Ariya SS: This is Love ❤️ 'note'(14/10) - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful... Hope they soon recognise each other...!!
Gr8 part.. Thanks for the pm... Continue soon and take care!
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HI dearies...😊😊 thx for an amazing comments.. lovd it..😛 it reallie make me fell happy dat u lovd it... nd sorrie for late update.😕 actualiie was busy wid my national games nd den my exams. ab bht baatein ho gaye ... so here is an update.. hope u awll like it... do hit like button nd do leave ur comments...😊


Characters:

Arjun(A): Encounter specialist

Riya(Ri): Research specialist

Rathore(Ra): chief of ETF

Chottu(C): muscleman of ETF

Shree(S): It specialist

Karan(K): temporary forensic technician

Aliya: victim

Vineet(V): Aliya's friend

CO: club owner

Chapter # 3

After half an hour they reached the zodiac club


Ri: Sir aik baat pooch sakti hn ?

A: haan .. poocho..giving him a taunting smile ..😛😛😛 magar case se related honi chahiye😆😆

Ri: sir, apne us stamp ko kaise recognize kiya.. yeh club tou sirf youngsters ka hain na...aur aap tou..

A: tumhe kaise pata k yeh sirf youngsters ka hai ... tumhe dekh kar tou nahi lagta k tum club type ho.. n waisey mein is jagey k owner ko janta hn ..kuch mahino pehle aik case k liye us ne meri madad ki thi

Ri: Sir , aap itna yakeen se kaise keh sakte hai... Aap tou mere barey mein kuch jantey bhi nahi hai...😒

A: Arjun to himself... tumhara outer look bht kuch keh deta hai ..angry larki🤣

Ri: aap ne kuch kaha...

A: nahi ... ab agar tumhari baatein khatam ho gaye tou andar chaley...

Riya gives him a "fine" look 😳

They enter the club ,few staff members are setting up the place. The club owner(CO) walks over to them

CO: sir aap. meiney bataya tou tha k mujhe nahi pata tha k wo bachey under 18 hai..

A: Relax... us case ka tou paperwork bhi ho gaya hai... hum yahan aik naye case k liye aaye hai ...aur hamey yeh lagta hai k hamari last victim kal raat yaha aaye thi

Ri: aik larki jis ke red hairs thay aur wo apni early 20s mein thi ...jis k lower back par aik stars ki form k tattoo tha...

A: kuch yaad aaya

CO: haan haan ...wo tou hamari regular customer hai...aik minute..kya wo...dead

A: hamey sirf yeh batao kya wo kal raat idhar aayi thi .. aur agar aaye thi tou kya koi is k saath tha..

CO: haan haan .. wo kal apne friend vineet k saath ayi thi '. Wo takreban roz hi aatey thay'.

A: kya us ka address hoga aap k pass

CO: sir aik minute mujhe check karna parhey ga

The club owner went to his office after a couple of minutes arrive with a dairy in his hand

CO: sir yeh raha uska addres

Arjun calls rathore

A: rathore we have a lead'.vineet (aliya ka dost) jo kal raat us k saath tha.. hamey usey dhoondhney uske ghr jana parhey ga

Ra: tou tum abhi kaha ho '. Aur vineet k ghr ka kuch pata chala hai

A: haan wo club se uskey ghr ka address mila hai lekin abhi hum club mein he hain.. tou hamey waha paunchney mein kafi waqt lag jaye ga

Ra:thk hain phir tum mujhe address send karo mein aur chottu waha jatey hain..

A: ok.. n ends the call '.riya rathore ko wo address send karo'.

At ETF office'

Rathore phones vibrate... Riya's msg

Ra: chottu tum mere saath chalo '.shreee yeh number lo 'yeh vineeet ka number hain iskey sarey records mujhe chahiye'

S: ok sir '. Sarey records nikal kar.. I'll call u'.

Rathore n chottu leaves the office ' shreee gets to his work..

The zodiac club

Arjun and riya leave from the club.. .they are walking towards their suv ' while crossing the road a bus is coming very fast ..n riya is standing in the mid of the road

A:Riya 'bus n arjun pushes riya to the other side' n hurts his right arm'.tum thk ho

R: sir mein thk hn lekin aap ko kafi chot lag gaye hai'.. aur khoon bhi bht nikal raha hai'

A: its ok .. ab chalo kahi hum late na ho jaye'

R: but sir'.

A: chalo riya'

At Vineet's house

Rathore knocks the door'. A young muscular boy opens the door

Ra: ACP Rathore ETF..

V: sir mein aap ki kya madad kar sakta hoon

C: tumhe hamaray saaath chalna hoga

V:sir aik minute'

And he goes in his room.. closes the door'

Ra: chottu '.wo bhaag raha hai'

They went towards the door'the door was locked

Ra: chottu tum is area k police officer ko phone kar ke k vineet ki describtion do aur kaho k isey dhoondhey' mein back side se jata hoon'

C: okk sir

Rathore runs towards the back side and saw vineet running in an alley 'rathore chases him 'n after a lot of struggle '.he tackle him..

Chottu den arrives with some policemen ,,'. Chottu checks vineet's pockets n finds some medicine

C: sir yeh dekhey 'is ki pockets se yeh kuch medicines mili hai..

Ra: karan ko do aur kaho k is sab medicines ko check kar ke bataye..

Vineet is then taken away by chottu to the suv '.n they leave for the ETF office

In the suv (Arjun and Riya)

RI: sir please aik minute k liye car rokay ge

A: kiun kya hua riya..

Ri:sir aik minute k liye rokay tou sahi..

Arjun stops the car beside the footpath..

A: bolo riya..

Riya takes out her handkerchief and ties on his arm to cover his wound..

Ri: sir meri waja se aap ko kitni chot lag gaye'. aap ka bht khoon bhe raha hai' jab tak hum office nahi paunchtey isey bandhey rehney dijeye '.

A: riya its ok ' mamuli si chot hai '

While riya is tying ..she looks towards him'. He looks towards her'..n both gets lost in each others eyes'❤️.

After a couple of minutes a car from back gives a horn..n they comes out of their trance '. Arjun starts the car and soon they were on the way to the office'


In the car

Arjun's POV

Why I am getting attracted towards her '' mein kiun apnay aap par kabo nahi rakh pa raha ' aaj tak mein strict aur angry young man k naam se jana jata tha' yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe' aaj tak kisi larki ko apne karibb nahi aaney diya'. pehle dosti karne ki koshish , phir tu chill dude ban raha tha aur ab yeh eyelock' tu aisa sirf chashmish k saath tha' Arjun tu badal raha hai'tujhe riya se dur rehna ho ga' 😕😕

Riya's POV

Mein kiun itni fikar kar rahi hoon '. Mamuli si tou chot thi.. tu yeh kya kar rahe hai' apney upar kabu rakhna seekh'. Aur mat bhul k ladoo k baad tu ne kisi ko bhi apna dost nahi banaya'😕

AT ETF office'

Everyone is sitting in the conference room'.

Ra:arjun kya tumhe lagta hai ke yeh maskmaker vineet hai..

A: abhi kuch kehna mushkil hai ..abhi filhal hamarey pass yehi lead hai' hum tab tak kuch nahi keh saktey jab tak hum is sey baat na kar lein..

Ri: lekin sir'yeh killer ki profile se bht match karta hai' mid 20s, relation with the victim..

S: aur sir yeh medical student hai specialization pharmacy mein kar raha hai 'tou isey drugs aur medicines ki kafi achi achi knowledge ho ge'.

C: sir but vineet kafi dara hua hai' aur jis tarha victim ko mara gaya hai .. tou usey dekh kar tou nahi lagta k killer itna coward ho ga

Ra: ab vineet se baat karne k baad he kuch keh saktey hai'chottu vineet ko interrogation k liye le kar aao..

C: ok sir' n leaves the room

Karan (their temporaryforensic technician) enters the conference room

K: sir un medicines ki analysis kar liya hai jo vineet k pass se mili hai' ywh hydromorphone hai'.a derivative of morphine.. a narcotic. and it's availability is very low'an illegal drug' and it contain sleep inducing properties

A: aur agar is ka overdose ho jaye tou..

K: dizziness , lightheadedness, blackouts,

Ri: tou kya yeh wahi drug hai jo killer n use kiya hai un victims par.??

K: it may be possible'. But for accuracy mujhe kuch aur test karne parhey gey '

Karan leaves the room

Vineet is lead by arjun to the interrogation room'. Everyone else Is already present there..

Ra: vineet tum akhiri insaaan ho jis k saath aliya thi jab wo zinda thi..

V: kya matlab wo zinda thi..

Ra: Kal raat wo tumharey saath zodiac club mein thi.. phr 6 hours baad uski dead body mili hai'.

V: tou aapke kehne ka matlab hai k wo

A: mar chuki hai' aur sarey evidences tumhari taraf ishara kartey hai'.lastone to meet her'.illegal drugs'. Tumharey liye yehi behter hai k tum sab kuch sach sach bata do'..

V: Sir, mein aur aliya bht achey friends thay ..woh aur mein parties k liye saath he jaatey thay'..kal mein zodiac club mein tha tou uski call aaye .. aur phr thori dair baad wo khud udhar aa gaye '.usney aur mainey aik aik drink pe..aur phr wo waha se chali gaye'phir mujhe nahi pata'

Ra: jab tak yeh case solve nahi ho jata tum is city se kahi bahir nahi ja saktey'..filhaal tum ja saktey ho'

N vineet leaves..

Ra:mujhe lagta hain aaj k liye kafi kaam ho gaya hai' ab tum sab ko jana chahiye' ..waisey bhi full autopsy ki report to kal he aaye ge aur kafi late bhi ho gaya hai'.now go get some rest all of you'. Aur sab kal time se paunch jana ' koi late nahi hona chahiya'

Everyone walks out of the room'

Shree whispering to chottu: chal chottu aaj party ka mood ho raha hai'

C: haan chal kisi club chaltey hai'

S to Ra: bye sir..

Ra: ruko aisa karo tum dono mere saath chalo mein tuum dono ko drop kar doon ga..

Both at once' NAHIII SIRR

Ra: mein tum dono ko drop karne ka kaha hai' murder ka nahi'

C: nahii sir'hamara mmatlab hain aap kiun itni takleef kar rahe hai'.

S: ji sir hum dono khud chaley jaye ge..

Ra: mein pooch nahi raha bata raha hoon.. car mein baitho mein aa raha hnn'

S: nahii sir mein aaj apne ghr nahi ja raha' actually wo mein aunt k ghr jao ga unki tabiyat bht kharab hai'.

Ra: ok chalo mein tumhe waha chodh dn ga '

Meanwhile Arjun in the parking lot

A: Riya chalo mein tumhe chod deta hn..

Ri: Nahi ,its ok sir mein chali jao ge' mera ghr yahan se zayada dur nahi hai'

A: tou phr aao mein chod dn ga' fikar mat karo chaye k liye nahi ruko ga '.. n gives a smile'

Arjun to himself 'CONTROL URSELF'. his smiles fades away'

Ri: its ok sir..

In a little akhru tone

A: riya kafi late ho chukka hai ' aur aisey mein akele jana thk nahi hoga' baitho

Riya sits n thinks... pata nahi abhi aik minute pehle mazzak kar rahe thay.. aur ab'.

Chottu and shree are standing near rathore's car

S: aunti kaha se lao

C: tujhe kis ne jhut bolne ko kaha'.

S: tou kya yeh keh deta k club jana hai'

C: chal aisa kartey hai sir k aaney se pehley he yahan se nikal chaltey hai'

S: lekin sir ne yahan wait karne ko bola hain'.

C: tou tu wait kar.. phr aunt k ghr bhi le jana'

N gives him a look *shree tu tou gaya*

S: chal phr rathore sir k aaney se pehley chaltey hai'

They both leaves''

Precap :

Next day.. rathore in conference room

Ra: hamrai team mein do bht hi kabil n dedicated members hai '.. jo yahan se janey k baaad bhi puri dedication k saath investigation kar rahe thay'.n then looks toward shree and chottu'. 🤣

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Edited by aroojarain - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
amazing and awesome dear 😊
Edited by saba-ramisa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOMEEE!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one..!! Continue soon and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update... loved Ariya's concern for each other... update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is so lovely...

loving ria's softcorner for arjun..

Shree and chotu escaped from there..LOL..it was so hilarious...
thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome...
Loved chottu-shree nok-jhoks
Loved the way riya care fr arjun
Update soon
Thnks fr the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
That was amazing :)
ROFL ... Shree and Chottu are hilarious :D
Ariya's scene was so cute ;)
Lol the update sounds really interesting ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ds ff is very nice...i wish arjun n riya wud knw sun dat dey knw each odr frm childhood
cntinue soon n hope to read more
luv d precap 🤣

omg!!! shree n chotu r so dead🤣🤣
bechara arjun😒 aur kitna control karega..akhir dil to janta hi hain
update soon n pm me plz

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