Poem Kash... (my 2nd one)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Poem : Kash!!

Kash tu mujhe chod kar kabhi yu na jati..

K Maine tere intzaar, mei har pal yu duba na hota

Milne k chahat mai Yu khoya na hota...

Har pal ek pal tere hi khayalon me duba hu mai

Kash tera yu chale, jana mai rok pata

Kash tu mujhe chod kar kabhi yu na jati...

Ki teri yaad mujhe tadpati...

Dikha na pau mai sabko voh gum

Lekin tu voh dekhte hi samaj pati...

Kash tera yu chale jana mai rok pata...

Kash tu mujhe chod kar kabhi yu na jati..

Lekin is kismat ne ye kaisa khel khela

K Abhi yha reh gya hu mai tere bagiar

Tere bina abh kaise katege din kaise katege ye raate...

Kab hogi voh mulakate fir dubara banege naye Yaadein'

Kash tera yu chale jana mai rok pata

Kash tu mujhe chodkar kabhi yu na jati na jati na jati...

Kash

Is kash ke dam parDati hai meri zindagi

Abh chalu na mai tere bin'

Tham si gayi hai ye zindagi

Abh usi rahon mai tujhe dhundte rahunga har din'

Kash tu mujhe chodkar kabhi yu na jati

Na jati kabhi najati...

-Shru
--------------------------------------------Thank you all for liking my previous Poem Yaadien.. I'm sorry for hurting you all with this emotional one but I couldnt resist but share it with you all..😕 please do comment and share your veiws on my poem.. Good or bad whatever it is please do let me know...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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all i can think about while reading your work is Arjun's eyes welling up😭
nothing else comes into my mind😒
you made me emotional once again sistah😔
i feel like crying my heart out😭

and this is, once again, a great piece of work babez...⭐️
love the way you put all the emotions into one piece of work. 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: _mahi_

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all i can think about while reading your work is Arjun's eyes welling up😭
nothing else comes into my mind😒
you made me emotional once again sistah😔
i feel like crying my heart out😭

and this is, once again, a great piece of work babez...⭐️
love the way you put all the emotions into one piece of work. 🤗

I have apologized already but once again I'm sorry for this emotional poem yaar...Cry
I cried when I penned it down myself..😔
btw sistah... what's with all these appreciation omg they are too much yaar seriously...😳
Thanks for liking it once again dear. 😆
You're one of my biggest support out here🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kya re shru rulaegi kya!!
i still have a bleeding heart 😭
poem was nice..sorrry pura ni padh pae 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg this so touching i can see the sad arjun but honestly wished he would have shown more emotion ..but abt ur poem it was just wow great job
👏😳😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shru u mde me cry again... 😭😭😭
Abhi abhi ti sabhale the , ab vaapis usi daur se gujarana hoga.
Bhul na paayenege hum kabhi tujh ko ,
Tu hamare Dil mai bas gayi ki , hamari saas ki tarah.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaar...i don't hav any words...!!!
it was jst awesome...jst imagined arjun closing riya's eyes...ol over d poem...!!!
omg...
i jst got mum (silent) after reading it!!!
hats-off buddy!!!

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