FF MERE RANG MEIN CHAP 7 UPDT PG 19 16/12/2012

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

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.😭.😭.😭😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭

dear this is really amazing i really don't have words to describe...why this is not happen in the show also...hey don't take my words wrong i'm not saying ki riys will go all this horrible experience but i want her to be alive in the show...as same like you story

your story is awesome...good work dear...i really impress by your writings

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pooja bhattacharya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
.😭.😭.😭😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭.😭

dear this is really amazing i really don't have words to describe...why this is not happen in the show also...hey don't take my words wrong i'm not saying ki riys will go all this horrible experience but i want her to be alive in the show...as same like you story

your story is awesome...good work dear...i really impress by your writings

thanks dear...even i wish that something like this happens like this and we get our riya back...anyways thankyou for liking my work.and thankyou for your lovely comment as well.

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: pbhattacharya

thanks dear...even i wish that something like this happens like this and we get our riya back...anyways thankyou for liking my work.and thankyou for your lovely comment as well.

hey dear itna bhi thank you mat bolo...i really love your ss ...yes each and every word which write is true it come from my mind...😛

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pooja bhattacharya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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NOTE

HEY GUYS VERY SORRY COULD NOT UPDATE TODAY...ACTUALLY I WONT BE ABLE TO UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER TILL FRIDAY BECAUSE SHIFTING IS GOING ON AND BELIEVE ME ITS REALLY HECTIC...I HOPE YOU ALL UNDERSTAND...THANKYOU FOR READING MY WORK AND LIKING IT.

LOVE
POOJA🤗

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

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No probs... Take ur time... bt whn u update make it a looong chapter😉

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elle..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

That was an awsum update..
Doctor to.gaye abb!!!
Update soon nd.a long one

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pooja bhattacharya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I am extreamly sorry for updating so late...but there was a lot of work and i was really very tired...
anyways i did not proof read this chapter so if any mistakes plz forgive me...anyways here's the next chapter...hope its upto your expectations...thankyou for reading all of you.

chapter 3(A)

Shree kept looking at riya,he never in his dreams had thought that
he would be scared or afraid of riya,his friend and partner in crime
to play pranks on chotu...

he felt tounge tied in front of her for the first time.when he was
gathering his courage to talk to her,riya spoke.

riya:shree please drop me home i dont feel comfortable here

shree:pagal ho gayyi ho riya agar mein tumhe yaha se parking
lot tak bhi leke gaya na toh woh samjhe ya samjhaun mera
keema bana dega.

riya stared at him for a few seconds and then she smiled soon
her smile turned into a giggle.

shree's eyes became moist as he saw her giggling he thought he
would never be able to see her dimpled smile again...in a rush
of a moment he sat beside her and took her in a tight bear hug...
riya was shocked for a bit but that shock turned into something
unfathomable she froze as she felt his tears soaked her dress.

before she could utter a word to console him to reasure him that
she is there for him and wont leave him so soon shree started speaking,he told her how much he missed her...he told her he felt
like some part of him died as he thought that she was no more

how shattered he was as he saw her in the hospital cold and still.
riya was touched she felt guilty for her outburst a few minutes ago
she felt her eyes become moist.

CITY HOSPITAL
doctor singh:how could you be so careless,where could she go,
search for her in the entire hospital she might have not gone far as she is very weak,and go talk to dr rajan and tell him to shift the other
patients in the room near the mourge...if she managed to escape and contact the etf team they would not check in the mourge and we will be safe...we can say that her testimony cannot be counted as she is not in the condition to differentiate between the truth and lies.

a voice spoke from behind...she is an etf officer she is more
stronger and capable than you can imagine.
when the doctor turned to the owner of that voice he was shocked
and he started trembling,he could only mutter acp raute you here
can i help you with something.

Arjun's blood started boiling he thought how can this person be a doctor a life saver,he did not have an ounce of guilt instead he was trying to do damage control.riya's pale face came in front of him and he saw red with two long strides he went towards the doctor and grabbed his neck in a chocking hold...he narated to the doctor,do you know what i am doing right now,i am blocking you trechea so it cant cant pass oxygen to your heart and brain.slowly your heart will stop beating and your brain will stop working and then you'l be gone forever

the doctor said please leave me i am really sorry,this got arjun even more mad he threw him backwards and landed a kick on his spleen.he told him that his sorry is not even worth a penny.the doctor
crouched down with pain.arjun twisted his hand so badly that the nurse and the ward boy standing there could hear the cracking of the bones in the doctors body...they did not dare to intervene cause they were afraid of the consequences to that.

Rathod and chotu came at that time and pulled arjun away from the doctor,rathod got angry and said are you going to kill him raute he is a criminal and your this act can get him out on technicality you are an etf officer you have to abide by the law not break it.arjun was still seething in anger and answered yes i will kill him and break the law this scumbag hurt my riya i mean our riya and he cannot get away with this.

rathod sighed and said yes he will not get away with this but we have to keep him alive cause there are more patients like riya this guy experimented on,this calmed arjun down a bit,rathod cuffed the doctor the nurse and the ward boy he asked chotu to call back up and the forensic team here asap.

back at the etf headquaters
riya asked shree to stop crying as he was a big boy now,she emphasized on big boy cause she knew it would irk him as well as
distract him and that statement from her did the trick,shree let her
go and told her that he is not a boy but a man and riya rolled her eyes
at that.

riya asked shree to do her a favor ,shree said that he could do anything for her she does not even need to ask him just has to say the word and he would do it.riya told him not to get so senti it does not suit him.and this time shree rolled his eyes at her...he asked her what can he do,riya gave him a number and asked him to call the person here asap.

shree was about to dial the number when he recieved chotu's message that arjun sir and rathod sir have taken the doctor to the etf interrogation room.shree was contemplating whether to tell riya or not when riya asked him did he call the person or not,shree answered that there's no network here and went away he came back and said don't move an inch from here and then he went near the photo of her and tore of the garland off of it.

he went outside and called the person and told her to come to the etf office immediately.the person on the other end was stunned,she did not want to go to the etf office because she thought that the etf officers incompetent and they could not save her friend but she decided to go there cause she thought it must be somehing important or else they would not have called her at this time at night.

shree returned back and saw that riya was not there he panicked and searched for her everywhere but could not find her,only one place was left the interrogation room and he hoped that she hadn't gone there cause he knew that if arjun sir saw her there he would loose his cool and may end up beating the doctor to death.

to be continued
phew finally updated...sorry guys forthe late update...the next part would be updated on sunday cause handelling college,work,shifting and writting is really hectic...hope you all will understand...hope this chapter was long enough to your expectations.

please comment and press like if you liked the update...thankyou all for all the support and patience you all have shown...love you guys...tc

Edited by pbhattacharya - 12 years ago