FF: Pyaar Ka Intezaar

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys, how are you all doing? I know I also have another FF going, but I was watching the episode where Riya dies today and this idea just came to me. I hope you guys like it.

This Fanfiction will start from the moment Riya consumes Xzora II bacteria.

"Riya" Arjun yelled as soon as consumed the bacteria. Rajat was shocked, and Arjun took that moment to pick up his gun and shoot Rajat in the chest. Arjun dropped his gun and ran towards Riya. He quickly cradled her head to his chest.

"Riya...please open your eyes. Please Riya..." Arjun murmured in her ear again and again. He saw that she wasn't responding so he quickly got up with her in his arms and started running towards the car. Rathore, Shree, and Chotu were already there waiting for them. Arjun got in the back with Riya and Shree while Chotu sat in the passenger seat and Rathore took the driver's seat. Rathore drove like never before to the hospital. Arjun barged into the hospital yelling, "Doctor...Emergency." The Doctor hurried to him with a stretcher, and Arjun and the rest of the team pushed the stretcher to the room the doctor was taking them.

"Doctor, an Xzora II bacterium is in her body right now...please Dr. kuch bhi karye but inhe baccha lijiye," Arjun pleaded to the Dr.

"How long has it been since the bacteria entered her body?" Dr. asked quickly.

"Approximately 20 minutes."

"Nurse jaldi karo... hamare paas zyada time nahi hai. Inhe blood transfusion dena hoga jaldi se inka blood test karo and figure what's her blood type?"

"Dr. inka blood B+ hai..." Shree answered the Dr.

The nurse quickly ran outside to fetch B+ blood so they can start the blood transfusion as soon as possible. Riya, meanwhile, gained consciousness and was asking for Rathore.

"Yes Riya, mein yahi hoon..." Rathore said cupping her face.

"Si...Sir ag..agar mene kabhi...kabhi bhi aapko du...dukh pochaya ho...ho toh..muhje...maa..maaf kardena..." Riya said with tears in her eyes.

"Yeh kya pagalo jaisi baat kar rahi ho, Riya. Tumne kabhi bhi mera dil nahi dukhaya."

"Tha..Thank you Si..Sir," Riya said and turned her head toward Shree and Chotu, "Tum...do..dono mu...muhje kabhi..bhul...bhulege toh na..nahi na?"

"Yeh kaisi baate kar rahi ho Ri, hum tumhe kaise bhulege. Tum toh hamri best friend ho...and tumhe kuch nahi hoga toh aisi baate mat karo," Shree replied to her tearfully.

"Shree...Ar..Arjun Sir kaha..hai?" Riya asked looking around.

"Ri, who Dr se baat kar rahe hai..." Chotu started but got interrupted by Arjun.

"Riya, mein yaha hi hoon. Tumhe kuch nahi hoga Riya. Don't lose hope," Arjun pleaded to Riya. Riya grabbed one of his hand that was on her face and held it in her hands.

"Ar..Arjun Sir... mein ap...apse kehti thi...na ke.. mein aapka dard sa...samajti hoon. Woh is...isliye kyuki me...mein aapse bah...bahot pyar...pyaar karti hoon. Mein jan...janti hoon ke...aap...si..sirf Roshni...ji se pyaar...kar..karte ho but..." Riya said but got interrupted by Arjun.

"Shhh Riya, mein janta hoon ke tum muhjse bahot pyaar karti hoon. I'm sorry..." Riya was about to interrupt him but he stopped her, "I'm sorry Riya ke mene itna late realize kiya ke mein bhi...mein bhi tumse pyaar karne laga hoon. Isiliye Riya tumhe laadna hoga... tumhare liye...mere liye...hamare liye Riya," Arjun said with tears rolling down his cheeks.

"I...I lo...love yo...you Ar..Arjun..." Riya said and became unconscious.

"Riya...Riya apni ankhe kholo Riya...tum muhje akela chod ke nahi ja sakti...DOCTOR" Arjun yelled. The Dr. ran towards them and checked Riya and shook his head at the Arjun. Arjun screamed and laid his head next to her head. He started crying very badly so Rathore stepped forward and pulled Arjun away from Riya's side.

"Sameer woh..who muhje chod ke chali gayi...jaise Roshni chali gayi...Riya bhi muhje chod ke chalo gayi..." Arjun complained to Sameer. Sameer shook his head at Arjun to indicate him to stop crying. Shree and Chotu also joined them and patted Arjun on his back. They slowly took Arjun out of the room and hospital. Sameer decided to take the whole team to his house because he knew everyone is not in their right mind to go back home by themselves.

Precap: "Iski pulse toh abhi chal rahi hai... Nurse Nurse jaldi se yaha aao," someone yelled loudly.

"Arjun...snap out of it. Yeh kya kar rahe ho tum... yeh sab dekh ke kya Riya khush hogi ha..bolo?," Rathore screamed at Arjun.


SO what did you guys think? Should I continue to write this FF? Please press Like and comment.


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kaveriw2008 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
wow u give me the hope that riya is alive

hey update the next part soon

and add me to ur pm list

i really love to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start man... brought back the memories of dat damn episode... update s really emotional...Arjun too loves Riya bt dnt make it lik its too late dat he realised his feelings...let Ariya be together... nw let me go nd read sumthn else otherwise whole nite i'm gonna cry... update soon... PM me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Leki

Awesome start man... brought back the memories of dat damn episode...Yeah, I just saw the episode and while watching this idea came to me. update s really emotional...Arjun too loves Riya bt dnt make it lik its too late dat he realised his feelings...let Ariya be together...You will have to wait and watch to see if they end up together or not, but I think part of the precap gives you some idea 😉 nw let me go nd read sumthn else otherwise whole nite i'm gonna cry... Awww, my intention was not to make you cry. I hope you find something else to read...wouldn't want you to stop reading my FF because it makes you cry 😛update soon... PM me..Ok, will add you to the Pm list. .


Thank you so much for liking this FF and taking your time to comment on it. I really appreciate it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
fantastic start :) loved it
the update was so emotional...
awww arjun loves her too :)
precap seems awesome... seems like riya is alive...
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue please.
Brought back the memories of that damn episode.
Just loved it. Cheers.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very heart touching and emotional start😭
Riya is dead or shayad nahin from your precap
but arjun is completely broken😭
Please continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update...
arjun realise his love wow...
after reading this FF badly missing riya in arjun i want her back i knw it won't happen...
cont soon dr...
waiting to read more...
while u updating next part do PM me...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey
super hit idea
loved it..
mujhe iska pm bhi chaiye lolz
claps!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Am speechless. Plz plz plz do continue soon. Cant wait to see riya alive. And plz pm me when you update next

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