Ariya OS: Ek duje k Vaaste

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: tani23

thank u so much ...😊
will think of sum nice plot n will put it up soon

all the best dear, will wait for it😉

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Gwendchotabhoot

@Gwendchotabhoot

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

bade vampire jee

aapne to kamaal kr diya👏

aap bhut ache writer ho⭐️👍🏼

and thanks alot ki ek hee baar mein os complete😉😃

mujhe wait krna bilkul pasand nhi hai😳😃

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sneha

@Sneha113

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

awesome OS!! loved the arjun-arjun similarity!! finally he found his family 😊 do write more..

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pravallika

@prava55663

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

hey that's nice...loved it dear

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Thanks to all of u ...😊

i m super happy 👏

no 1 is disliking it...every1 praising 👏

no1 finding ny mistakes

u cn tell me mistakes ...😉

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Sanchayita

@Love_Arnie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Congratsss! Yippeee! Your first os..
Sorry for late comment... My browser's fault.. I had read it yesterday but can't comment..
I am coming to HIT YOU WITH MY HUG... loved it...
I was just awesome... Wow! Brilliant concept!
Junior Arjun so intelligent... Calling Shree with his name.. N enquiring him as his boss!
He drinks cutting chai! Omg!!!
And the hostage part... Uff! I was so scared...
N the part where ArIya met was so intense...
Loved it...
Plzz... Tani... One more OS today... Plz... M very greedy..plz.. Ek likkho na...
Thanks for PM... N don't u dare to stop PM-ing me bcoz I comment late...
Keep writing n take care..
Love, Shuchi...

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573339

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

awesome OS.. really loved it 😃

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome Os
bestest one
just loved this one a lottt

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

purva I guess you will hit me now sabse zyada late comment kiya hai 😆
this is your first attempt here?? then you truly rockz it 👍🏼
Oh I love this photocopy of Arjun..so cute..samjhe ya samjhayun 😛
very nice...love it so much 😊