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Posted: 13 years ago
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ARJUN KA SOCH RIYA KELIYE


Tumhari AANKHON ko dekhkar…
Aisa lagta hai ki iss mein hee saari DUNIYA basi ho….
Aisa lagta hai baaki sab suna hai tum bin…
Tumhari inn AANKHON mein bas jaaun,
Tumhari iss MUSKURAAHAT ko
dekhta hun to aisa lagta hai
ki ye PHOOL bhi kya cheez hoti hai!!!
Bas tumhari CHAMAAK ko dekhkar
TAARE bhi SHARMAATE hai…..

DIL karta hai ki tumse wo
Teen lafz keh dun,
lekin fir SOCHTA hun
ki tumhein bhi apne DARD kyo dun
jab tumhein apne aapse dur karta hun to
jitna tumhein DARD hota hai
usse jyada mujhe hota hai…

Tum hi meri DUNIYA ho….
Tum hi mera PYAAR!!!!

plz comment and hit the lyk button if u liked it

Edited by gwentlend - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow dear this is so good ...

i really feel like ariya dreamland
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW...that was sooo romantic...really nice!

I hope Riya comes back to hear this from Arjun!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The poem is amazing Gwen ...

its superb ,fantastic


Edited by tani23 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow

2nd stanza was simple awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww that was adorable...hope arjun saves riya...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb yaar...thanks for pm

loved the last...tum hi mere duniya..tum hi mere pyar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I don't understand hindi well !!
But it seem to be beautiful !


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow... Cathy...
2 COOL...
Kaash ki ARJUN aisa kehta RIA se...
Hope fully ki wo aisa keh de FUTURE mein..😎
so for your Nice POEM here is something for you...
Kuch mitha ho jaaye...🥳😉



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful gunnu
every line was amazing aur tum keh rahi the ki mujhe poems likhna nahi ata
bt me very sad now
feel like crying
i dont wanna sana to quit
Edited by samiya.059 - 13 years ago

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