NEW FF: YOU ARE MY LOVE!!!... PART 3-Pg 6 29/9

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CHARACTERS(new in this one)

RAJIV KHANDELWAL: A cop working as FBI officer, in India for a mission.


JENNIFER: Rajeev's fianc and also a FBI officer, but in India as an undercover she's just rajeev' friend.



Guys I am not writing a two shot but a ff on this...

INDEX...

Part1-Pg2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/65616890

Here is the part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/arjun/3203009/new-ff-you-are-my-love-part-3-pg-6-29-9?pn=3

PART 3 (scroll down on the link given) pg 6




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Posted: 13 years ago
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wanted to insert the images, but couldn't so you guys can check out these new characters at the given link😊 plz do check out.
Edited by meghasingh - 13 years ago
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go ahead with it 😃
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sure sure...rajeev khandelwal...my sweetheart...❤️
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sure continue dear... 😊 Can't wait for lini and archie characters... I love the cute fights you describe in your story and the way they talk to Riya as sister love it!!! So yes please do continue😊
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oops... didn't got enough response... but still here's a glimpse of precap. read this, and plz tell me whether I should continue or drop this idea...??

Suddenly a hand rested on her shoulder, she looked around and then her mouth was wide open... "you" an both of them hugged as if two soul mates are meeting after centuries... The whole team is looking in astonishment while chotu and shree were trying to read something on arjun's face. especially he held her waist and went to a corner.

"Tum yahan...??"
"Something secret"??
" Mujhse secret... ab tum mujhe bhi nahin bataoge??"
"Well... kisi ko mat batana...it's about sikandar..."

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wow this is going to be interesting ha...
do continue it ...i think all will like it
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yes u should! i am already eager to know what it is abt... please update soon!
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go ahead dear...its interesting..plzz update soon:)
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So, I decided to start this ff and here it is….. thanks for bearing the torture friends… and still liking it and commenting. So here it goes and please comment, it inspires me a lot, to write more..
ETF team was on their way……. But this time for any case, but because of their excellent work and they were being awarded for their achievements, and a high profile party🥳 was organized in their honor…And Due to a request of the CM, the team agreed to go together…. Nobody has any problem really, except Arjun, but this time he agreed without any comments or Classic 'Arjun' tantrums😲… Everybody was excited… especially Riya… and she definitely was looking awesome, gorgeous and fantastically elegant in a backless, black gown⭐️.
http://www.google.com/imgres?hl=en&safe=off&client=firefox-beta&hs=yrj&sa=X&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&biw=1366&bih=632&tbm=isch&prmd=imvns&tbnid=FkcGql4slsvZCM:&imgrefurl=http://www.socialbliss.com/britty/backless-dresses-HE4DO&docid=sfFVkjbS_3gsyM&imgurl=http://www.socialbliss.com/assets/user_images/pic_13_1334051252.jpg&w=360&h=460&ei=RmtcUMPOJYjPrQehrYFw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=117&vpy=123&dur=68&hovh=254&hovw=199&tx=111&ty=157&sig=101937913291125982436&page=1&tbnh=142&tbnw=112&start=0&ndsp=29&ved=1t:429,r:0,s:0,i:73
here's the link for the dress.
But again Mumbai's traffic😭…… so they had to take another way, through the jungle… but it was a long way… and Riya just closed her eyes and she felt asleep when her phone vibrated, chotu was about to awake Riya but shree stopped him, and he picked the call… and before he could he speak anything a voice of a girl said it all in one breath… without giving him a chance to say anything and just cut the call.

"Di….no….let me speak ..and agar aap kuch bole na …to ….. to main Arj…no aapke innocent archie ka murder karne wali hoon…….. seriously…..i am serious…. I mean last time aap mujhse pehle use mile the…..it's not fair, aap sister meri ho na……to this time Archie ko just forget….or it won't be good for him…… I mean he's such a cheater…….kaise vo main baad mein bataungi, and right now.. main aapse baad mein call karti hoon and mere paas aapke liye ek awesome surprise hai…"

Shree was literally dumbstruck😲 after the phone call and was trying to figure things out… Arjun who was driving, also glanced behind to see what happened when a Lamborghini at 165 km/hr…as if driving by someone drunk hit their SUV and all of them including Riya were shocked for a second… Except Riya everybody was angry too…as she didn't knew what has just happened. But as they thought that the luxurious car would go on it's way without giving a damn to what happened…… the door opened, and a girl in her teens came only to be face Arjun and his wrath…….

Girl came to him… "Is everybody alright…? I'm sorry… actually.. vo"

Arjun:😡😡😡😡 Tum pagal ho kya… ye car chalane ka koi tareeka hota hai kya…… waise tumhe dekhkar to lagta bhi nahin kit um car chalane ke layak bhi ho……….. license kahan hai tumhara …vo to hoga hi nahin.. hai na, tumhari age saaf pata chal rahi hai…tumne yahan humari car thok di aura b sorry😡……

He would have continued his lecture if the girl, who was quite frustrated now cut him between and replied him, in such an authoritative tone that probably nobody would have imagined that someone can talk to Arjun Raute…

Gir😲l: Enough😡…….nonsense ki had hoti hai… first of all.. mind your tone..mujhse koi aise baat nahin karta….. ek to I was concerned ki meri vajah se kisi ko chot na pahunchi ho aur tum … you know what I could drove away but I stopped because meri galti thi… and I said sorry for that… kahin jaana hai hai to main lift de doongi and job hi damage hua hai, main uska payment kar doongi …got it…… and you are nobody who should be concerned about my age, my license….understand.

Arjun:*stunned but speaks* 😲 Oh really ….. then let me tell you I can arrest you as well for this as I am a police officer….

Girl:*suddenly her attitude softens, she thinks of something and hugs Arjun and then says* Wow… actually I was thinking of police……. You know ek ladka mujhe follow kar raha hai bike par….. you know what…… you are so intelligent… you are right I even don't have a license, because I have a driver…. And you now what… us idiot ne na mere driver ko peeta…..and then… *makes a sad face*

Arjun:*I think ki ye jhooth bol rahi hai…. But then he sees a guy on bike…oh she is right* don't worry……don't be scared…okay just relax.
Suddenly the bike stops with a slide, guy gets off, gives a look to the girl for a moment, smirks then goes close to her, helds her by shoulder and says " So you thought that I won't be able to catch you..?"

Arjun pushes that guy from the girl and was about to give him a kick…… but the team was out until now….. and Riya just shouted….. "No…..no just stopped…." And many emotions…happiness, surprise, satisfaction engrossed her face with a smile and tears in her eyes… as just both of them ran to hug her and hugged her, pecked her on her cheeks, kissed her hands and the trio looked so happy as they have just found the heaven😃😃😃.


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