MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 45

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you very much for tagging me🙌🏽

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anuj & Anupama's private time in Mumbai hotel after marriage.

I felt that the scene in the hotel was poorly written and excuted. So, here is an impromptu nugget from la la land😳


Anuj is seen talking while lying down on her lap.

Anuj: Tum kush ho na

Anu: Bahut bahut bahut khush hoon. Aap ne sab kuch diya ..😳

Anuj: Sab kuch except parivaar…😒

Anu: Parivaar..? Mere liye aap hi sab kuch hai..😳

Anuj: "Par.."🤔

Anu: Bends down and … closes her lips on his preventing him from talking😳

Moments later she pulls back…wiping her lips with her thumb😉😳

Anuj: clears his throat, looks into her eyes lovingly and continues "woh toh hoon, par…."🤔

She puts a finger on his lips and nods asking him not to speak….

Anuj: raises his hands to cup her face, bends them and rises his face to meet hers..😉😳

As she bends down, her lush tresses closes its curtains on them. Behind those curtains, begins their unrehearsed act, each playing their part to perfection.😳


Unreasoning desire catapulted through him when he felt her soar. He had shown her the desperation love could cause. He smiles holding her still when she tried to struggle away.


She stops struggling but obeyed and unraveled herself. 😳 Shuddering in pleasure, they lay spent in each other’s arms until the sun’s first rays shook them off their slumber.❤️❤️


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As mentioned earlier, I am not interested in seeing any steamy scenes. But I was hoping for a meaningful scene that makes sense, a little playful, while alluding to intimacy would have been nice.

Well, it is what it is. Aisa hota toh.... kaisa hota? Let me know by commenting 😳

🧡🧡🧡

loved it.

Truly makes sense: emotional and physical intimacy both



@bold- this picture came to my mind, a pic from most of the old Bollywood movies


Two tulip flowers together stock photo. Image of soft - 112194692

Since childhood, I have not got what is meant by it.😉

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Posted: 3 years ago

Fantastic one!!! Loved the kiss which stopped anuj from talking❤🤪😚

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam


As mentioned earlier, I am not interested in seeing any steamy scenes. But I was hoping for a meaningful scene that makes sense, a little playful, while alluding to intimacy would have been nice.

Well, it is what it is. Aisa hota toh.... kaisa hota? Let me know by commenting 😳

agar aisa hota na di.. To kya hii hota...☺️

It's so so beautiful...☺️❤️

Loved your version of anu.. Bold...bolti hii band kar di...❤

Perfect scene you write di..bas yahi hona chahiye tha.😪

@bold bas yahi chahiye tha.. But..🤷‍♀️

Thanks for the tag di..❤

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you for tagging me dear Smitha! 🤗

Such a beautiful take on the newly weds! Loved it! ❤Wish we could've seen such scenes having meaningful conversations on the screen instead of dance after dance! Enjoyed reading it.

Love,

Noorie

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful yaar smitha❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: Peppss

Beautiful yaar smitha❤️❤️

Priya, haven't seen you around the past couple of days.🤗 I was about to write an epitaph for this thread.😲

Edited by SmithaRam - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anuj & Anupama's private time in Mumbai hotel after marriage.

I felt that the scene in the hotel was poorly written and excuted. So, here is an impromptu nugget from la la land😳


Anuj is seen talking while lying down on her lap.

Anuj: Tum kush ho na

Anu: Bahut bahut bahut khush hoon. Aap ne sab kuch diya ..😳

Anuj: Sab kuch except parivaar…😒

Anu: Parivaar..? Mere liye aap hi sab kuch hai..😳

Anuj: "Par.."🤔

Anu: Bends down and … closes her lips on his preventing him from talking😳

Moments later she pulls back…wiping her lips with her thumb😉😳

Anuj: clears his throat, looks into her eyes lovingly and continues "woh toh hoon, par…."🤔

She puts a finger on his lips and nods asking him not to speak….

Anuj: raises his hands to cup her face, bends them and rises his face to meet hers..😉😳

As she bends down, her lush tresses closes its curtains on them. Behind those curtains, begins their unrehearsed act, each playing their part to perfection.😳


Unreasoning desire catapulted through him when he felt her soar. He had shown her the desperation love could cause. He smiles holding her still when she tried to struggle away.


She stops struggling but obeyed and unraveled herself. 😳 Shuddering in pleasure, they lay spent in each other’s arms until the sun’s first rays shook them off their slumber.❤️❤️


------

As mentioned earlier, I am not interested in seeing any steamy scenes. But I was hoping for a meaningful scene that makes sense, a little playful, while alluding to intimacy would have been nice.

Well, it is what it is. Aisa hota toh.... kaisa hota? Let me know by commenting 😳



Oh soo lovely

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Priya, haven't seen you around the past couple of days.🤗 I was about to write an epitaph for this thread.😲

Hi yaar Smitha🤗

Went out shopping and blacked out. Was completely down. So just stayed in bed.

What???An epitaph?? Noooo😭 why???? Becoz of the show?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi Tia🤩 so happy that you are back🤗

Missed you❤️

How are you?

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