FF- A Lovely Hatred. Complete. - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: RiMjHiM19

luv u too tani 😳 🤗even i am upset to make u all upset but what to do, i don't have any other idea to extend the story 😆 ...and yes, i personally love shree a lot 😳 i think he is cute 😳 so i always make his love story the cutest 😳!!! 😆 thnks again 🤗


even i personally like shree a lot...his gadget freakness always impress me

tab hi to my stories are mostly dedicated to him 😉 or his part s very important 😆

PS: m waiting for Ariya stuff from ur side
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey guyzz...this is the last update of this FF 😭

and mujhe epilogue likhna bilkul nahi aata toh maine kuch bhi likh diya hai...plzz maaf karr do error queen ko...plzz.pllzzz...plzzz...

.😆 accha-accha sorry aur nahi pakaaongi...ye raha update...

...


11 years later……………………………….

Riya entered a dark room with a tray in her hand. She kept the tray on a side table and moved the curtains to make the light fall on the bed and reveal arjun, who was deep in sleep. She smiled. She went to the bed and sat next to him. She caressed his head moving her hands gently through his hairs. He smiled in his sleep and opened his eyes to see her.

Arjun- kya hua? Aaj toh Sunday hai na….🥱

Riya- mazaak band kariye arjun…..aaj agar aap jaldi nahi uthe toh suraj aapko maar dalega….

She giggled😆. Arjun got up at once.😕

Arjun- oh no! vo utha toh nahi na abhi tak???😕

Riya- nahi…..jaldi kariye, mai coffee le aayi hoon….be fast…..😃

She smiled and went out. She reached the hall which was decorated with balloons and lights. A beautiful and young girl was keeping the cake on the table. Riya looked at her and smiled.😊

Riya- pari…..😊 cake ready bhi ho gaya?😊

Pari- yes mami….its done…..😊

Pari smiled brightly. She tidied up the table and went back to the kitchen to get the other things.

Riya looked around to check if everything was ready. Just then she heard a noise coming from outside which was approaching the hall. Pari came out of the kitchen with few items.

Riya- kaun aa raha hai pari? Itna shor karte huye?😕

Pari- aur kaun hoga mami...😆

Riya- oh yes…..of course….mai kaise bhool gayi…..😆

The door opened and shree and samara entered with two big packets full of gifts and chocolates.

Samara- riya, ye tab se mujhe tang karr raha hai…mai keh rahi hoon ki maine sab rakh liya hai but ye hai ki….

Shree- tumne mera vaala gift nahi rakha hai, mai jaanta hoon…….

Riya- ok! Ok! Ok! First wait……pehle ye dono bags jaake table pe rakho and then ladai karna…..

Arjun came down fully dressed up.

Arjun- aa gaye shree….?😃

Shree- hi bhai...aap tayaar hain?😃

Arjun- haan ofcrs!😃

Samara went to arjun and hugged him.

Samara- awww aap bohot acche lag rahe hain!!!😳

Arjun laughed.😆

Arjun- tum bhi samara…..😊

Shree- he bhagwaan! Mujhse zyaada toh tum bhai se pyaar karti ho na samara….!!😆

Samara- uffoo shree...😳😆

Shree- kya uffo?? Ek saal ki bacchi ki maa ho aur harkate 16 saal ki bacchi jaisi hain abhi bhi……😆

Every1 laughed.😆

Just then sameer enetered with his wife. They greeted everybody.

He was followed by a little boy who was soon going to turn 10 years old. He was pushing a pram with a little baby girl in it, she was Pihu, samara and shree's daughter.

Samara- thnku aakash, ghuma liya pihu ko?😊

Aakash- yes bua….bohot mazaa aaya…thnks….😃

Shree went and took pihu in his hands.

Rathore- chalo arjun, abb aakash ke best friend ko utha diya jaate…..kyu?

Arjun- haan sure…

Arjun called suraj down. suraj was still feeling sleepy, he came to the hall in the sleepy mood and looked around the dark room.

Suddenly the lights were on and he could see the most important persons of his life…he was delighted.

They all shouted- "happy birthday suraj"🥳👏

He smiled and ran to his father and mother….riya and arjun.😃

Suraj- thankyou papa, thnku mamma….😊

Then he looked around..

suraj- thankyou so much all of you!

Rathore- isme thankyou kya? Aaj tum bade ho gaye ho….poore 10 saal ke……👍🏼

They all gave him the gifts and celebrated the birthday cheerfully…..

and they lived happily ever after...😳😆

...

kaisa laga? batao na plzzz...and that is it guyzzz...this FF is over now...thnku very...very...very...very...much for your support...love you all guyzz...🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum ji
lov it
lol 11yr leap wow
haye super cute ji
grt ending
yay me first widout pm
keep writing dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww payal...thnku so so so much...and i will soon strt a new FF on arakshi now...
Edited by RiMjHiM19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww shoo cute epilogue...!!!!😳
sab ke babies bade ho gaye...!!! aur shree samara ka nok jhok abhi tak band nai hua😆
ending was lovely...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a lovely epilogue...
Loved it...
Aww...
The babies were too cute and chhhwwweeettt...
Love them.
Will miss this FF a lot...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice end dear . Loved it. Please keep writing on ariya:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rimmsi ...A lovely hatred's ...very lovely precap

it was nice n beautifully written


i m expecting another Ariya stuff from u ..Samjhi ya samjhayun

PS: n How was ur exam ??? aaaj JEE tha na ??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tani23

Rimmsi ...A lovely hatred's ...very lovely precap


it was nice n beautifully written


i m expecting another Ariya stuff from u ..Samjhi ya samjhayun

PS: n How was ur exam ??? aaaj JEE tha na ??

thnks tani...😳 i am planning on writing something on arakshi now, ppl are requesting me to write so...may be i will write on arakshi now...
and exam was kind of good...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww that was such a cute epilogue :) loved it
very well written
ending was superb :)

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