New OS: Confessions in the Elevator

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

that was awesome...
OMG arjun flirting nd rathod asks riya direct abt da proposal>> kya neighbours hai riya k :p

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Akku

@.FieryPhoenix.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Just... amazing. I'm speechless!

First of all I am sorry for not commenting on ur other FFs. Actually, I did not read ARiya FFs after Roya's exit. Its after a veryyy long time m reading. So, plz forgive!

As for ur FF, it was just exquisite. U beautifully portrayed the emotions. Loved it!

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pravallika

@prava55663

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

exactly i would feel the same which you said at the end...

whenever i go into an elevator i would definitely remember ariya and next your OS..😊

They were only for half an hour in the lift...that was too less time😆...hope they will get stuck in elevator more time next time😉...

beautifully written...superb...👏

Edited by prava55663 - 12 years ago

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Fantastic OS... i'm grinning aftr reading this...

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shagun05

@shagun05

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

this was just like my favourite!!!

so full of drama!

emotions!

romance!

naughtiness!!

awesome... just too good.

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AnnieARS

@AnnieARS

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Lovely!!

I too will always remember this story when in elevator from now on.

You are really good are writing!!

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Mrs.Rane

@Mrs.Rane

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Hey, been a silent reader 4 a way tooo long.. N urs is the first story that i m commenting on... I luv all ur ff/os/ss... Jthj n yun tere muskarana my most faves of all... And after reading thiz one... Itz goin 2 be my most fave... I only read arjun ffs n sooo far u are my most favorite writer...i m a potterhead(hp fan).. But now an ariyan tooo... I just love reading ur ffs... Anyways, i just love everything abt ur writings... Plzzz update shayad yahi to pyar hai.. Dying 2 read that... See ya...x

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sunshine94

@sunshine94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

tu kya ghazab likthi hai.,

write regulary yaar

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Miss Sara

@Samaira32

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

This is so cute..
My house is on ground floor and class room..
Not allowed to use lifts in colg.. It's basically for the prof..
But whenever I enter - I am gonna remember this and em sure the other people in the elevator are gonna think I am mad for grinning like an idiot..
But this is so cute... And the oter lady's comment. - Rofl..
I was studying pathology and den reading this on my phone hiding it with my text and my mum asked me - "Beta, from when did Patho become so hilarious..?"

Aha .. Do write more. You are mind blowing ...
Too much of bak bak na.. Aadat se majboor lol
Oki I gotta go else mum will snatch my phone now... :D