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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey buddies me back lolz...!!!!!!!!

i knw i wrote crap...!.!!!!.

well thank u fr all d appreciation...i m touched by d responses on d previous work of mine...

os bin tere

os soniye heeriye..

Sorry buddies i unable to provide u d link myself by mobile.!

thank u fr bearing me.!.

hope u continue to bear dis one too lolz!!

Sry fr no pm..!

A small home...wid lots of pics of arni in d wall..

enter in a room..

arni sleep peacefully...

at d same time arjun phone rings n he disconnect in irritation..

bt roshni woke up...n freshen up!!

well dis d day of arjun roshni first aniversary...

Arjun woke up by d noise of bathroom door unlocked n found his soulmate in front of his eyes wearing beautiful white suit salwar!!.

arjun act dat he sleep..

roshni came to him n

try to wake him up..

bt arjun has his own plan..

Arjun pretends dat he is angry.. N said to rosh dat plz sone do na kyun pareshan kr ri hu rosh...!

rosh hurts n thought dat he forget d day...

so d tears welled up in her eyes...

she goes frm there bt suddenly pulled by d hands of arjun in his arms...

rosh try to go bt arjun says in her ears..

Happy Anniversary jaan..

he kiss her forehead...

arjun said to roshni..

""roshni tum mere jeevan ka ek aisa hissa ho..

jiske bina mein adhura hu ,

mein ye to ni janta ki aage aane wali zindagi..

hme kha le jaye ,

par apne pure man se tumhe ye vachan deta hu ki me apni akhri saans tak tumhara saath dunga...""

After hearing those words frm arjun roshni hugs her tightly...

Itni si haseen itni si khushi
Itna sa tukda chand ka
Khwaabon ki tinkon se chal banaaye aashiyan - x2

Dabe-dabe paaon se aaye haule haule zindagi
Hothon pe taali chadake, hum taale lagake
Chal gumsum taraane chupke-chupke gaayen

Aadhi aadhi baatlen aa dil ki yeh zameen
Thoda tera sa hoga, thoda mera bhi hoga
Apna ye aashiyan

Itni si haseen itni si khushi
Itna sa tukda chand ka
Khwaabon ki tinkon se chal banaaye aashiyan

Na ho chaar deewaren, phir bhi zarukhi khuli
Baadlon ke ho parde, sakhi hari pankh chalen
Naa ho koi takraaren, are masti khaake chalen
Pyar ke sikkon se mahine ka kharcha chale

Dabe-dabe paaon se aaye haule haule zindagi
Hothon pe taali chadake, hum taale lagake
Chal gumsum taraane chupke-chupke gaayen

Aadhi aadhi baatlen aa dil ki yeh zameen
Thoda tera sa hoga, thoda mera bhi hoga
Apna ye aashiyan

Itni si haseen itni si khushi
Itna sa tukda chand ka
Khwaabon ki tinkon se chal banaaye aashiyan
Itni si haseen itni si khushi
Itna sa tukda chand ka
Khwaabon ki tinkon se chal banaaye aashiyan

THE END

P.S. WELL Guys jo bi aap throw karna chahe everything allowed.. tomatoes jooties.. etc! ~~

Sorry for d errors

thank u.. !

hope u lyk it.. !

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prava55663 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb poem pari...

I loved it :)


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome dear..
Atlast a light lovie dovie os!
Thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS:)
nd lovely song..
funkylicious thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res!!

Super Flop/ Crap😡 just like u said... seriously Payal...you disappointed me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: funkylicious


res!!


Super Flop/ Crap😡 just like u said... seriously Payal...you disappointed me


Lo di maine to pehle hi kha tha hehe...!!
Aww really i dissapointed u..
sry di..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Payal_156


Lo di maine to pehle hi kha tha hehe...!!
Aww really i dissapointed u..
sry di..!!

Shut up yaar.. mujhe gusaa aa raha h tumpe how dareu call it CRAP!!!!
Its such a beautiful one..
thanks for mking this one positive😳
Really appreciate that...
awesome h as always
please dont call it crap warna I wont read it promise!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: funkylicious

Shut up yaar.. mujhe gusaa aa raha h tumpe how dareu call it CRAP!!!!
Its such a beautiful one..
thanks for mking this one positive😳
Really appreciate that...
awesome h as always
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<strong>please dont call it crap warna I wont read it promise!😆


Thank u di..
hugs!!
love u..
ok i dnt call it crap pakka...hehe
bt pls read my work it means a lot to me di..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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My Sweet thank you so much for not killing roshni this time 😃 I realy wanted a lovely cute Arni os from you & thats what I have got 😛 the end song is perfect 👍🏼 loved it misti ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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seriously I am with you Shru 😡 chal isse ande tamatar marte hai. Always keep saying crap & all 😡

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