FF: Fire and Water (Ch. 26-A Updated on Pg.145!)

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ValleryRose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

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I know I said I'd be posting the next chapter tonight, but it seems impossible to me right now..

I don't want to rush up and give you guys a 'half baked' chapter. That would be unfair..!

So I'd be posting the chapter tomorrow morning!

Thanks a lot for all your comments! Sorry once again.. 😊

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

lovely and very emotional update dear

you portrayed so beautifully the feelings of Riya and Arjun, specially their pain

and loved when everyone said that they are here for her

felt very sorry for Avantika, must have been very hard for her

but at least she had Rathore with her

please continue soon dear😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#843

Lovely chapter...you delineated the turmoil of the characters very well:)

Kudos.

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

Welcome Back

Nice Chapter... Emotions of the whole team s well written... I likd Rathore's Family dey r so understnding... Continue soon... waiting for nxt part

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kirthiii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

oh that was so emotional... lovely to see Riya living through awesome FFs like yours... welcome back!

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littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#846

welcome back...

hope your exams were good...

all the best for result...

earlier missed you...happy to read the update

thank you for updating...this way the first ariya ff which i read on this forum...😊

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ll-Shilpa-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#847

Hope your exams went well and you topped them all.

It is great to see you back, and I can't wait to read more of this FF. Loved this update, so beautifully written.

Things are coming along nicely, I love the closeness of the team members and now Arjun and Riya also.

Loved the update.

P.S. Loving the new FF, just read it.