PS:-Nazre Milana Nazre Churana..!! (Part 2 - Pg 6) - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Hey guys...
I m back with the next part...
Will not be good..!!
So ALL THE BEST to tolerate me!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Hey Friends,
Thank you for liking the PS (picstory).
Here I go with the second part...
Like i said earlier, its the pics who are telling the story not me.
Very sorry in advance, because I m going to disappoint u this time.
(Note:- I might have to put some pics that might include others (other than ETF).. Please ignore them.

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Next day

They go on a case.

They were discussing about the case.

Arjun tries to speak to Ayesha, but she just walks away. Ignoring him.

Arjun just stares at her going form, helplessly, desperate to talk to her.

Arjun (in mind) - Control yourself Arjun. Kuch aur der rukh jaao. Ab kab tak woh tumse ruthi rahegi?

Rathod witnesses Arjun state.
Rathod - Kya hua Rawte?

(Arjun is silent)

Rathod - Ab kuch bataoge bhi? Ya phir morn wrath rakhne ka plan hai?

(Arjun sits down heavily)

Rathod - Arjun, batao nah!

Arjun - Aur kya hoga Sameer? She is still very angry with me.

Rathod - Chalo, mein usse baat karne ki koshish karta hu.

Arjun - Tum yesa kuch nahi karoge Rathod.

Rathod - Kyu? Mein yesa kyu nah karu Rawte?

Arjun - Pata bhi hai tumhe tum kiso samjhane ki baat kar rahe ho? Tumhe lagta hai ki woh JUNGLEE BILLI tumhari baat maanegi? Tumhe lagta hai ki woh JUNGLEE BILLI kisi ki bhi baat kitni aasani se maanegi?

(But Rathod doesn't listen to him, and tries to talk to Ayesha.)

(Arjun meanwhile just stood to listen and watch the entire drama)

Ayesha - Sir, aapko Arjun ki baat sun leni chahiye thi. Unhone kuch galat nahi kaha tha. YE JUNGLEE BILLI KISI KI BHI BAAT ITNE AASANI SE NAHI MAANE WALI.

Arjun (in mind) - Oops Arjun! Tu toh gaya. Usne tujhe usse JUNGLEE BILLI kehte hue sun liya. Teri problem kya kaam thi jo tune aur bhi bada liya?

Rathod - Damn it! Kisi ki bhi baat nahi maanti yeh ladki.
Arjun - Toh meine kis bhasha mein kaha tha Rathod? Tumhe HELP ke liya BOHOT BOHOT DHANYWAD! (Says Sarcastically)

Rathod - Par ab kya kare hum?
Arjun - Hum nahi Rathod. Mein! Sirf Mein hi kuch karunga.

Rathod - Par ab toh woh aur bhi zyada nazar hai, tum yesa kya kar loge?
Arjun - Jo mujhe chahiye mein paake hi rehta hu. Kyuki Mera naam Arjun Suryakant Rawte hai.

Arjun - Aur iss waqt mujhe MERI AYESHA ki maafi chahiye aur uska saath. Aur woh mein kisi haal mein paakar rahunga! Samjhe Ya Samjhau?

(LATER WHILE SOLVING THE CASE)

Shree - Kya hua Sir, aap subhe se pareshan lag rahe hai?

Arjun - Jo kaam tumhare matlab ka nahi hai, usse dur raho toh behtar hai Shree. Aur KHASKAR KE MERE! Samjhe ya Samjhau?

Shree - Samjhgaya SIR!

(AFTER SOLVING THE CASE)

Arjun calls Ayesha.
Arjun - Hello Ayesha. Mujhe abhi purane building ki terrace pe milo. Kuch bohot information share karni hai.

Ayesha - I hope woh information kaam ki ho warna, police officer baane ki training mujhe kahi aur use karni padegi.

Arjun (to his cell) - Ab meri jaan tere hawale hai.

(ON THE TERRACE)

Ayesha - Yesi konsi information deni hai jo tumne mujhe yaha bulaya?

Arjun - Ab kya tum mujhe shoot karogi?

Ayesha - Koi Shak??

Arjun - Mujhe nahi lagta Ayesha if tum mujhe hurt kar sakti ho? Mera dil yeh kabhi nahi maanega.

Ayesha softens after hearing this.
Ayesha (in mind) - Tumhara dil kuch galat nahi keh raha hai Arjun. Khud ko maar dal sakti hu, par tumhare upar ek kharosh bhi bardash nahi kar sakti.

Arjun - Kyu Miss Ayesha Kapoor sahi kaha nah meine?

(Ayesha controls herself)
Ayesha - Kuch zyada hi imagine mat karo. Aurat Ki Kabiliyat Pe Shak Karne Ki Bhool toh kabhi nahi, ACP Arjun Rawte.

Arjun - ACP Arjun Rawte YEH KABHI NAHI BHULEGA!
Par ab shayad Miss Ayesha Kapoor ki pehchan mit jaye.

Ayesha - Kya matlab hai tumhara?

(Turns to her)
Arjun - Matlab saaf hai. Tumhe manane ka plan hai. Aur Ayesha tumhe maana hi padega.
(He looks deeply into her eyes)

Ayesha stares and freezes due to the intensity his eyes reflect.
Ayesha (in mind) - Toh maaona Arjun. Kab se wait kar rahi hu? Kyu nahi kuch karte? Kyu nahi kuch bolte?

Arjun (answering her in mind) - Bas Ayesha, yeh aakri baar tha. I promise iske baad mein tumhe kabhi hurt nahi karunga. Aur tumhe maana lunga, humare pyaar ki kasam.
(And turns away)

Ayesha comes back to reality
Ayesha - Tumhe jo bolna hahi jaldi bolo, mere paas waqt nahi hai.

Arjun - Mein kuch nahi bolne wala, jo bolega mera phone bolega.

Ayesha smirks
Ayesha - Seriously Arjun? Mein tumhare wajah se hurt hu. Aur tumhe yeh Mazak suj raha hai? Phone se manana chahte ho mujhe?

Arjun - Ek baar dekh toh lo. Uske baad kuch bolna.

(He hands the phone to Ayesha)

Ayesha takes the phone. A pop up was already there asking her permission for viewing a clip.

Ayesha (thinks to herslef) - Ab ye kya hai? Arjun kya karna chahta hai??
(She presses OK)

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(CLIP STARTS)

Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho
Saare Jannate Mere Saath Ho
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahan
Tere Pyaar Mein Ho Jau Fanaa
Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho
Saare Jannate Mere Saath Ho
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahan
Tere Pyaar Mein Ho Jau Fanaa
(Ayesha realised this must be the place where he had arranged his date... NO... OUR Date)

Tere Dil Mein Meri Saanson Ko Jagah Mil Jaye
Tere Ishq Mein Meri Jaan Fanaa Ho Jaye

Jitne Paas Hain Khushbu Saans Ke

Jitne Paas Hothon Ke Sargam

Jaise Saath Hain Karvat Yaad Ke

Jaise Saath Baahon Ke Sangam

Jitne Paas Paas Khwaabon Ke Nazar

Utni Paas Tu Rehna Humsafar

Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahan

Tere Pyaar Mein Ho Jau Fanaa
Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saare Janatein Mere Saath Ho

Rone De Aaj Humko Do Aakhen Sujaane De
Baahon Mein Lene De Aur Khud Ko Bheeg Jaane De
Hain Jo Seene Mein Qaid Daariya Woh Choot Jayega
Hain Itna Dard Ki Tera Daaman Bheeg Jayega

Jitne Paas Paas Dhardkan Ke Hai Raaz
Jitne Paas Bundo Ke Badal
Jaise Sath Sath Chando Ke Hai Raat
Jitne Paas Naino Ke Kajal
Jitne Paas Paas Saagar Ke Lehar
Utne Paas Tu Rehna Humsafar

Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahan

Tere Pyaar Mein Ho Jau Fanaa
Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saare Janatein Mere Saath Ho

*******
(Clip Finished)

Ayesha stood still, trying to catch hold of the reality. Did Arjun Just PROPOSE HER? Did he just ask her to spend her life with him? Share his sorrows? Share his Pain? And fill him with love? With happiness?
Did he just ask me to BECOME... MRS AYESHA ARJUN RAWTE?

Arjun understood her situation.

He completed the last phrase of the song turning to her

"Adhoori Saans Thi Adhoore Dhardkan Thi Adhroore Hum
Magar Ab Chand Poora Hai Falak Pe Aur Ab Poore Hain Hum"

He said and Left.!

___________________

I m sorry, I might have disappointed many.
But this is it.
Thank you for tolerating me.
Now that cellphone part - I know its quite wierd. But cellphone ke wajah se fight shoru hua tha, so it had to end it also nah?

BTW I m mentally prepared for anything u want to throw.

Well, with this I become a GOLDIE Also... YAY!!!
Edited by ...Mithuz... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
First congrats on the Goldie status.

Now to the pic and the update, I am not disappointed at all, once again you matched the words with each expression.

Actually I had a idea in mind to post few pics and make people guess what the person in each pic was thinking in a particular scene, but you gave us a wonderful story from the pics.

Thank you very much.

P.S. I love that song, one of my favorites.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

First congrats on the Goldie status.

Now to the pic and the update, I am not disappointed at all, once again you matched the words with each expression.

Actually I had a idea in mind to post few pics and make people guess what the person in each pic was thinking in a particular scene, but you gave us a wonderful story from the pics.

Thank you very much.

P.S. I love that song, one of my favorites.



Thank you very much Di.
It all your hardwork after all. If you wouldnt have come up with these pics, I would naver have been able to do this.

Well, sorry for stealing your idea unintentionally.! LOL!!

This songs drools me too. So touching And couldnt think of something better.

And yes, Happy to become a Goldie, seen new things, like "Join dev team". Although I dont understand that.! You know?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...



Thank you very much Di.
It all your hardwork after all. If you wouldnt have come up with these pics, I would naver have been able to do this.

Well, sorry for stealing your idea unintentionally.! LOL!!

This songs drools me too. So touching And couldnt think of something better.

And yes, Happy to become a Goldie, seen new things, like "Join dev team". Although I dont understand that.! You know?



Your idea is much better anyway, loved the picture story, you should write more.😉


Joining the dev team means becoming a moderator for the Forum.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Hey ...
That was really good :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was such an awesome OS :) loved it
loved the way he proposed her :)
and yea it wasn't bakwas at all :)...i was literally laughing while reading it 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Awww, this is soo cute. I am loving this FF so please do continue asap.
Anyways, I can't believe he left after saying that... why would you make him leave? Other than that, it was wonderful. I liked all the photos you used and my fav part was when he called Ayesha or Aisha "pagal" lol. It was too cute. Continue ASAP.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
First congrats for being Goldie...
Next it was superb..
Cell phone ka jhagda cell phone se he khatam...
kaas mujhe v koi isi tarah se propose kare!!! :p:p
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb imagination..😳
fabulous..amaizing part...🤣

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