FF: Fire and Water (Ch. 26-A Updated on Pg.145!)

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Nusrat Farzana

@Nusrat2

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1001

Sry 4 my extremely short reply 2 ur butyful pm last time. I was in such a hurry.

My god, I absolutely loved this update.

From where to start?

Rathode and Avantika……..his damn it was very sweet! 😳

Riya's shart and little dhamki, Arjun's checking call list…..totally in time, and hilarious! 🤣 ASR, is jindegi me tumhe abhi bhi bahut kuch dekhna baki hain!

If somehow Choree got to see that, they wud hav gotten a cardiac arrest!

Not looking desperate hardly means u rn't! Always cool, Arjun, but not creditable!

My mom was beside me when I read that, and I almost smothered to check my laughter. 😃

I am gonna hugely enjoy their upcoming datings!

Thanx n update soon! 😊

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scorp1AN

@scorp1AN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1002

loved the light moment between arjun and riya! nice! loved it a lot! please update soon! can't wait to read the next update!

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1003

I have finally caught up with your work!! And must i say it it purely bliss and i would like to thank you for sharing it!! Please do continue soon and pm pleaseee xxx

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1004

I was bored Editting my previosu comment...

so new comment from me

I read 3 chapters bak to bak..till 18

Firstly rathore's past revelation : amazing yaar

i liked d way he managed both his roles as a chief n as a father simultaneously ...amazingly written it was

1 baat batao/...yeh Ajmer jaipur ka itna idea kaise hain apko...

exact timing u gave ...it s a 2 hour journey from jaipur to ajmer ...so approx it will take 1 hr 45 min to reach a village nearby ajmer city

Read till chapter 20

OMG sikander bak n

ria realizing dat Roshni was her taayi n arjun 's wifey ...

Liked d way u wrote her outburst ,,,,

Running to read future parts ...

Wow Ariya confession...

liked d way arjun supported her

Ria cutting ties from Chacha chachi

Hey i have read till chapter 26 A

waiting for more parts...

Its seriously awesum😊

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago

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Shru

@funkylicious

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1005

Awesome chapters dear..👏

Fab...loving each and everything... hayeee the breakfast date😳 made me blush so hard...<3

Hayeee loving the new feeling of love that's slowly growing in between ARIYA...!!

I was in love with your FF but now falling more...

Dear cant wait for the new chapter on new Thread yayyy I just can't wait for the new start all together😉

I demand a longer update please... 🤗

I'm sorry for not unresing on pg 135 nd also m extremely sorry for commenting so late...<3<3 but my love for your FF has always GROWN😳 Its just that I forget to comment coz I read the updates from cell offline😆..

Anyways overall a fantastic update... cant wait for the new thread...lovie🤗

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1006

Rose :

I have become active in this forum of late only, but I have read this FF of your's silently from chapter 1 itself (okay, now don't thrash me for this ). And trust me this is one of the best FF's I have ever read on IF along with a few others. I really don't have words enough to praise you yaar ..love the way you keep incorporating Ariya moments and Rathore-Avantika scenes between the cases while retaining the suspense and the thriller feel intact, but you know something, the way you brought Roshni in Ariya's dreams ..mujhe who thoda filmy laga, but other than that the only thing I can say is , keep going gal ..you rock !!👏

ps : i'll pakka comment regularly on your updates henceforth.😊