ss: Aparichit_ UPDATED PG 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey everyone...😊
i am back with a story which suddenly popped in my messy little brain...
its a little piece of crap i have written... i dont know how it is, it will be you people who will judge it...
i ll continue if and only if i get lots and lots of likes and comments...
i welcome rotten tomato, phate hue joote and sandles also... but do let me know how it is...


APARICHIT'

prologue

All were assembled at aisha's house. She was sick...

Aisha: he cant do this to me... he will definitely come back...

Sameer: Aisha, please sambalo khud ko...uss blast mein uska bachna naa mumkin hai...

Aisha: NO... it cant be... he had promised me that he would be back... unhone mujhse waada kiya tha aur wo kabhi apna waada nahin todte... (mumbles) he will be back... I know he will be back...

Shree: Aisha it has been 3 weeks, still we got no trace of his. We have retrived his gun, his sun glares, his watch, pieces of his sherwani and imp., his blood traces... that was a severe blast...usme wo hum sabko chod ke jaa chuke hai... he left you Aisha.. this is true that he is...

*slap*

Aisha: don't you dare shree... Don't you dare say he is dead. He is very much alive... see my heart is beating...that means he is alive' he will come back to me... I know he will be back...(she was going hysterical and difficult to be managed)


Sameer signaled the nurse to put her in sedatives.

She slowly drifted into sleep.

Sameer, shree, chotu could not see her in pain. she was in shock, she could not digest that he left her... He was gone... he was dead...


how is it... crap piece right...


index:

cs- pg 8

part 1: pg 3

part 2: pg 4

part 3: pg 6

part 4: pg 8
part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3437411/ss-aparichit-updated-pg-16?pn=10
PART 6:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/79350237

part 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/80809523
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alee001 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!!!! nice!!!!!!

so it s arisha stry!!!

wat happened to arjun!!!

update soonn!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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luvd it continue soon..
Luv arisha..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Crap? Not at all..u have to continue it pls..where is arjun?toh theek toh hai na😭
pls Update sn darling..me waiting
its awesome..do pm me..when u update it😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i have my next part ready... but i will be bit greedy now. i ll update only when i get sufficient likes and comments. i promise, next part will be in page 3 o 4...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Finally.
Mujhe thora akal aya.
I am in love with Arisha pair,now.
Kise crap keh rahi ho?????
Just love this concept, a lot.
Ekdum unique hai.
Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz continue it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start
guddie types
loved it
smthing fresh
jaldi update kro pari dear
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part
its about arisha ryt
hope arjun s fine
pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yay... finally 3rd page... m soo happy... i got good response for the prologue... so as promised, part 1 on page 3...

part 1

…. He was gone… he was dead…

Sameer: ab mujhse nahin dekha jaata shree…… she is so broken……kyun hua aisa???? (he breaks down)😭

Shree who had never seen this side of his chief was moved.he went to him and placed a soothing hand on his shoulder.


Shree: sir, jo hona tha wo hochuka. We cant change the past. But atleast we can make her future better. She cant stay in this moment forever.nahin to……


Sameer(wiping his tears): yeah shree… I know. I lost my best friend. But she lost her love. Her fianc. Her pain is lot more than mine…. I understand… i will stay strong for her. We need to stay strong...


Chotu: sir, uss area ke aaspaas sabhi ilakhon mein humare logon ne khoj kardi hai… neither he, nor his body found. Uss din se nadi ka paani tez bhi nahin tha ki body beh jaaye… in sab se to yahin lagta hai ki………😕😒


Sameer: ki wo mar chukka hai(he closes his eyes). We need to speak to doctor. Otherwise we wont be able to control her...


Shree: yeah sir...


It was that dreadful day 3 weeks ago, when ETF had a case to be solved undercover. Arjun being Arjun, urged to go alone in disguise... no one agreed… esp aisha. She knew this was very difficult job. The case involved terrorists, sikander being at their back, case was highly complicated. those ruthless vile creatures mercilessly killed thousands…. After lots of arguments and discussions, Arjun convinced them. Yes of course his love too urged to go with him, but he refused…

He went all alone, clad in a sherwani,😛 fitted with microphones and minute cameras... he had his gun well hidden from view.

It was a huge house beside the river, all set for the poly of the terrorists...they had arranged a lavish marriage party, calling many eminent people…large number of people…

Arjun was succeeded in sending as much data as he could to his team... during his work Aisha had called him.


Aisha: Arjun, app theek to hai na...mujhe bohot ghabrahat ho rahi hai... app please jaldi aajayiye...

Arjun: jaan, don't worry... main bilkul theek hun... yahan kaam khatam hone hi wala hai... but I want something when I come back... 😃

Aisha:kya?

Arjun(in a husky, complete romantic, flirty voice): you so very well know it dear... I want my sugar syrup..😉.

Aisha: ARRRJUNN...(blushing heavily)☺️☺️☺️... acha theek hai... aap aise keh raheho maano If I say no you never have it... bus aap jaldi aa jao...

Arjun: muuuaaahh... mera intezaar karna Aisha... I love you... aaj, kal, aur hamesha...😊😃😳

Then she heard *BOOM* a blast followed by loud crash and scream of Arjun himself…

ARRRJUUUNNN…………………😲😲😲

😭


ankita, her friend and sameer's gf, immediately rushed to her and hugged her tightly... she started consoling her...😭


aisha: pata hai ankita, kitna bura sapna tha... o God... i dont believe it... i felt it soo real... pata hai arjun uss blast mein mujhe hamesha ke liye chod ke chale gaye... thank God it was just a bad dream... bdw sir, arjun waapas kab aa rahe hai... itne din hogaye na... ab tak to unhe aa jaana chahiye tha right... aap kuch bolte kyun nahin???


ankita: aisha ye sapna nahin haqeeqat hai.. wo jaa chuke hai...


aisha: i dont believe you anks... i ll call him now. he will pick it up see. he will be back to me.


she gets down from her bed and moves towards the table where her mobile was kept.


ankita: aisha ruko...

when she does not listen, ankita grabs her wrist, spins her round and slaps her hard against her cheeks.
*SLAP*

ankita: KITNI BAAR KAHE KI WO MAR CHUKA HAI... TUM SAMAJHTI KYUN NAHIN HO??? HE IS DEAD AND GONE. YOUR ARJUN IS DEAD AISHA HE WILL NOT TAKE YOUR CALLS OR COME BACK...(shaking stunned aisha) UNDERSTAND IT AISHA... you cant be like this... it will hurt him as welll... do you want to hurt him? his soul??your love???😭

tears were streaming down everybody's eyes...😭😭

aisha fell on ground and cried her heart out that night... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭


to be continued...

please read, like and do COMMENT... jo bhi story like karta hai agar wo chahe ek word bhi comment karde to mujhe accha lagega...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pari dear
awesum
i loved it
awazing concept
pls jaldi update krna..
u r a fab writer..!

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