Teri Ore x MaAn (OS)

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello everyone..!!

The precap beach scene was beautiful today.. and when I was just listening to music while doing some work this morning (Yes I do stuff apart from fangirling over MaAn).. this song started playing and my mind just weaved up a fantasy about MaAn.. thought of sharing it with you guys❤❤

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(Song lyrics in italics)


As the cold water carressed his feet, he saw the most important person in his life, or rather the person who was his life, running towards him.. her feet splashing the water, the wind blowing her long tresses, her laughs sounding even more melodious than the birds chirping, her eyes.. which held an ocean of love..for him


Dil kho gaya,

Ho gaya kisi ka,

Ab raasta mil gaya,

Khushi ka..


As she ran happily towards her husband, she recollected the first time she had been to a beach.. she was so happy that day, she had thought that was the happiest she could be..but today, she knew, she would be the happiest whenever she was with him...


Aankhon mein hai khwab sa,

Kisi ka..

Ab raasta mil gaya,

Khushi ka..

As their eyes met, she saw his eyes mirrored her emotions too.. love, passion, happiness, comfort, and a million dreams..for their future together


Rishta naya rabba,

Dil chu raha hai,

Kheeche mujhe koi dore, teri ore..

Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba

Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..

Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..


As she reached him, and held his hands, he freed them and wrapped them around her waist, picking her up, as she held his shoulders tight.. screaming his name..


Aaa..

Aaaaa


He twirled her around, and she laughed her heart out!!


Khulti fizaein, khulti ghatayein,

Sar pe naya hai aasaman,

Chaaro dishayein, hass ke bulaye,

Yu sab hue hai meharbaan....


He slowly set her down, but neither loosened their hold on the other...with his one hand still holding her waist tight, he removed the clip holding her hair in a ponytail.. and ran his fingers through her hair, placing his head in the crook of her neck..smelling her hair and kissing her neck, before withdrawing, as she just smiled with her eyes closed, savouring the feeling of being loved, being treasured


Haann..

Hume to yahi rabba,

Kasam se pata hai,

Dil pe nahi, koi zor, koi zor

Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba

Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..

Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..


She slowly removed her hands from his shoulder, he was still holding her waist.. she looked into his eyes, smiling and ran her fingers on his cheeks.. over his stubble..to his neck.. she suddey held his collar and yanked it towards herself, and his lips brushed hers.. she winked at him.. freed herself from his hold and ran away... as Anuj ran behind her..


Ek heer thi aur tha ek raanjhan,

Kehte hai mere gaon mein,

Sacha ho dil to,

Sau mushkilen ho,

Jhukta naseeba pao mein,


She ran a little longer.. and saw a food stall and stopped.. the happiness in her eyes giving way to a little sadness..

Anuj reached her and immediately understood.. they had met Mr.Shah and Kavya at a similar spot last time.. and that had spoiled the day for his Anu.. but not anymore.. he wouldn't let any bad memories spoil her happiness... he found a seashell that looked somewhat like a heart.. and gave it to her.. bringing a huge smile on her face.. he cupped her face and looked into her eyes.. assuring her that as long as he was with her.. they would conquer all the problems together.. as they had been doing so far.. their love would always stand up tall...

He held her in his arms... bought an icecream from the food stall and took her to a secluded corner of the beach.. and kept the icecream near her mouth..but before she looked lick it.. he moved it..and a bit of the icecream got on her nose.. she gave an annoyed look.. as he cleaned it, and they both shared the same icecream...Anuj taking multiple chances to touch his lips to hers.. making her blush..

As the finished the best ice cream of their lives.. he started running behind her again, resuming their chase.. and she ran ahead..


Ho ho

Aanchal tera rabba,

Falak ban gaya hai,

Ab iska nahi, koi ore, koi chore..

Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba

Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..

Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..


As he caught up to her..and held her arm.. while she tried to run.. they both slipped in the water.. he instantly held her tight, protectively.. as he landed on the soft sand..and her..on his sturdy chest..

They lay in the water... as Anu got more comfortable.. placed her head on his chest in the same position... she had finally found her home... where she felt the most comfortable.. the safest..the happiest..


Dil kho gaya,

Ho gaya kisi ka,

Ab raasta mil gaya,

Khushi ka..

Aankhon mein hai khwab sa,

Kisi ka..


After staying in his embrace for sometime.. she slowly raised her upper body to look at him.. and they both smiled at each other...and helped each other up..


Ab raasta mil gaya,

Khushi ka..

Rishta naya rabba,

Dil chu raha hai,


They held hands and walked on the shore.. watching the sky change hues as the sun set... enjoying the comfortable silence and the breathtaking view...


Kheeche mujhe koi dore, teri ore..

Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore, hai rabba

Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..

Teri ore, teri ore, teri ore..


After the sunset, they stopped walking.. came closer to each other.. holding hands tight.. making a silent promise to each other to always stay together.. to always be there for each other.. to make their love win.. no matter whatever hurdles life throws at them..

They wrapped their arms around each other.. gazed into each others eyes lovingly.. as their faces came closer.. as their lips met.. sealing the promise..

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That's it.. sounded much better in my head Ig.. but it is what it is..

This is the first time I've written on MaAn without dialogues...

Honest opinion needed - should I do more of such songs? Every song I hear nowadays reminds me of MaAn.. yeah I know I'm crazy..

Do drop you feedback in the reactions and comments❤

Sorry for the typos/mistakes!!


Thanks for reading!!❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sooo lovely one kitty!!!😳 Well its one of my favv songs and yeah me also listen songs while doing my work.. hi fi!!😆 Btw this is toooo tooo amazing one!!!❤️ Loved it🤗

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kitty kitty this is so beautiful..keep trying such songs even I have a habit of connecting maan n music u can see tht in my snippets too😳..but on a serious note my mood was simply spoiled but after reading this I feel so good🤗..I hadn't thought tht I would write a chapter today but after reading urs I'm going to write the snippet..


Thank you sweetheart for being my mood changer and mind reader too 💓

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow, fantastic update, loved it😍😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kp26

Sooo lovely one kitty!!!😳 Well its one of my favv songs and yeah me also listen songs while doing my work.. hi fi!!😆 Btw this is toooo tooo amazing one!!!❤️ Loved it🤗

Thank youuuuu...!!!! So glad you liked it❤️❤️

I was so skeptical about posting this one!!

Thanks a lot for always supporting my 🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nysha11

kitty kitty this is so beautiful..keep trying such songs even I have a habit of connecting maan n music u can see tht in my snippets too😳..but on a serious note my mood was simply spoiled but after reading this I feel so good🤗..I hadn't thought tht I would write a chapter today but after reading urs I'm going to write the snippet..


Thank you sweetheart for being my mood changer and mind reader too 💓


Yesss I was inspired by you and Tiana.. miss her..❤❤


I'm so so glad I posted it and so happy you feel better noww🤗🤗

Yayyyy new snippet🥳


Thanks a lot Nyshhhh I love youuu❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ishabharatdwaj

Wow, fantastic update, loved it😍😍😍

Thank you!!!

So happy you liked it🤗❤️

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Ohh! This was nice! Read a songfic after a long long long time! That too romantic one!

Mostly read and even written hardcore emotional ones!


This was a fresh change! Loved the picture of happiness you created with it! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: docritu99

Ohh! This was nice! Read a songfic after a long long long time! That too romantic one!

Mostly read and even written hardcore emotional ones!


This was a fresh change! Loved the picture of happiness you created with it! ❤️

Thanks a lot Riya 🤗🤗

So glad that you liked it❤️❤️

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