Valentine's Special OS: Bin tere kya hai jeena.. - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Take a bow Avantika, what a fantastic OS you gave us for the V-day.
This is exactly how I imagined Arjun/Roshni relationship to be, and after watching the past weekend's flashback I cannot imagine Arjun loving anyone other than Roshni or loving anyone like he loved her.
You already know my take on this and watching his pain and suffering in the last episode my beliefs have been confirmed regarding this.
As soon as I finished reading part two I had a feeling about where you were heading with this, love like that can never die and it would be the hardest thing to get over. I loved his romantic gesture for her eventhough he did not believe in the day. The point is when you love someone that deeply you will go to any legnth to make them happy even if you change your ways for them you are doing it out of love and no other reason and that is what Arjun did. I think I fell little more in love with him in that part.
The big surprise in part three was the best, wouldn't it be something if something like this took place in the show. May be Roshni being alive after all but he is unaware of it. I couldn't imagine his reaction if something of like that happened in the show.
I liked your version much better since it shows just how comitted he is to her and how in love he is with her. As for Roshni, she is no less either, she is just as deeply in love with him too. I am sure now after reading this and watching Sunday's flashback that I canno imagine him with anyone else.
I have yet to watch the VM, since I am at work but I will watch it as soon as I get home, I am sure it is just as fantastic as the OS.
Thank you so much for this wonderful gift once again. Hope you have the best V-day.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
nice dr
loved it
thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
awesome ...

thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
unreserved my comment on page 1

n 🤗 for u for such a amazing story😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
hi avantika di
happy that u r back
was missing u badly
the os was so nice
arni moments were very gud
it also had a haapy ending
the vm u prepared also was very nice
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
That was A "Wow" update dii...
Arni love story...so sweet of them..
their relation u depicted it awsomely...Specially the way of celebrating valentine eve...Then cute surprises...than that of their bond they share...
The moments of cHAI scene were really cute...
LOve for cutting chai that grew less when the true love of wifey was realized...
First two chapters carried a lovely feeling within them...then when U wrote the part of roshni's suffering the way she just wanted to see the glimpse of her husband...That was so emotional...
The part 3 was awsome bombastic beautiful...so loving...
But in the end...OS rocked👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Awesome one...jst loved it...bond between arjun n roshni...emotions of arjun n roshni way depicting gratitude...twist at d end...ws al fab

arjun itnaa bhi kam romatic nai h 😉
balki bohot jyada...bas apni ankhon se hi sab keh jaata h...
nice surprise...cont givin many more 😊
Edited by Arima47 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

heyy avantika wlcm backk...n ate hi kya gift diya ...lvd it

trulyyy lvd ...is forum mein roshni ke jikr to har stryy mein hi hota hay bt ...in all f dem at end arjun nvr paired wid hr 4 forevr ...kayy baar socha ke koy to arni par vi kuch likhe though im a ariya pankha yett wan sm arni tooo...nw u flfill my wishs...lv u dear...gr8 thought...

i lv all da 3 parts at da strt whn arjun feel da pain of dat young man n wish 4 his strngth..is soo touchng part...he cm thru sm path...den arjun s preprsns 4 hr sooo rmntc n da cake eatng part

mk me blshh

den da most srprsng part ...she s alive ...n arjun s care 4 hr ...he s alive cs his life his soulmt is alive

lv da care arjun shwd 4 hr...arjun to shef ban gaya rosh ke liye

lv ds part by hrt den da mangalsutra n sindoor part all r realy awsmm

at da end ur vm ...only 1 smily suit it ...da way u put all da pics acrdng da words of d song s butiflllmk mr n mr os n vm like ds...n haan meri red angel n sythp ko vi vul mat jana

at last thnx agn 4 such arnilicious dream

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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
WoW...i had thought i would read this tomorrow and comment
but dil nahi maana...and i am happy it didnt...
struggling to keep my eyes open while i type this...but still i wont go without commenting

back to the update...super awesome yaar...lovely...romantic and i am happy that it is a happy ending
after watching the flashbacks and hearing him scream Roshni with tears in her eyes, i had literally voiced out "pls yaar, usse apne Roshni wapas deh dho..."
losing a life partner and getting over it is not so easy...And i am sure, that Arjun in this show will never ever be able to get over ROshni completely...he might move on which i too wish for but Roshni, his first love will always dwell in him...

ur OS gave us glimpses of the happy moments of their life and it was just out of the world...purity, passionate, romantic...i dont have words to describe how happy i was to read this...seeing Arjun happy with his Roshni...his life partner, his first love, his sangini!

3 cheers to u for bringing ArNi alive!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Just wow!!!

This just blew my mind. This was the best Valentine's surprise. Really, loved it to the core of my heart.

Even i have seen some flashbacks of Arni back in Arjun. Although , i don't follow the show. But, i loved there chemistry. Arjun looks so young and carefree with her. So, loving,loved and lovable . I love Ariya more then any couple and i thought it could have been quite difficult for me to digest it. But, i loved it genuinely. Even i thought what if Roshni haven't ever left Arjun, he wouldn't have been so hurt. But, then i love riya a lot. If it wouldn't have happened i couldn't have been able to have see this pair.

I don't know what should have happened and what not, but for me this was a beautiful piece of work and i enjoyed it thoroughly.

Finally , i know m late but.. still...

Happy belated birthday and Valentine's day!!!

~Dee~

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