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Deleted_Account

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

*EDITED*
Hola amigos!!
com est a?

this FF is basicaly Ariya with glimpse of others' personal lives n their professional.

I promis guys u wont b disapointed by this..
but...
dont disapoint me either frnds...

i want respons.
mere mehnat ka thoda sa kadr kare... PLZ DO COMNT.
if U r buzy ATLEAST HIT THE LIKE BUTN...
Please...!!!

Happy reading.
😃

INDEX..

Pg1 - pt1
Pg2 - pt2
Pg3 - pt3,4
Pg4 - pt5
Pg6 - pt6,7
Pg7 - pt8,9
Pg8 - pt10,11,12
Pg9 - pt13
Pg10 - pt14,15
Pg11 - pt16,17,18,19
Pg12 - pt20,21,22
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Pg13 - pt 23a.
Pg 14- pt 23b, c.

pls read.
n dnt 4gt 2 lyk n comnt!!____
kabhi kabhi pms milega n kabhi kabhi nhi,
there R som probz plz cope wid it.
*Sorry*
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Imp. Note.

This is Solely my i.e Sumu4JayD's work.

I want response.
Or i will end it. NREALY I MEAN IT
this baby is truly dear to me.
*my very first work*

if u r not liking it plz comnt & let me know!!!
i will try to alter it for you. Plz dnt hesitate 2 let me know Where i need 2 improv.

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NEW THREAD - EDITED PLOT

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/94341294

Edited by Sumu4JayD - 11 years ago

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beatrice_89

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Posted: 12 years ago

Plz do continue. And do pm me when you write.

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yas23

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Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

yeah u should continue
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Deleted_Account

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

part 1:- 9:30am. 'team! Fast humare pass sirf aadha ghanta bacha hai, phir hame nikalna bhi hai" shouted rathore. Evry1 hurriedly took their respective seats. 'Shree! Accounts hack hue ke nahi?' 'ho gya hai sir. Rajvir baweja k bank acc me kuch hi din pehle hi 1.5 crore rupees kishto mei deposit kiya gaya hai by someone named Amar Kibriya sir woh ek retd. Screenwriter hai aur woh model vidya, usne bhi Rajvir ke account mei 90 lacs deposit kiye hai. Par aakir kyu?' say shree. 'wohi toh hume pata karna hai shree... SAMJHE YA SAMJHAOO

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

thnx for commnting evry1. jooti, tamatar, sarhe hue andey sab allowed hai, but haa jo bhi dena dil se dena,.

PMs later pls

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

wow ...nice start...but so short dear...

next time long update...

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

part:- 2.

'chotu! tum aur mai amar kibriya se milenge,' barked Rathore, 'yes sir mai gaari nikalta hu' says chotu n goes out of the conference room. 'riya tum aur shree rawte k saath jaao aur uss vidya se puchtaach karo, shree agar kuch aur info mile toh mujhe mail kardena' 'ok sir' says shree. 'sir mai aap k saath aaoo? 'ab yaha ka chief kya tum ban gayi ho? jitna kaha jaaye utna karo,' 'sorry sir, ok sir' mumbled riya,

'hmm' saying this he moves out.

A:'ab tum log aaoge bhi ya nahi?'

R:'ha sir mai apni diary leke aati hu'

s;'aur mai apna TABLET

A; thik hai mai bahar hu par jaldi karna SAMJHE YA SAMJHAU.giving his signature glare, he went out

R; 'Yaae shree ye rathore sir mujhe hamesha unke saah kyu bhej dete hai.'

S; 'RIYU!!! tu na ab zyada ban mat. mujhe pata hai tere man mei laddoo phut rahe hai. SAMJHE YA SAMJHAU.

R; shree! tumne kya kaha abhi abhi,?

S; Ohho toh unka dialogue mara toh sunliya! 'Dugga dugga amar rokkha koro,'

R; blushing shree tumna... ab chalo bhi..

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

phew! i hope it was long enough. n sorry for any confusion or mistakes. S = SHREE

R = RIYA

A = ARJUN obviously.

i want LAMBEY CHAUREY comments waena mind u mai bhi chotte chotte update dungi n pakka nxt 1 will be lot longer. n sorry dosto par PMs later n i may not b able 2 reply 2 u individualy sorry🥺. ❤️

ok enough of my bakbak, wait up for the next part :P😃

Edited by sumuZAMAN - 12 years ago