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Wow.. wow.. wow...

Agar cliffjanger bolne pr professor aise update deti hai to aage se Teri has story ko yahi bolenge....

This is another level.....

Just loved every part of it !!!!!

N vannu baby ki jali... aanhu aanhu... maja aa gaya

Hina be like jaao saalo t gang.. thanda shower ley lo ab 🤣🤣

Jokes apart.. i know what you mean Hinz.. its difficult write about MaAn, in sensual scenes... and also difficult to write without making it sound ott.

Jokes apart.. brilliantly woven .. thanks for sharing n tagging🤗❤

🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

How am I supposed to sleep now😭😭

How is the deed done.. thoda aur aage likho na..

Explain in detail please ma'am..

Mujhe theek se nahi pata I wanna knowwww

Also maan ko hum bohot underestimate karte hain..

Just see the looks they've started each other..

Shaadi ke baad bhale hi hume na dikhaye.. we know how wild they're gonna beee😭

Aap toh dikha do pleaseeeeeeeeee!!!!

Thank you for writing this for us. Our cliffhanger works here . This is not Hina nor MaAn either but this is something bold 🔥🔥😍😍😍

Ohhh boiii!

I got to read the whole together, guess it was my lucky day!

What did you do there Hina! It was hot as hell!

I can relate to the part that it feels odd writing this on MaAn, mujhse bhi nahi hota! But you made it just perfect!

It's fire broke in here! 🔥 🔥🔥

Were you in rush to complete it ya Maine jaldi jaldi padh li!🤣 and chalu kahi ki, aadhi cheeze uda di tune short cut me!

Electrostatically fiery it was!!! ❤️❤️❤️

Awwwie thankyou hinz.. well pehle wala bhi cliffhanger pe nhi tha tbh but some ppl thought so u extended it n it was really very sweet☺.. n yeah inhone shaadi ke ek din pehle hee suhagraat mana li, toh uss din naya kya hee karenge?🌝😂😂😗

Thank hina for writing outside your comfort zone. It still felt like Anu and Anuj, as they acted both like young peole in love and then passionate lovers 🥰

Ufff! Kya kar diya tune subah subah ❤️❤️

If you didnt mean it as a cliffhanger, what did you mean!?, The second part..

Wow!

I think you lit a fire in all of us! 🔥🔥🔥

Read it all in one go and was a delight to read and savour.
I think as readers we want more from our FF writers as we won’t/don’t get to see this sensual side on tv and we just want to see some on screen love and sizzling. Just like Anuj’s intense eye scene on their date when Anu was caressing his face! So hot can’t get that out of my head.

Thanks for the tag Hinz, much appreciated 💕

So Hot 😉aur bhi buhat kuch😳 but romantic update