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Posted: 13 years ago
Glad that riya and arjun and together
poor neha
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
fab update di..
ariya part was nyc...
neha story super emotional...
whos dada nw?!
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god...ye dada kon h


yar y u upd sooo late...

do update jldi

ye kese suspense pe finish kr diya...

emotional updats thi...well written
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks alot for updating and coming back with a bang👏


yes it was emotional update but its evil truth😡

anyways😔

do update soon😊

eager to see ariya from now on😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice 1 ...
loved it...
continue soon...
tfs fr d PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
mushi di i am so happy to see yoir pm after such a long time.thanks di.

how can people be so!!! I cant find words for those jerks..feeling to cry for her..how much she went through..& that police inspector how could he asked so cheaply..disgusting.

rohan being himself a police officer is such a bu****d & who is neha's dada?? means her own brother!!!! I am still in shock.

i realy want Riya to be back in ETF & fight back for neha..

too emotionalpart di,thanks for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow u updated... thnx... dada?? that means her father?? he made rohan do this??? disgusting!!!

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
My dear Mushi,

This chapter was even more gut wrenching than the last one, and that had already made me feel sick to the pit of my stomach, as you would have seen from my comments.

A few more cases like these, and no girl would be able to trust any man ever again. And if this can happen to a police officer, what to say of ordinary girls? Of course not all men are this vile, this is a very small minority, but fear would drive out all faith and trust across the board, which would be very sad.

How did the goons get into her room? Once they managed that, the rest followed inevitably. Usually, in good hotels, they do not give the room numbers of their lady guests, but here of course Rohan was the main criminal, so they would not have had to even try to get the room number. But what about the key? I suppose they must have bribed a staff member to let them in, but this too should not happen in good hotels.

I had written about your chapter 5 that Neha should not have killed herself and visited such a tragedy on her parents, but should have fought the case if she felt up to it. Now I see that she did fight, and the suicide was not due to her lack of guts, but because she discovered a betrayal far worse even than Rohan's, obviously by someone near and dear to her- dada is normally used in Maharashtra for an elder brother. It is this that destroyed her inside and out, and made it impossible for her to continue living. Terrible, but we will understand it when we learn who 'dada' was.

Lastly, as for the ghastly video, many college and even high school boys these days seem to be busy making MMSs of their close encounters with their girl friends, and often sharing them with their male friends and boasting about their 'conquests'. It is all ugly beyond the comprehension of old fogies like me. It seems to me that our old ways of being cautious about how we behaved with the opposite sex might have been wise after all.

Incidentally, since this chapter inevitably reminds one of the Delhi bus horror of last month, you and the others reading this post should see this article from the London Guardian on Jan 1, 2013.


It is revealing of how horrible things can be for women in all societies, and the contrast in the Indian public reaction to the Delhi horror and the local American reaction to what happened to that poor 16 year old is striking.

Shyamala Aunty

PS: I wish Neha had shot Rohan, and also some of the thugs in that other hotel room while she had the chance

P.S. This is quite an emotional update so please put a pack of tissue papers by your side. This update cotains neha's story as i wanted to finish this track off and from next part ariya and ETF will be in action😳
PART 6:


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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing
ariya are awesome
poor neha fell bab for her
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOOOW!!!! Firstly special mention kiliye bahut shukriya! lekin aapko toh support hi karna tha, kyunki aap bahut achi likthi ho!!! and secondly, akhir mein apna update kar diya!! bahut he emotional update thi, isiliye thank you! lekin aap please itni der mat kijye update karne mein, mein sach mein seat upar se gir jaongi ;-) keep up the good work!!!
xxx

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