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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear Kunchu,

This is now back on track, nice and smooth, and you have wrapped up Arjun, Riya and Roshni very neatly. It is interesting that you are going to have Aisha already as part of the team. Action ahead, obviously.

Shyamala Aunty

hey everyone!! thanks for your valuable comments!!
it actually keeps me going on!!
and the responses really touched me!! ok then I'm back to business...

CHAPTER 32:


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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing part
loved the leg pulling of ariya
prcap aisha intersting
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update :)
loved the way everyone was teasing ariya :)
arjun and riya's conversation was awesome :)
waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Helina...
I really loved this Part...
Great update u r did it...
I loved the conversation parts b/w Rachna & Sameer...
I love d character Rachna...She is bold & characteristic...
I also loved the cute moments b/w Arjun & Riya...He permitted to go her home even if he missed her...Lovely...
Continue very soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey everybody!! next part!!

CHAPTER 33:

The team reaches Goa by 5 pm. They arrange a stay at Hotel Riverview. And 'not' as usual this time all are in different rooms, including Arjun and Riya. Their rooms are in single line in the scond floor of the hotel. Riya had reached in front of her room and noticed that Arjun's room was next to her. She opened her door and went in. A moment back she had seen him at his door while opening hers, and now as she entered she felt herself being pushed to the walls with him standing infront of her, so close. She gasped out. "aap yaha..?" he closed her mouth.

He closed her door with his legs, still holding his hands over her mouth. She was still in her shock state. He removed his hands. "aap aise andhar kaise aagaye? You were in front of your door a few seconds back. Fir aise achanak...?"

"kyu tumhe acha nahi laga? Waise pehle mere sawaal ka jawaab do? Fir tumhare?"

"kaise sawaal?" she asked innocently blinking her eyes.

"don't play with me Riya, you know what I am speaking about. Mien wahi sawaal ke bare mien puch raha hu jo meine flight mien pucha tha"

"oh... wo... mujhe kuch yaad nahi... zara firse yaad dilana..."

"hm.. tho ab amnesia tumhe hai?? koi baath nahi, iska dawa mere paas hai.." he comes closer to her and she is lost in his eyes. He kiss her passionately. He could feel her melting under him. He holds her tight and she leans on to him. At last he leaves her and makes her look at him. "tho madam, agar dawa milgaye hai tho, bathao, kab shaadi karoge?"

She smiles at him. "hm.. sochni hogi... kabhi kabhi aise hi yaad dilathi rehna, kahi mien bhool na jau..."

"ok.. aise yaad dilane mien mujhe koi problem tho nahi hai, fir ye math kehna ke sirf yaad hi dilaogi ya shaadi bhi karogi?" they smile and hug each other.

"Arjun, aapko abhi jaana hoga. Ready hona hai na?? sir ne kaha hai ke teekh 8 ko club mien milna hai. we'll be going together right?"

"ha, aur baaki 3 saath mien. Be ready. Aur ha.. club mien ja rahe hai. kuch aisa math pahanna ke mere concentration na hatt jaye..."

"oh... tho ACP Rawte ke bhi concentration hat the hai. I never knew it."

"aur bhi both kuch jaanna baaki hai Riya, jaldi se shaadi ke date fix karo. Sab samjhatha hu..." he smiles naughtily and kisses her forehead and then leaves the room.

Later that evening Arjun and Riya reches the club. They looked just like any other couple but still had a made for each other wali baath. She was in a flowing flowery frock, much to disturb Arjun's concentration and he was in a black T-shirt and Denims. The team who were already there was much amused to see this 'roop' of Arjun.

Rathod: kaafi party ke mood mien ho tum dono? Ye tho yaad hai na ke hum ek case pe hai?

Arjun: ye baar baar yaad dilane wale bath pe kyu athe ho Rathod? Ab mien 'normal' hu right?

Rathod: bas bas, chal ander chalthe hai. be careful everybody.jaise Commissioner ne kaha hai we don't know who all the informers over here. So be careful . koi bi galath kadam math uthana.

Shree: par sir, hum iss Nadiya urf Aisha ko kaise dhundenge?

Rathod: lets see. Bas ithna hi patha hai ke Nadiya ka yaha bada naam hai. so we wont be able to miss her easily. Lets go.

All goes in to the club. Though at first they seperatly moves around watching the place, then they caually assemble at a place. The music is in air and all are enjoying to the finishing song. As the song ends all clap aloud asking for more music.

The light dims, and a slight vibrant music comes up slowly. Then comes the faster beats and with them comes in a girl, in a black sexy dress, with lots of attitude. The gathering cheers aloud... "Nadiya..."

"that's her" Arjun whispers to Rathod. He seemed to be lost in her.

She dance in full passion and energy and in a moment she notices the group of people watching her. She gives a vicious smile and carries on her dance.

While dancing she comes towards the team. She comes close to Rathod and dances around him taking turns, after some turns she falls on to him. He instantly holds by her waist supporting her. She is clutching on his shoulder and they both are lost in each others eyes. The whole team is witnessing this, and Shree- Chotu's eyes are about to pop out.

She gives her smile again and lowers her hands from the shoulder to his heart. It stays there for a while and then she push him a bit and leaves from there. By the time Rathod is out of the trance she had vanished in thin air. Though Arjun had seen her moving to the back stage.

Arjun was amused with Rathod's look. He looked as if hit by a lightning. "hm... bohot maza atha than a mujhe bakra banake? Now my turn" he said to himself.

"kya hua Rathod, aise kyu khade ho jaise koi jhatka mila hai?"

"hm?? Kuch nahi. I'm fine"

"kamal hai Rathod? Tum aise khade ho jaise pure lattu hogaye ho uspe?" Rathod is all red in rage and embaresment. "chup kar Rawte" he tries to touch his heart region over his shirt. Now Arjun is all the more happy.

"lo janaab ye dhund rahe hai ke apne dil apne paas hai ke nahi" all laugh along with him. Riya is so happy to see the old Arjun back in full masti mode. He winks at her.

"shut up Rawte. Mien mere dil nahi ye dhund raha tha." He takes out a paper from his pocket that Aisha had put in.they take the paper and moves out of the club.

"milte hai waha jaha jalthe hue suraj ko bhi sukoon milthe hai... raath ke uss paar jaha tharen bhi kisike yaad mien khoyi rehthi hai... jaaha har dua qubool ho..."

Rathod: iska kya matlab hai?

Arjun: wo beach ke pass milna chahthe hai. maybe at mid night. Par ye dua qubool karne ka matlab hai?

Riya: kahi wp kisi mandir ya church ke bare mien tho batha raha?

Arjun: patha lagao ke yaha se sabse paas wali beach kaha hai. aur kahi waha paas koi church ya mandir hai ke nahi.

Shree and Chotu enquire about it.

Chotu: sir yaha se 4 km ke duri pe ek beach hai, aur uske paas ek St. Peter's church. Kaafi naam hai uss church ka. Bilkul waisa jaisa Aisha ne bathaya.

Rathod: ok lets meet her at midnight.

Outside St. Peter's church after midnight:

The air was so cold. Riya was trying to warm herself by rubbing her hands. Arjun discussing with Rathod saw this. Rathod saw his distraction and conveniently moved to Shree and Chotu. Arjun goes by her side and take her hands. He gently rubs it and blows to it. she could feel instantly warming up. They were in an eyelock till some one spoke from behind.

"wow... team ho tho aisa..."

The girl in front of them was entirely different from the one in the club. She was back in her casuals and jeans with a jacket over her. She moved towards the team in full attitude glanzing at each member especially at Rathod who was again in the shock mode.

She stood in front of the team. "welcome to Goa ETf team. Aapke tho badi charcha horahe hai Goa mien. Especially about you ACP Arjun. puri Goa aapko khatam karna chahthe hai, aur aap hai jo Goa mien hi aagaye? Manna padega!!"

Arjun: par Goa mujhe kyu dhun rahe hai?

Aisha: are you kidding me ACP? Aapne tho Sikander ko maara hai, jo Pattan Laala aur bohot saare logon ke yaar the. Khatirdari tho banthe hai aapke!!

Rathod: so everyone is searching for him? Tho hamara kaam yaha aur mushkil mien panda wale hai.

Aisha: not only for him Sir, but for the whole team. I'm sure aapke aane ke khabar waha thak pohonch gaya hoga jaha pohonchna tha.

Arjun: jaha pohonchna hai tho pohonchne do. I don't care. Ab yaha aaye hai tho, kaam pura karke hi jayenge. And depends on you if you would like to help or not.

Aisha: I'm impressed. So for once jo suna hai wo sach nikla. Kaafi kamal ke team hai aapke Sir(looking at Rathod). Commissioner sir ke orders hai ke mien aapke madad karu. Aur...

Arjun: aapko majboor hokar koi kaam nahi karni hogi officer..

Aisha: let me complete sir. Kya aap hamesha aisi hai ya sirf meri tharaf? Any way, what I was saying was.. sir ke orders hai ke aapko assist kare. And I'm ready to do it. aur ye koi majbori nahi hai( looking at Arjun). Goa mien pichle 7 mahine se hu. Aur yaha pe bohot kuch chal raha hai ke samjhane mien aur samjhne main time lagega. Ye church ek safe zone hai. yaha ke father, unhe mien bohot ache tharh jantha hu. Hamare har meeting ke time unke paas hoge. Daily at 9 am aur 5 pm ko yaha aana. You will get the message for our next meeting. Aur ha... yaha Aisha nahi, sirf Nadiya.

She gives them a victorious look. The team nods to her while Arjun is a bit irritated by her attitude.

Time to get your own dose back ACP Rawte...


PRECAP:

Aisha's information...

some actions...


NB: again confused!! this maybe about Rathod and Aisha!!

well a few had asked about Rathod-Rachna pairing. but is it really possible for a girl who undergone so much to forget everything and go on in her life just like that!! though we wish it to happen, just imagine the practical side. Its tough!! a relationship need not be always be of between lovers or bro-sis. it can be friendship too. a feeling to be there as a support always.. a feeling as sweet as that... so sorry for some disappointments... but yes, Rachna have some space in Rathod's heart...


CHAPTER 34: page 104

Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update was good di...
arjun want marriage to riya ko kya problem h lolzz!!
arjun normal dialogue wow...
rathod teasing arjun party mood..
nadiya entry superb..
rathod ka dil.!!hehe
d chit was awesum..!!!
arjun came back to masti mode grt..
uff nadiya ka attitude!!!!!
waiting fr next di...
haye ab ariya ko kuch mat krna!!
well kal me soch ri thi sameer ayesha ki jodi ke bare me aur aapne aj bna bi di grt!!!
nyc hmm..!!
Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..
nice entry..
ariya together too good. plz ab koi tension nhi chahiye dono ko le kr..
rathod & aisha sath me "bade achche lagte hai"..😆
update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ow nice update...
So Here Aiesha for Rathore...
Like the pairing...Both pair was rocking...
😳
update next part soon...

Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderfull update dr...
Ariya scene was so cute...
Nadia entry was superb...
Come soon with next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
ANOTHER AMAZING ONE👍🏼 WOW YOU WON MY HEART AGAIN BY UR BRILLIANT WRITING...UPDATE SOON...ENJUYED EACH N EVERY BIT OF IT

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