This Is Us ❤️|MaAn OS|10.03.22

Posted: 3 years ago
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She fell in his arms as the autorickshaw swerved to avoid the pothole on the road.


He helped her back up and it took them a while to recover from the accidental hug they just shared.


She stared at him ardently, he could tell she meant much more with the gaze when he caught her staring.


He wanted to do some staring ofhis own so he turned to her, making her look away shyly.


She enjoyed the attention, his piercing gaze made her feel special and desirable.


He cleared his throat to announce what he was about to do and slyly snaked his arm behind her making her tickle.


She turned to give him a questioning look and when he pretended like he knew nothing she shifted ever so slightly towards him to encourage the mischief he was upto.


He looked away to be discreet with a smile to appreciate her willingness to flirt.


Slowly his hand dropped from the backrest and crawled to her back and she clutched her bag in excitement.


His fingers on her back tickled her insides and she loved what he was doing to her.


He strummed his fingers on her and squeezed her gently towards him when she looked around to give him the look that meant ‘I like what you’re doing but this is not the time’ and he could only nod to agree.


As they approached Shah house she peeled his hand off her back and jumped out.


His hand touched hers on the metal of the rickshaw and his eyes had a naughty glint that matched hers.


She mouthed a quick bye and left him with eyes full of desire.


There was something very different about him today, a certain demand in his eyes, a righful claim that she wholeheartedly appreciated and welcomed...she had just found another reason to love him some more.



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As she danced on her favourite romantic tune imagining him in her arms he appeared right then and took his place in her imagination.


She swayed in his arms and twirled around her when she lost her balance and landed up in his strong arms.


He pulled her close and she rested her head on his shoulder with her breath all frenzied.


He sat her on the chair and grabbed the water bottle to offer it to her, she had a sip and passed the bottle to him and he sipped on it too.


She was wearing the look he wore that morning, her eyes bewitched as though they were telling an enchanting tale.


He noticed the glimmer that he hadnt seen before, was she trying to say something? he wondered and thought of exploring it further over the dinner date she had just planned to celebrate his success.


She knew how to find happiness in the little things that mattered the most and he loved her for that.


As they prepped to leave the lights went off and she reckoned it was the faulty fuse that caused it. He volunteered to turn plumber to electrician and asked her to take him to the switch board to check.


He switched on the torch on his phone and she lead him to the little dark room.


She stumbled over something by the door and he had to tug her waist to stop her from falling.


That was the first time he touched her like that and she hoped to fall again and again if that is how he would save ger everytime.


He handed her the phone and asked her to guide him to the fuse box.


It was a tiny room with hardly any space for two to be there without stepping onto each other.


The keys to the switch box were behind the door where he was stood, they had to squeeze in so she could grab them from behind him.


She had come dangerously close, the proximity was making him giddy.


Her breasts rubbed against his chest and he could feel her warm breath against his neck.


Her cheeks turned red as they brushed against his and he shut his eyes to tame the urge to pull her into a kiss for their lips were that close, closer than ever before.


She turned around and took the torch close to the circuit board gesturing him to fix it...


He pushed in from behind and started checking the fuse while she felt short circuited from within as his heavy breath on her skin played havoc with her senses.


She stood on tiptoe absorbing the strong sexual energy he was relaying.


He wanted to dig his face in to her neck and mark it his own.


She could hear him cry passion with the heavy panting.


He felt the tantalising effect he had on her and she knew the feeling was mutual.


As she tried to contain her erratic emotions, she lost grip on the phone and the torch went off..


All they could feel in the dark was their raw and naked emotions.


She felt his indulging eyes all over her, they were far too close to care for the boundaries they had set


He bent down to get the phone as did she and they ended up bumping into each others faces.


She heard him hiss for a second and wondered if he was hurt.


He switched on the torch to curb his unholy intentions only to find her curious eyes and radiant face merely inches away from him.


She noticed a little prick on the bridge of his nose and took his glasses off to examine it further.


He bent down to her so she could heal it with her touch, even hoped she could kiss it better.


She pulled his face closer and blew over the little freckle but deep within she really wished she could kiss him in that moment.


His deep drawn heavy breathing was making her weak and she felt her own breath falling into the same rhythm as his.


The moment was perfect for a passionate kiss.


He drew his face closer to her as though he wanted her to consent.


She inched closer to concur and held onto his face in her hands with intent.


He slid his hands around her neck and lightly touched her lips with his thumb to convey his intentions.


She looked down for a brief moment to brace herself.


He took a deep sigh and as he went ahead to claim her lips they heard Kinjal call her name.


Their special moment came to an abrupt halt, she didnt want to leave and neither did he.


As Kinjal’s calls turned louder, she reluctantly pushed him away and rushed out of the room and he followed her out.


Kinjal asked if she could accompany her to the doctors and she couldnt deny.


He texted her as she was leaving to say that he’d wait for their dinner date at home.


She rushed back in on the pretext of something.


He looked surprised to see her there and asked if she had forgotten something.


She looked at him with moist eyes, he knew not what that meant.


He went closer to ask if what they almost did required them to repent.


With a fluttering heart and emotions on fleek, she cupped his face dearly and pressed her lips on his cheek....





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hope you liked this one my lovelies, tried something new

so let me know?

love you all x

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Posted: 3 years ago
#2

Loved it.. Hina

Par ye kya tha...last me? On cheek🙄🙈🙈🙈🙈?

Loved the way you built up the emotions...it didn't feel overstretched...exactly the right amount.

I was envisioning yesterday's epi in my mind along with reading....

It was definitely a sanskari OS😇😇😇😇😇😇💞💓💕

Beautiful as always.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely Hina! ❤️ Liked the part where she comes back after seeing his text. It would have been a nice touch, if this was added in the episode.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Going to read this again in the evening Hina!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#5

Loved it Hina 💗💗💗💗💗


The emotions and passion building up … the tiny room sure has overheated 🥵.. beautiful as always.



The kiss on the cheek in the end was really nice bit😘😘😘😘😘


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Posted: 3 years ago
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First of all kudos for imagining such romance for the sanskari scene we saw on the show. I saw wanted him to tease her in rickshaw and u nailed it. Loved the power off bit the most, i was on my toes to know if he will claim her lips ☺️ par Mr. Patience Kapadia still didn't do it. Thank you for supplying our OS demands Hina 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful but why o why you put kinjal in between. So hot, tight spaced area and no kiss.

Kya dushmani hain AK se teri !!

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Loved it Hina, absolutely loved it 🔥❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved this one alot 😘😘

The build up of emotions are beautiful and raw.

Wonderful wonderful small small bits of raw emotions 😊😊

The cheek kiss is all we always desired at end atleast.

Wonderful update and thank you for this 🤩🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Anuj aur Ravan se zyaada screenspace tho aajkal pallu ko milne laga hai 👎🏼

It's really hard to see Anuj craving for Anu's time and togetherness , but he is Anuj for a reason haq hai par jatata nahi vo tho bass apne Anu ko samajhta hai bina kisi judgement❤❤

Anuj is indeed a king🤴

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