Oh Anupama, Tu Mera Dil Meri Jaan (SS)- Part 3 (Page 2) updated 16/3/2

Evarasha thumbnail
Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 3 years ago
#1

Hi, I am new to this forum. Currently I am in quarantine for COVID and I am quite boring at room. So I thought of writing a short series on our fav couple, MaAn. Hope you guys enjoy it and please leave some comments and love ya. Happy reading.


Part 1


Anuj: Anu, you have promised me that whatever happens you will never walked off or leave without facing or participating in this dance competition. Now is the time, Anu. Prove yourself. Don’t worry about condition over here. I will take care of everything. Just concentrate on your dance and dream Anu. Just CONCENTRATE ON DANCE AND DREAM.


Those words are echoing in ears of Anupama since she left the Shah’s house in chaos. When Anuj, GK, Samar and Anu about to leave for their dance competition, she received a phone call from Shah family like usual. It was none other than Baa. Baa was panicking over the phone. It was only Kinju and Baa in the house as rest of the family and Rakhi is out of station. Kinjal is 7 months pregnant and suddenly she had labour pain begin. Her dance competition is about to begin in 30 minutes and if she go to Shah house,she will not able to join the dance competition and it is very important and utmost time for her to establish herself because she was in a ‘now or never’ situation. She looked worried towards three mens standing in front of her especially Anuj. Anuj understand what was his love of life was going through but he need to put emotion aside and thinking logically. Composing himself, he advised her and send Samar with her for dance competition. With half hearted Anu reached dance venue with Samar because her other half is with Anuj and thinking about Kinjal condition. Its not she does not trust her Anuj. She will give her life away for him but Its Kinjal’s first pregnancy and she worried for her. Samar knows his mummy attention is not here and she need to be okay as soon as possible because the host gonna call her name anytime for performance.


Samar: Mummy, you need to concentrate on your dance performance now


Anu: Samar, I am so scared for Kinju and her baby. Im not with her. I dont know how this all……


Samar: Mummy, relax. Anuj and cool dude GK is there to handle the situation. Trust them. They will handle the situation and will update us time to time.


Anu: Still Samar….


Host: Now, give your hands for Ms Anupama Joshi for her dance performance. Huge claps.


Anu: Bakuda, I cannot do this. I cant. No. Im not ready


Anu start to panicking and she is getting breathless. Samar tried his level best to convience his mummy but she is not in the state of listening.


To be continued.

Part 1- Pg 1

Part 2- Pg 1

Part 3- Pg 2


Edited by Evarasha - 3 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

12

Views

3.8k

Users

5

Likes

27

Frequent Posters

name2saakshi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 3 years ago
#2

Oh oh waiting for next update

screen22 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 3 years ago
#3

The flow of the story is so good that you need to know the outcome.

It amazing that baa 📞 Anupama and not anybody else because Anupama has nothing important in her life where the rest as a life and also kinjal requires Anupama.

Always Anuj takes over and thinks if Anupama does not take part in the dance then she will not have another chance but Anupama is worried and panicking because she needs Anuj with her.

Thank You for writing in English.

Please continue soon


Amykapadia thumbnail
Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 3 years ago
#4

Very nice.

This has been set up brilliantly 💕💕

Evarasha thumbnail
Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 3 years ago
#5

Part 2


Samar: Mummy, you got this. Show to people out there that people like you even with family responsibilities, aged women can still persuade their dreams if they step forward.


Anu: No Samar. I cannot do this. I just cant


Saying this, Anu flopped down and started to crying and breathing in and out miserably. Samar have no option left. He only have last resort and thats none other than Anuj. Without losing a second, he immediately video call to Anuj and the situation on the other side is no less dramatic. Anuj and GK reached Shah house and Baa was trying to calm down Kinjal who is screaming in pain and calling out Anupama name.


Anuj: Baa, what happen? Everything is okay?


Baa: Cant you see Kinju baby is in the pain?


GK: Then why you didnt bring her to nearest hospital?


Kinjal: I wanna Mummy with me now.huhuhuh


Anuj: Kinjal, I am so sorry. I have send Anu with Samar for the dance competition that she has been praticing all these months. You want to go hospital, let me bring you.


Kinjal: Haan, you did right thing. Mummy should be in the dance competition. It is her dream and she should strive for it. Thank god Mummy didnot come here.


Baa: What thank god mummy didnt come here? Is dance competition more important than you……..


Suddenly, Kinjal’s water broke and pain intense kore taht she started to scream now. Anuj, GK and Baa got scared and decide to bring her to hospital right away. Baa, Kinjal and Anuj sat at the back seat while GK kaka drives the car. Kinjal was holding and squeezing both Baa’s and Anuj’s hand each time she got contraction and both of them tries to calm her down. In between ride to hospital, Anuj received a video call and saw Samar’s name flash on his phone screen. He answered the call immediately and what he saw broke his hearts in to millions and a tear escaped from his tired eyes.

Evarasha thumbnail
Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 3 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: name2saakshi

Oh oh waiting for next update

its have been updated

Have a look😉


Evarasha thumbnail
Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 3 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: screen22

The flow of the story is so good that you need to know the outcome.

It amazing that baa 📞 Anupama and not anybody else because Anupama has nothing important in her life where the rest as a life and also kinjal requires Anupama.

Always Anuj takes over and thinks if Anupama does not take part in the dance then she will not have another chance but Anupama is worried and panicking because she needs Anuj with her.

Thank You for writing in English.

Please continue soon


yeah, I am quite fed up on how they showing MaAn to us in the show. Thats why I am creating my own version. Next part is updated. Let me know how was it😉


Evarasha thumbnail
Visit Streak 365 Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 3 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Amykapadia

Very nice.

This has been set up brilliantly 💕💕

Thank you so much😉

screen22 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 3 years ago
#9

Anupama needs to think of the hard work and commitment Anuj and she had put in and not to fall apart at the last minute, I know that she is worried for kinjal but what about her, she may never ever get a chance to dance at a big competition.

Baa is old school but at least kinjal acknowledge that Anupama is at the right place, she is where she should be.

She needs the courage to say she can do this both for herself, Anuj and kids. Her life is hers for moving forward.

Please continue

haribol79 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#10
Nice one, I have a feeling something similar will happen in show too 🤨

Related Topics

Anupamaa thumbnail

Posted by: Sutapasima · 13 days ago

https://twitter.com/dina_suz/status/1965839765426811093 https://twitter.com/eeessoe/status/1964047304299545007...

https://twitter.com/dina_suz/status/1965839765426811093
Expand ▼
Anupamaa thumbnail

Posted by: Sutapasima · 16 days ago

https://www.indiaforums.com/article/anupamaa-devika-hides-truth-behind-haircut-anupama-stumbles-upon-shocking-medical-report_226877

Expand ▼
Anupamaa thumbnail

Posted by: bsnkswami4187 · 24 days ago

These days Anupama is showing off by remembering Anuj. But the truth is Anuj was ruined by Anupama. Dear Anupama, I hear that you remember me...

Expand ▼
Anupamaa thumbnail

Posted by: Starwatcher01 · 27 days ago

[Driśya – Anupamaa aur Rahi aamne-saamne. Tanaav bhara mahaul.] Anupamaa (gusse aur dard bhari awaaz mein): Rahi! Tum samajhti ho na ki tumhari...

Expand ▼
Anupamaa thumbnail

Posted by: Sutapasima · 1 months ago

https://www.indiaforums.com/article/anupamaa-mangalagauri-celebrations-bring-joy-but-anupama-feels-anujs-absence_226247

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".