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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Dhani you nailed it my friend..it was so different & intense sailing me in boat to Ariya land 😳
I was like watching a movie in single shot update..thanks so much 😃

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

@radhika

thanks dear😊

@vidya.aanand

thank you so much 😳

@tami

dear again it was one shot single update

i'm glad you like it 😛;

Edited by Charli_ - 12 years ago

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

@leki

thanks dear

@shruti-love

thanks babes 😊

@shrutisweety

i guess you misunderstood

it was single update but thanks for reading it 😳

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sbp1971
Very nice OS, a whole new concept. Really liked it.

Thanks for the PM.

thanks alot shilpa di

i'm so happy reading your

coz i'm fan of your writing

yeah concept was n quite fresh

i had fun writing it 😳

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: rimss19

amazing yaar, i loved it!!!! ur way of writing is so good!!!!! i really want u to write more!!!!!

thanks rimms

its was my Scecond os

still to finish writing FF update

well soon i'll will some more 😆

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nivanthi2

@nivanthi2

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

wow sweet simple lovely story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: AstuteASR
Nice One

thanks so much reading it 😊

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

lovely os dear

so arjun thought riya too good for him

and Riya thinking that arjun loves roshni

but you made roshni such a bad person dear😭

however loved the way Arjun and Riya confessed and cared and loved each other

Please continue in giving us such wonderful OS in future😉

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM
Agin gr8 work Dhani...! 👏
Roshini insulted ma Rhea... 😡
Arjun Rhea confession wz awesome dear... And the dance.. Me in Arhea Dreamland!
😳
every clg has these beauty-queens.. I hate them... 😡
gr8 o/s... Keep writing.. Thanks for the pm... N take care haan!!!

thanks sanchi

oh i want see them dance in show

but its not possible so i thought atleast in OS

i'm always in ariya dreamlad

lol i too faced that in mine collage there are two of them

i'll surely keep writing

you too take care sweetie

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Dhani

@Dhani_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: priya00147
it was extremely lovely OS...😊

wow..riya and roshni are childhood friends!!!and dat roshni how dare she make fun of riya's looks 😡

sameer's brothrly lov and undrstanding is awesome!!!

oh so arjun chose roshni to keep riya away for her good!!!sacrifice and sacrifice!!

roshni is seriously irritating and mean!!!good dat arjun and riya are finally wid each other!!

writers POV awesome 😉

ab comment,like kar dia toh aur likhegi for sure!!

thanks priya

i'm glad you like it

that chaildhood was in mind for couple of day finally pen it down

lol sameer is quite like show 😆

actully he thought he might hurt her... really painful scrifice 😭

actully first when someone potrate her as negetive one😲

she is all goodie goodie in show 👏

writers POV is mine sypnosis on story

so cool you liked that too

well i'll keep writing 😳