Mystery- a new ff( DISCONTINUED)

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Here, I present to u a new ff...Hope you like it..

Mystery
Chapter 1
Three weeks after Riya's death:
Scene 1: Thane police station
6.15 Pm:
Inspector Lokhande is calling the ETF.Rathod picks up the phone.
Rathod:"Yes inspector, kaise phone kiya?"
Lokhande:"Woh sir, abhi abhi ek society se phone aaya tha. Kuch logon ne wahan ek flat ke andar se gunfires ki awaaz suni. Aur commissioner sir ne ye investigation aapko saunpne ko kaha."
Rathod:"Par ye to local police ka case hona chahiye.Etf kyon?"
Lokhande:"Sir baat ye hai ki uss society ki owner minister Ramsingh Daate ki wife hain. Isliye yeh case thoda sensitive."
Rathod:"Theek hai, Is society ka address do."
Lokhande:"jee sir, The Astoria society, 53 Power station road, Thane west."

Scene 2: ETF Office
6.30 Pm:
Rathod:"Team, ek investigation karne jana hai Thane."
Chhotu:"Kya hua hai sir?"
Rathod:"Ek society me ek flat ke andar gunfires ki awaaz suni gayi hai. Shree, The Astoria society ke baare mein information nikalo."
Shree:"Yes sir. Sir, woh department se ek letter aaaya hai." He hands the letter to Rathod.
Rathod(Reading the letter):" Isme likha hai ki, aaj raat Riya ke awarding ceremony mein hame uski replacement officer se milwaya jayega."
Shree(angrily):"Sir, Ree ki jagah aur koi nahin le sakti. Aur research specialist ka kaam to mai kar hi raha hun. Toh ek nayi officer kyun?"
Arjun(speaking for the first time):"Kitne achhe se kar rahe ho woh to dikh raha hai Shree. Rathod ne tumse Astoria society ke bare me pata karne ko kaha aur tum Astoria food chains par research kar rahe ho. Dhyaan kahan hai tumhaara?"
Shree:"Sorry sir."
Arjun:"Rathod, ab future ke baare me discussions khatam ho gayi ho to kaam par chalein?"
Rathod(irritated):"OK team, lets move."

So guyzz hw was it, if u want me to continue please tell me..I dont want to bore u if u dont like this story...

Part 1- pg1
Part 2- pg 2
Part 3- pg 3
Edited by arianaabyss - 12 years ago

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Sneha113 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh...etf to go to a flat where gun fires are heard!!
shree..lol...astoria food chain 🤣
riya k replacemnt...nooo 😭
ya sure do continue..wud wnt to read..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nic update.. waitng for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
Great start ...
Yes plz do continue ... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oye amazing new female lead yaha toh milegi😉pls update sn!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tnx fr ur support guyzz...i will soon update next part...nd if u want a pm add me to ur buddy list...
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CHAPTER 2

Astoria Society.

7.00 pm.

All the people living in the society are assembled in the ground floor. A man comes forward and introduces himself as the ssecretary Mr. Anil Mukherjee.

Mukherjee:"Sir, wo raat ke karib ek, sade ek baje 2nd floor ke flat no. 201 me goliyan chalne ki awaazein suni hai kuch logon ne."

Rathod:"AApne andar jaane ki koshish ki?"

Mukherjee:"haan sir, par kisine darwaza nahi khola."

Rathod:"Theek hai, hum investigate karenge. Waise uss flat me rehta kaun tha?"

Mukherjee:"Sir, ek ladki Isha Bhonsle, 6 saalon se iss society me rehti hai."

Shree goes for finding information about this girl.

Arjun:"Kya unhe chhodkar society ke baaki sabhi log yahan hain?"

Mukherjee:"Yes sir"

Arjun:"Woh log kaun hain jinhone goliyan chalne ki awaaz suni thi?"

5 people come forward- one couple, two boys and a girl.

The couple- Mr. Arpan Nayak and Mrs. Pragati Nayak. They both seem to be in their early thirties.

The boys were bachelors- Samarth Saxena and Debashish Randhawa. They seem to be in their late twenties.

The girl was Ms. Spandana Malhotra. She was beautiful and looked to be in her mid-twenties.

Mr. Arpan speaks:"Sir, ham dono flat no.200 me rehte hain. Kal raat hamne hamare side ki flat se goliyan chalne ki awaaz suni. Maine uss flat ka calling bell bajaya, lekin kisine darwaza nahin khola. Tab tak Samarth, Debashish aur Spandana bhi baahar aa gaye the. To hum sab saath mein secretary ji ke paas gaye aur aap logon ko bulaya."

Arjun:"Kya aap uss waqt so rahe the?"

Mr. Arpan:"Jee sir."

Rathod:"Theek hai. Raawte, chalein?"

Rathod, Arjun and Chotu start moving towards the building. Suddenly,the girl called Spandana interrupts them.

Spandana:"Sir, do goliyan chali thi. Unke timings me kuch 58 seconds ka difference tha. Lekin sir, mujhe lagta hai ki dono goliyan alag alag gun se chali hain."

Arjun:''Aapko aisa kyun lagta hai?"

Spandana:"Sir, pehli goli ki awaaz kuch 98 decibel(decibel is an unit to measure sound loudness) thi aur doosri goli ki kuch 94 decibel tak rahi hogi. Ek gun se do alag alag awaazon wali goliyan chalana possible nahin."

All of the ETF officers are shocked at her analysis, including Shree who had joined them by now, though only Rathore and Arjun could hide it.

Shree:"Aapko guns ke bare mein itna kuch kaise pata hai?"

Spandana:"Mai police force join karna chahti hun, sir."

Arjun:"Apni observation batane ke liye shukriya, ab chalein?"

Saying this he moves and the others follow him. On the way, Shree gives them the information he had collected:" Miss Isha Bhonsle, umar 25 saal. Anath hai. Delhi ke Asha orphanage mein bachpan beeta, phir Delhi se college ki padhai khatam karke modeling karne Mumbai chali aayi. Pichle 6 saalon se yahin rehti thi. Mumbai ke famous magazine "shireen" ki cover page model thi."

Arjun:" Iske phone records chahiye mujhe."

Shree:" haan sir, uske liye maine department ko phone kar diya hai. Kal subah tak records aa jayengi."

They reach flat no.201. Chotu breaks open the door. All of them go inside the house and start searching. They find two bullet shells in the living room and send them for ballistic tests. But besides that they find nothing in the living room or even the bedroom. Shree and Chotu proceed to check the kitchen. That's when Shree shouts:" Sir, laash."

All of them gather in the kitchen. They find a burnt body in the refrigerator. There are no belongings on the body.

Rathore:" Shree isse postmortem ke liye bhejo. Aur pata karo yeh body Isha ki hai kya?"

Shree:"Theek hai sir."

Arjun:" Badi ajeeb baat hai. Ghar mein goliyan bhi chali hain, par body ko jalaya gaya hai, aur laash rakhi gayi hai refrigerator mein. Interesting."

Chotu:" Sir, chalein ? Investigation kal continue karenge. Hume Riya ki award ceremony mein jaana hai."

Rathore:" Theek hai."

All of them go downstairs. Their Mr. Mukherjee and all other society members are waiting.

Rathore:" Uss ghar mein ek laash mili hai."

Mukherjee:" Kya?? He bhagwan wo Isha bitiya ki naa ho."

Arjun:" Ye case solve hone tak koi sheher se bahaar nahi jayega. Samjhe ya samjhaun?"

Mukherjee:" Ok sir."

Edited by arianaabyss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very interesting..!!!
spandana was soo intelligent and knows soo much about guns...
no wonder she wants to join police force as she says..!!!
burnt dead body in fridge🤢..
waiting for your next update..
thanks for the pm dear..
Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update :) continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome..but What about New entry?

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