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Posted: 4 years ago
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You fired up AK!

This is exactly the way I want her to take the stand but CVS are just interested in unnecessary things!

This Rani should be there every time ranisa illtreats her or veer man handles her. Like I get he thinks of her as a kid and he acts accordingly but sometimes it gets too much when he pull her by her arms in anger and and goes all alpha on her!

I like him giving soft treatment to her and not the angry side

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: flamingoAK

I LOVED IT! Too good. So symbolic in every sense. She used to wipe her tears away with that handkerchief. Now she wiped the reason for the tears. 👏👏👏


I wish she would do something like this in the show ... but the CVs won't let her do that.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rish27

I have always wanted to see a wife do what rani just did. Pull out the mangalsutra and let the bead fall everywhere. But the best we get in itv is she hesitantly takes it off and keep it somewhere. Probably in a sacred place like a temple.


Love this ❤️


I understand the importance of a mangalsutra in Hinduism which is why I guess they leave it in a temple or something but in this case, the mangalsutra represented nothing but pain and negativity. Which is why I decided to add this little bit. Thank you so much.


I'm going to write more OS of Rani being savage 😈😈

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fahmida21


I wish she would do something like this in the show ... but the CVs won't let her do that.

Nope they won’t. They’re destructive only from the ML side. FL has no self respect or strength.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fahmida21


I understand the importance of a mangalsutra in Hinduism which is why I guess they leave it in a temple or something but in this case, the mangalsutra represented nothing but pain and negativity. Which is why I decided to add this little bit. Thank you so much.


I'm going to write more OS of Rani being savage 😈😈

Yess!! Do one on Shaila’s idea in the other thread. Would love to read that 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yaso1.0

Thank you for this ❤️

I can tolerate even Saas bahu but I can't tolerate FL not having a drop of self respect. That is when I leave. If Rani doesn't stand up for herself, I am saying goodbye to ATBA.


I'm not going to lie, I've grown to hate saas bahu drama only because it is so toxic and there was a time when I used to watch it and enjoy it but it created such a bad standard in my head. It was unrealistic and I started to believe that this is how every family is. I pulled myself out of that mindset and realised that this is all wrong and toxic and degrades women in every sense.


I need Rani to stand up for herself otherwise this is the end of ATBA journey.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: flamingoAK

Yess!! Do one on Shaila’s idea in the other thread. Would love to read that 😆


I'm going to go through her post and jot down some ideas 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I really want THIS to happen👍🏼

U wrote it so amazingly, justifiable outburst.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fahmida21

THE CVs are pissing me off. So I'm starting writing again 🤣


She had enough. This was beyond what she had signed up for. This is not what her bauji had every taught her. This is was not how her bauji ever treated her. So why should she let another man treat her like this? Especially when this is the man because of whom all these problems have started in her life. Rani knew that if she stood there and took another one of his lashing today, then not only will she fail as her bauji’s daughter but also as a woman today. No woman should be treated like this, ever, no matter what the circumstances.

Rani: ENOUGH! ENOUGH DR. VEER PRATAP SINGH RAJAWAT!!!

She screamed. Veer was astounded. He knew that Rani also had an angry side, he has seen it first hand when Birju tried to attack him in Baliya. But never had she ever spoken to him in such a tone.

The Rajawats all looked on shocked, not knowing what to do or how to react. All were confused about who is right and who is wrong. They were all aware of all the wrongdoings against Rani yet remained silent. They knew that no matter what they say now, the matter had now gone out of hand.

Rani: If you can raise your voice at me, then so can I. If you can blame me for the condition of your Ranisa, then I can also blame you for the condition of my Bauji. If you can blame me for all your problems, then I can also blame you for all my problems.

Rani was exhausted, having to continuously say the same thing, fight for the same thing, was becoming a heavy burden on her. She didn’t know how long more she could go on without letting it all out. She looked on at Veer who was still in shock. She looked at the rest of the family who was staring at her in confusion, wondering what took over her, but right now, she did not have a care in the world about their opinions about her. Right now, all she was worried about was her Bauji and his survival.

Rajmata: BahuRani! What way is this of talking to your husband? And if you had something important to do, you could have told us and gone?

Veer: How dare you leave Ranisa in this condition? What if she had hurt herself in the process? What if something had happened to her? DO YOU EVEN REALISE HOW CARELESS YOU WERE TODAY??

Veer took a step with every word he spoke and grabbed her arms and pulled her closer to him. Rani could almost feel his fastening heartbeat due to his anger, but Rani was no less, she had made up her mind that no matter what happened today, she will not back down.

She freed herself from the tight grip in a humpth and got hurt in the process. Blue finger prints were making their way on her tender arms. This did not go unnoticed by her loving brother in law.

Vikram: BRO what are you doing??? Are you in your senses???? She got bruised! Bhabisa let me see…

Veer: Vikram, I am warning you, don’t get involved, otherwise I’ll…

Rani: Vikram, don’t get involved. Who knows you might get third time lucky and get another slap today? Leave him. The person who doesn’t want to see the truth in front of him and continues to live his life obliviously is no less than a coward. Leave these bruises. They will be counted as my battle marks.

Veer: I don’t need your lectures. And what truth are you blabbering on about? Huh? Ranisa had promised that she will take care of Ramu kaka’s case. Why can’t you just be patient? What was the need to go see Ramu kaka today?

Rani: You really think that your Ranisa is going to get my Bauji out of jail?? I was a fool to believe that. SHE IS THE ONE WHO MADE THE LAWYER DROP THE CASE, SHE IS THE ONE WHO MADE THE CASE GO ON FAST TRACK MODE. SHE IS THE ONE WHO IS RUINING MY LIFE. SHE IS THE ONE WHO IS RUINING YOUR LIFE. SHE DOESN’T SEE YOU AS HER SON, NEVER HAS AND NEVER WILL!!

Veer: RANNIIIII!!! I’m warning you again.

Something had taken over Rani. She was no longer the little Baliya girl. She was no longer the free spirited person. She was a woman with a purpose and at that very moment, her main purpose in life was to make sure that her Bauji gets out of jail.

Rani: Warning? To me? You should know by now; I don’t respond to threats. I make them. You know what is the most surprising? The man who is behind all this is the one making the threats. The man because of whom my bauji is in jail is the one giving me warnings.

Vikram: Bro? What is she saying?

Veer could not believe his ears. This was not the Rani he knew. The sweet, soft, loving, caring Rani. This Rani is new. He knew that again; he was to blame for this change. He was to blame for her innocence being taken away.

Veer: Do whatever you can. Remember one thing, the Rajawats rule Jaipur. This isn’t your third class Baliya.

Rani: This may not be Baliya. But the sky above my head is the same and the ground beneath my feet is the same. Mark my words. You will pay for every single tear you made my family shed in the past 5 months.

Rani didn’t want to spend another minute under the same roof as the Rajawats. She had work to do. A lot of work to do. She had to find a good lawyer. She had to find a support system, which she had. Her best friend. Someone she knew she always turn to.

Whilst the entire drama unfolded, Ranisa was sitting back and enjoying. Finally, her throne was safe, she was back in the game. Nobody could beat her. This was her chess game. She had successfully turned Rani and Veer against one another and yet again made Veer become a little spawn in her major game of torture.

Rani was walking out of the house. She heard the family start their bickering, but now this was none of her business.

Veer: RANI!! If you take one step out of this house the consider yourself, alone, from now on.

Rani was shocked but not surprised. She knew that something like that was bound to happen. She turned around, walking back into the house, much to everyone’s happiness. Nobody wanted her to leave, other than Ranisa. Rani faced Veer in full power and took his handkerchief and wiped her sindoor off. Veer was shocked. It felt like the ground beneath his feet was slowly fading away. He didn’t understand why this act of Rani hurt him so bad, but it did. Rani proceeded to take her married bangles off and placed them on the tea table and snatched her mangalsutra and ripped it open, letting all the beads on the floor.

Rani: The beads represent our relationship; broken, apart and unfixable. I will do whatever it takes to save my Bauji. No matter what. Stop me if you can.

With that, Rani walked out the Rajawat’s house, leaving everything behind and feeling a new kind of power within her. She was her bauji’s daughter. Not the property of another man. She will save her bauji. No matter what.

Rani: Put your hand at a 45* degree angle and put it on your heart and say “Apna Time Bhi Aaeyga”. She says starting her new journey.


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