eyes..n smile..
as the whole incident again comes in front of her eyes..
arjun culd easly saw her blushing face..
arjun get up from the bed n took step toward riya..
arjun first took her hand in that moonlight..she felt so protective n secure..
arjun leaned dowm to her ear n wishper in very romentic n huski voice..
riya u dont feel that..hamen apni lv story ko "ek romentic lv story banana chahiye..
taki her velentine per..
longo ke muh per bus hamari he baat ho...
arjun slide his hand in his pocket..n took one box..
arjun bent down..stil holding her hand..
Riya ager tumhen koe problem nahi to kya..

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Tum es akdu ke sath apni puri life spent karna chahogi..i lv u riya..will u marry me..
her eyes get moised..she nodded in yes..arjun stood n put rings in her finger..
she culd not help but blush..
she can easly hear her pounding heart inside her body..
the word i lv u was only the word that she heard by arjun..
arjun looks into her eyes..his eyes fill with loat of lv n emosion..
riya was litle nervous..arjuns lips reach her jaw..tracing the line if many..kisses from her ear to her collerbone..
riya tightly hold arjun shirt..
she feel so warms..
arjun lift her in his arms..
n carefuly put her on the bed..
riya lay verticaly on the bed n arjun lay next to her holding each other hand..
he felt sight vibration in his finger..
riya was constantly stairing him..arjun lift him n lay on the top of her..he leand very closer to her the face distance bw them is negligible..
riya close her eyes..she can feel his breath on her face..she trun her face tried to get up but alk vain..
arjun was lost in her coal black eyes...
"Aaj mat rooko hamen..peene do..
phir moka nahi milega..tere ankhon main dobane ka..
aaj waqt bhi hai or dastoor bhi.."
he picked her lips again n giv other passionate kiss
both lost each other..they lost their own world.
arjun tuch creating butterfly in her stomach.
she culd hold herself..any more ..she slowly rised her heand n placed his head n gracefuly moved her long thin finger toward his hair..arjun holding her near to his chest ,both looks each other with long desire in their eyes with no word..arjun put his arms across his waist n pull her mor closer to him.
arjun frequently wishper riyaaa..n nuzzeled her back..they remain on another's hug for a long time as if they were longing each other
clossness..they dont want to get seperated.

the end-
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so how was that-

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