tere mere khayaal kaafi milte hai. I agree completely. Haldi and fire ice were rocking. last one I need to re-read to figure out where I got disconnected but I was. Haldi mein a few lines gave me butterflies for a long time! like how he thinks he needs to hurry and do what he is there to do, lol
I think I got disconnected after including Kavya part aur toh aur last part seemed a bit in rush to conclude the chapter… toh feeling aur emotion ya phir slow burn wasn’t there.. that how I felt.
Yes of course, in haldi that part he hurries is 🔥🔥🔥
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