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MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sweetdoc
Res

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Loved ur ss dear...the emotions...the inner fight of love nd hate u have potrayed very well..
U have written arjun's heart out...""
Awsum dear..
Loved it
Update soon..

thanks alot dear..i am glad my writing was liked by the members of this forum too... i am updating now! in few minutes😃

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MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: funkylicious

Res... first of all love the banner/siggy❤️

loved the banner.. and thanks for waiting for my edit... :)

I love urge title and the way you expressed Arjun's feelings about his wife's death in depth... It really touched my heart...
definitely emotional But Riya's character being the same yet different is what I loved even more..

Arjun worried for Riya the way he was for Roshni makes me feel that unknowingly he'sin love...
Can't wait for the story to unfold... one more thing loved the way you executed the whole chapter totally awesome😉 🤗

thanks,,,it was a very warm welcome by you guys ya.. i am so glad that my writing is appreciated in this forum too. never in my life i updated twice a day but looking at the response.. i m honored..😳

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MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: arul01
a wonderful update! what happened to riya... who kidnapped her? i have been thinking abt it nonstop! please update soon! the update was very interesting and without knowing what happen to riya, i think i will become mad! haha! will be waiting for ur update.. looking forward to it infact!

aww thanks alot! i am updating sooonnn in few mins...no no no dont be mad...if you turn mad then who will reply me???😉 😃

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MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: haruhi26
great start, please update soon😊

thanks😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: nahtani88
Amazing
Continue Soon
Thank You For The PM

thanks dear and ur welcome,,,😳

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MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
hey this is so awesome
please god nothing is going to be happen with her

arjun please jald se jald use dhoond lo varna hum yahan pe mar jayenge

ur story is so awesome ...i mean it

eagerly waiting for next part and please pm me

thanks alot...and i promise nothing is going to happen to her..😃

thanks allooottt...and please add me to your buddy list to get pmed.😳

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MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: smiley21
very nice...loved it...cont soon and plz add me to ur pm list :)

thanks😃 and please add me to your buddy list to get pmed.😳

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MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: kgmu86
gr8 start pls do continue

thanks😳

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MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: mushiroxx
wow this is awesome... muskaan u sure r talented dear...👏
loved the way u explained arjun's emotions...his broken self n his anger towards riya just to make her move away from him...👏
i also loved ur pov of riya being hurt by arjun every time but she comes back to her cheerful self...awww poor soul...👏
that wall n dent part is magnificently written...👍🏼
im glad is worried for riya...n i so love the fire in his eyes to search riya n bring her back safe n sound...👏
do continue n pm me ur next update...😊

thanks alottt dear...yor reply made me feel awesome too...😳 you know it feels great to know how your story is getting accepted, i am glad you shared your views.. i loved it... i will surely pm you dear..i hope you like next part too..😃 i will wait for your comment.😊