FF... RAABTA UPDATED oct. 8 ch6.b.pg18 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Wow..this was very good, more mystery to solve. Are the two cases connected, and why boy fetuses killed not girl?

Lot's of questions, waiting to find out more. Good job.


lot's of more questions, lots of mysteries so stay tuned...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello friends I'm here again with the first part of the sixth chapter here' I hope you all like it' and don't forget to give ur comments'

Recap: Tanmay drags Riya in the jungle, Arjun tries to find riya in the jungle knowing that she is unsafe, but unable to find her. Shree discovers some confusing and stunning info about the illegal activities, and chotu discloses about the death of two and rape with her.

2:40 AM
* Rathore and Chotu*

Rathore: Oh my God' ab hum karein to kya karein' ek taraf ye minister khoya hua hai' achanak uski secretary aur uske boyfriend ka murder' par sabse badi problem to Riya aur Arjun hain'

Chotu: *in a concerned voice*: Riya and Arjun Sir' kya hua hai unhe'??

Rathore: Riya Tanmay se milne gayi' and jab Arjun proofs mujhe dene vapis aaya' uske baad se riya ko Tanmay kahin lekar gaya hai' and Arjun unhe dhoondhne gaya hai' aur unka pata nahin chal raha hai'

Chotu: Par Arjun sir ke saath police force honi chahiye thin a tab'

Rathore: Chotu' itna time nahin tha tab' Riya ki safety humare liye sabse jyada important thi tab'.

Chotu: Yes Sir' you are right.. but ab'

*Suddenly shree calls Rathore, he picks the phone, after listening to the phone, he gives directions and instructions to the police, and leaves for the ETF office *
ETF Office.

Rathore: *looks at shree who is busy in documents* Shree' what happened in both the cases'
Shree: Sir' shayad isse jyada confusing kuch raha hi nahin hai' Sir in Feticide case' Documents ke according jitney bhi abortion hue hain jyadatar boy child ke hue hain' aur girl child ki delivery ke cases hain' but there are very few cases where a girl child has been killed' matlab sir female feticide ke case to hote hain' but ye'

Rathore: *in a tensed voice*What the hell'?? Ek to riya aur Arjun gayab, dusra ye minister ka koi pata nahin, teesra ab ye nayi uljhane wali cheez' matlab ki log ladkon ka abortion karyein' it seems impossible' what the hell is going on..? ? *he banged his fist on the table in frustration and confusion*

Chotu: Sir aur minister wale case mein' dhyan dein to secretary aur boyfriend aakhiri baar minister ke paas dekhe gaye the, isi vajah se shaq un par gaya' par unka bhi murder' aur vo bhi torture ke baad'kya ho sakta hai'

Rathore: Jo bhi ho' chotu' jungle ke charon or se nakebandi karwai' kam se kam Tanmay wahin rehna chahiye' but Riya aur Arjun'

Shree: Shayad humein Riya ko wahan jaane dena hi nahin chahiye tha'

Rathore: Meri sabse badi galti thi vo' mujhe Arjun ko tabhi rokna chahiye tha' I just hope ki donon safe ho especially riya'

*Tanmay and Riya*

Tanmay dragged Riya to the cave' in front of the cave he stopped and shook violently some orchid flowers outside the cave, and the rock which was at the end of the cave made a way. He went inside dragging riya, and pressed a button which closed the cave again. But there was nothing except a staircase going down towards the earth'

"Tanmay' what is all this' hmmm' answer me' leave me' please leave me'" said a horrified Riya, who was sure that the person whom she loved, was involved in all these things'

But when they reached at the end of the staircase' it was truly a surprise' almost an underground colony.. how was it even possible' an underground mansion'

"Kya hua sweetheart' surprised' abhi to bahut surprises baki hain tumhare liye'" said Tanmay and entered the mansion and dragged Riya and threw her roughly on the bed.

*Arjun*

Meanwhile' when he came out from the cave' suddenly he noticed the orchids'
"Orchids' aur yahan' orchids is jagah par' aisi jagah par to orchids' kuch to baat hai'" he thought to himself, and closely observed them' something stroke him, and he twisted them'. And the cave opened in front of him. He followed it, being careful' and found Riya's and Tanmay's footsteps again. After carefully closing the cave again, he observed the mansion, and then tried to figure out how to enter the place, without any sign.

*Riya and Tanmay*

" Tanmay' Tanmay I love you' I love you sweetheart' please relax' and just listen to me'" Riya pleaded.

Tanmay:*cutting her between, says with an evil smirk and anger* Bas Riya' bas tumhe lagta hai kit um mujhe bewkoof bana dogi' tumhari har chaal ka counter mere paas pehle se hai' tumhe lagta hai ki tum mere business ko khatam kar sakti ho'?? Shaq to mujhe tabhi ho gaya tha jab tumne pehle ekdum se mera phone cut kar diya, phir achanak se tum mujhse milne aa gayi' Riya Riya' I know game ka ek move tum jeet gaye' documents, pen drive aur laptop tumhari ETF ke paas hain' but guess what' *comes closer to her, holding her by hair roughly, a painful shriek escaped from riya* Ab to mere paas tum ho' and I am sure ki vo tumhe kuch nuksaan nahin hone denge' hai na *and he laughed *

Riya: *now really scared, and trying to save herself*look Tanmay' let's forget everything' we do love each other na' I'll request Rathore sir ki hum ye case chod de' aur we' we'll marry' I'll live you as your wife' as your wife only' but please please '. Leave me'I 'i.. love you'

Tanmay:*looks at her with an evil smirk* You.. you.. love me'

Riya: *sensing something wrong* y'.. ye.. yeah.. Tanmay I love you a lot' so you won't harm me' promise me you won't harm me' please ' okay'

Tanmay: *moves towards her, holds her by her bare waist, with an evil grin* so first prove it'

Riya: *try to move away* Tanmay.. tan'.tanm..tanmay.. tum.. tum.. stay away.. please.. please door ho jao..

Tanmay: *bringing his lips in front of hers, looked at her with an evilness in his eyes, pulls her
body roughly to his* come on' let's see how much you love me' hai na' *and he slammed his lips on hers,kissing them violently, brutally chewing them, making them bleed, and tearing her blouse violently, and grabbing her body, squeezing her, with cruelness, between her painful screams and shrieks.*

Edited by meghasingh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for editing so late dear...
I read it all once again.. loved it...
I hope Arjun gets to Riya on time... Hate Tanmay😔
please update soon and thanx for the pm dear
Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first...i feel like laugh when i read that ki ye female child case nahi but its a boy child case...but then i feel like shame ki its a baby killing case

second ...i feel bad ki riya ko tanmay ne fasaya ...he was know everything...poor girl

arjun tum kitani der mein pohachoge ...riya musibat mein hai...plz god riya ko kuch na ho...

and third...this is awesome update dear...i like it...i eagerly want to know what will happen next
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Oh god hope arjun gets there quickly :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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noe arjun gonna save riya pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG! riya is being attacked... hope arjun comes to her rescue... poor riya... she didn't want to do this and now she is in danger! please update soon! can't wait to know what is abt to happen to riya... please don't let anything bad happen to riya!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

first...i feel like laugh when i read that ki ye female child case nahi but its a boy child case...but then i feel like shame ki its a baby killing case


second ...i feel bad ki riya ko tanmay ne fasaya ...he was know everything...poor girl

arjun tum kitani der mein pohachoge ...riya musibat mein hai...plz god riya ko kuch na ho...

and third...this is awesome update dear...i like it...i eagerly want to know what will happen next



well about the boy child case... there's a secret which is to be revealed in the next parts... and thanks you liked it so much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arul01

OMG! riya is being attacked... hope arjun comes to her rescue... poor riya... she didn't want to do this and now she is in danger! please update soon! can't wait to know what is abt to happen to riya... please don't let anything bad happen to riya!



omg... you are too concerned... anyway thanks that u liked it.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Meghu very gud .story is getting interesting.tomr we will post first part & there is surprise for u .ok

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