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Posted: 13 years ago
dear it was awsome update
prcap sounds intersting
ariya ko jaldi milva do na
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rachna was rescued by Rathore and he helped her! aww! 😊
Awesome update! Waiting for next part! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey...!!!!
So sorry for such a late reply...
Read last 5 chps together...
they were awesome...

Chapter 23
loved arjun's concern...
and their first date...!!!!!❤️
omg...so beautiful..!!!!

Shree: Ri... pinch me, kahi mien sapna tho nahi dekh raha hai? Rathod Sir aur Arjun sir ek saath smile kar rahe hai!!!!

Chotu: shayad tumhare sapna mujhe bhi dikhayi deraha hai. I can see them smiling.

Riya: stupid!! Wo log sach much smile kar rahe hai

awesome lines...was really laughing...could imagine all that...!!
riya abducted!!! oh no!!!
i hate sikander...ariya ki itni romantic date kharab kar di!😡

Chapter 24
Arjun Sikander convo...amazing...
written very well...👍🏼
shree couldnt trace the call...now that was something i never thought of...😲
nice 1 though...

Chapter 25
loved riya's daring...
Sikander ko mast jawab diya...😉
and escaped from there...amazing...
Ryaan saves her...wow...😃
Ryaan Rachna story...sounds emotional...
Precap was interesting...!!!

Chapter 26
riya is fine...wow...
shree got hurt,...awww...
arjun and ryaan meet...amazing...
arjun about to see riya...y didnt u make them meet...???😔
neway...story has become interesting...
feel bad for Rachna...nice twist!!!

Chapter 27
Rachna escaped...
hit into rathod...
and rathod fights...wow...!
now both riya and rachna near each other...
Finally Ryaan saw Rachna...
I hope even arjun sees riya...
waiting for whats gonna happen next!!!😃

Finally...that was a long one...
neway...loved all of them...
update soon!!!😉




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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Dear...
I just started to read ur OS...
Good writing Skill...
Continue soon...
And tfs fr d PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey dear why no update yet . Waiting eagerly dear update as soon as possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow
the precap sounds interesting
plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG, i just finished reading the last two chapters. You have done an awesome job! 👏 I hope sameer and arjun together get sikkander and teach him a lesson for what he did to rachna riya and all the other girls ! 😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi 🤗 thanx for the lovely update sorry couldn't reply yesterday. iread the story last night but the death of the brave heart has made me cry 4 the whole day... thanx update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally the face - off ... waiting for next installment !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey everyone!!!
had an exam today.. thats why I'm late...
thanks a lot for your reviews and wait!!

CHAPTER 28:

ETF office:

Rathod: Shree, Rachna ko jiss raste mien mile the uss rasthe ke gharonka patha lagao. I think wo unhi gharonmese koi ek ke bare mien hi batha rahi thi

Arjun: aur wahi kahi hogi... wo ladkiyan... Aur Riya bhi..

Shree: sir I have looked into it. ek ghar pe thode shak hai mujhe. Kaafi samay se kisi Raghav ke naam mien hai. aur zyaada kuch nahi.

Arjun: wahi ghar hai Shree. Hame waha jaana hoga isse pehle ke wo alert hojaye.

Chotu comes in with 2 men : Sir, ye dono waha Rachna pe hamla karne aye the.

Rathod fumes at them: tum dono, firse? Ek baar mere samne se bach gaye the. Fir bhi agaye? Kaha tha na miene ke Rachna ke paas math aao. Huh?

He slaps him hard. "bol, kaha hai wo ghar jaha tum ladkiyonko rakha hai, bol!!!"

They first try to make some excuses . The team loses all their control. At last they open their mouth.

"ha, batha tha hu"

They give the directions of the place.

Arjun catch hold their collar: Riya!! Riya kaha hai?? wo bhi wahi hai na??

He beats them a lot. At last: "sab wahi hai!!"

They are taken away. Arjun is so frustrated. "lets go Rathod, before its too late."

Rathod: rukh ja Rawte. Jald bazi mien koi decision math lo. Yaha sabke jaan ke sawal hai.

Arjun tries to control himself. They get the map of the area and decide a plan ahead.

Hospital:

Ryaan was near to the sleeping Rachna. He was too numb to react. Doctor's words were ringing in his ears. She had gone through the worst. The girl that used fill his life with joy and happiness, were lying in front of him as a dead body. He touched her cheeks tenderly as if worrying it would hurt her. Tears filled his eyes. It was ready to come down at any mment. He traced his fingures through her arms. It was full of bruises. Some regions so dark in blue color. Some marks of beating, and some...

He lost all his control. He leant onto her bed and broke down. The doctor was witnessing this. He had gathered their relation. He moved and placed his hands on him.

"Sir, its not wise to say 'sambhaliye apko' fir bhi kehtha hu. Please try. Kyunki ab aapke behen ko aapke sak zaroorath hai. wo jin haal se guzra hai, wo soch ke baahar hai. she will need your support. Agar aap hi aise tut jayenge tho?"

He looked up. "you are right, she needs me. And I'm always there for her. Par kaise sambhalu mien apne aapko? Do saal se dhundh raha hu isse. Aur jab mile tho iss haal mien." He cried again.

The doc consoled him and went by. At last he was in control. "Rachna, tum fikar math karo. Ab mien hu na? hum sab samhalenge. Ye tho kismath ka khel the ke ek ladki mere gaadi samne aaye aur aise tumhe mile. Warna... mien tho tumhe dundthe he rahthe"

At that moment he remembered about Riya. "God, mien bhi kithne selfish hu. Jiski wajah se mien yaha aya, mien usse hi bhool gaya.beta mien abhi aaya" he kiss her forehead and goes to Riya's room. She was still sleeping and sits by her.

"patha nahi aapke kaise shukriya ada karu. Aapke wajah se mujhe meri Rachna se firse milne ke chance mila. Thankyou"

Sikander's Adda:

He slapped them hard. "kaha gaye the tum log? Pehle wo Policewaali? Wo tho hoshiyar the. Lekin wo Rachna? usse aise himmet kaha se aye? Huh?"

"saab wo..." he slapped again.

"chup. Ek shabd aur nahi"

"saab, uss Rachna ko dhundke 4 log gaye the. Unme se 2 mare mila hai. baki do usse dhund rahe hai. mien unhe hi phone kar raha hu"

Sik comes and throws the phone to the floor. "budhu kahinke... akal nahi hai kya? Agar wo ETF ke paas pohonch gaye hai tho, ye call unke liye invitation letter hoga" he is frustrated with them.

"charon aur logonko failao. Har ek movement pe dyaan lo. Something tells me, ke mere yaar yaha aane wale hai"

---

The ETF team stopped their SUV a bit far away. They were going through the last minute plans. Something struck in Arjun's mind.

Arjun: Rathod, yaha ke ladiyinko drugs pe rakha hoga. Aur Rachna ke baahar nikalne se aur bhi security ke intezaam kiya hoga. So we should be more careful now.

Rathod: tun kehna kya chahthe ho?

Arjun: hame Sikander ke dyaan ko bhadkana hoga. Aur uss waqt un ladkiyonko dhundna hoga. Aur Riya ko bhi

Shree: aap kehna kya chathe ho sir?

Arjun: Sik ka dyaan bhatkane ka ek hi rastha hai.MEIN

Rathod: paagal hogaye ho kya? Tum uske saamne jaoge? No never

Arjun: mere fikar math karo Rathod. Just think about the girls inside. Aur hamare Riya bhi. Focus on them. mien usse engage karthe rehaga. Uske bine uska team weak hai. aur thab tum unhe bachao

Rathod: par, isme bohot risk hai. I wont let you do it.

Arjun: aaj koi mauth bhi mere rasthe nahi ayenge Rathod. Trust me. Today it will finish. Either with him, or with me. Par Riya ko kuch nahi hoga. Rathod, please I beg you, aaj math roko. Please.

Rathod was in 2 minds. At last he nodded. Arjun was about to move ahead when Rathod held his hands. Arjun turned to him. Rathod went in for a hug to Arjun. Arjun hugged him back. "Sambhalke Arjun. we will be behind you. Aur fikar math karo, hum Riya ko kuch hone nahi denge"

Arjun broke the hug. "I know Rathod. Waise jaldi aana. Mujhe wait karna pasand nahi hai" he winked at them and went in.

Rathod: team, jaldi se un ladkiyonko bachao. Search for Riya also. Aur make it fast. Hum Rawte ko zyada akele nahi chod sakthe. And take everyone on the way. I don't mind how much you can handle

They go in stealthly. Taking down anyone on the way.

Hospital:

Riya was slowly stirring up. Ryaan noticed it and goes near her. "are? Aap uth gaye? Great. How are you doing?"

She looks confused at him. "don't worry aap safe hai. you are in a hospital. Aap mere hi gaadi se takraya tha. How are you feeling now? Mien apke pariwar walonko inform kar saktha hu.boliye kisse bulana hai"

"Arjun... ETF mien..."

"ok. Arjun from ETF. Wait!!! one minute. Aap ACP Arjun ke bare mien baath kar rahe hai right?"

She nods. "So you must be Riya!!!"

She nods again. "OMG... aap yaha hai. aur wo apko hi dhundne nilka..."

She is worried now. "how do you know him? Aur kaha gaye hai wo?"

"I meet him today. It's a long story. For the time being leave it. Arjun aapko dhund rahe hai. wo aur unke team kahi gaya hai. kaha ye tho patha nahi. Lekin kisi Sikander ka naam leraha tha"

Riya: WHAT?????

---

Arjun walks in with a gun in his hand. He was shaking with rage, still he was controlling himself.

"SIKANDER??? SIKANDER???" he called aloud.

He heard the voice. "aakhir tum aahi gaye Arjun!!"

---

Rathod and team reaches in. they knocked many on the way. At last they reach the room where the girls were kept.

The sight shocked them. in a small room, many girls were dumped. The team was so angry at the people who did it. Shree goes towards the girls and searches frantically. "Sir, Riya yaha nahi hai!!!"

Rathod: jaldi dhundna hoga usse. Rawte ke paas zyada waqt nahi hai.

---

He walks in majestically toward the room. Though it was his first meeting with Sik in this new life, he could get flashes of him.

A girl with him in a mall... innocent talks of Roshni... he could feel the damp shirt when she cried for him in the park... her searching for her best friend... her concern for him... her pleading to him to spare her love's life... a knife swinging... a cry of pain... she trying to reach him...

He closed his eye for a second. It was filling with tears due to pain and rage. Sik was smirking at him

Sik: "welcome Arjun... once again to hell..."

Arjun: "sirf ek sawaal!! Meri Riya kaha hai?"

Sik: "meri Riya?? Huh?? OMG... again love... ye log kab sudhrega?" he laughes aloud. Arjun is silent.

Sik: "Riya... yahi hai. aur jab thak tumhare hathonme ye gun hai, you know what will happen. Surrender yourself Arjun. aur fir hosake tho usse lejao"

He knew this was going to happen. There was a volcano inside him that wished to gulp the man in front of him.but no. he needed to give Rathod time. Only them they would be saved. But surrendering in front of him???

---

Shree: its clear. Riya yaha nahi hai. saare ladkiyonko yaha se nikalne ke taiyyari hogaye hei. Lekin Riya hai kaha?

Chotu: kuch jaldi karne hoga sir. Warna waha Sikander...

Rathod was silent. : ye Riya hai kaha??

---

He told his heart to wait for a while. he slowly took his gun and throwed it to Sikander's feet. He was shocked. But he took the gun.

"Wow, Arjun, mujhe ye nahi patha tha key a sab ithne asaasn hoga."

He points the gun at Arjun's heart...


PRECAP:
Riya: ARJUN...!!!!
All rush to him...

CHAPTER 29: PAGE 85
Edited by kunchu - 13 years ago

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