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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: shriz

To kya same room me sofe par sula k pollination k through baccha karega kya😆

Doosre room me ho ya doosre bed par....doori is still doori🤣

Movies dekhi hai kabhi? Raat ko neend nahi aayegi ya fir bahot thand lagegi. Aur fir kuch aisa piyenge ki sab rules bhul jayenge aur fir raat haseen ho jayegi! Arree.. sorry woh to hamare forum ke OS mein hota hai🤣

Smart Anuj biceps urf nectar dikhake butterfly Anu ko attract karega. To woh sofe se udke bed pe aa jayegi

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: hinz

There was something so different about her today, the way she avoided to look me in the eye, perhaps she feared her eyes would give away the confession that she was eager to confess.



Isnt this what you had been waiting for all your life Anu? for her to make you a part of hers, the life you dreamt of with her, but why does it feel so strange to know what I knew already? and why is there an undertone of fear...a fear of losing what we have now...



Eyes shut in contemplation, resting his head on the headboard, with some old pictures partly tucked in his red diary, Anuj waited for her.



and there she was, to catch him off guard, deeply indulged in his daydream. He didn't realise the wind blew the pictures off the bed and one landed at the door where she stood, excited and nervous.



“Anuj aapko mana kiya tha na bed se na uthne ko, aapko baandh doongi mai bed se” fussing over him weak state, she told him off yet again, it was becoming quite the norm, she had definitely kept him under the thumb and he was loving it, all of.



Settling him back into bed, she asked “has kyu rahe hai? mai aapko daanta hai koi shabaashi nahi dee jo aap itna khush ho rahe hai” she yelled again, making his chuckle some more.



“tumhari daant par has nahi raha par kuch soch ke has raha hoon” he smiled.


“kya?” she asked curiously.



“ yehi ki aakhir tum meri zindagi mein aa hi gayi” and this time he said it with all intent making her gush a little as she tried to dodge his piercing gaze again.



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“Anupama please, mujhe pata hai tum yahan comfortable nahi ho, I’ll manage” he said when she started to look around the house to figure out the sleeping arrangement.



“Nahi Anuj, aisi koi baat nahi hai mai araam se yahan sofe pe..” she gestured.



“sorry Anu, meri wajah se tumhe itni pareshani uthani padh rahi hai...” he apologised but she cut him off saying “aur aap ne jo mere liye kiya hai uska kya?”



He smiled and as the meds started to kick in, he slipped into deep sleep leaving her with his diary.




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“I love you...Anuj” she rehearsed


No matter what she tried, she couldnt get herself to sleep, perhaps it was the excitement to tell him how she felt, or may be the nervousness to spend the night at his house, soon to be her own? ....


Tapping on her head,she rebuked herself for jumping the gun when she spotted the diary on his dresser.


‘nahi Anu, ye tu kya soch rahi hai, waise bhi shayar Kapadia ki shayari tujhe kahan samjh aati hai’ she sneered ‘par ab kuch kuch samajh aane lagi hai’ proud of herself, she smiled and watched him sleep peacefully.




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“ I love you Anujjj” she said it at last.


“Anu, I love you too” he replied audibly, making her open her eyes for a brief moment as if to acknowledge him and she went back to sleep.




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‘Anuj, aap?” she panicked


Her hair damp, her face as fresh and new as the morning dew, he couldn't take his eyes off the most beautiful morning view.


“kuch chahiye tha aapko? mujhe awaaz de dete, aap kyu aaye? she fussed again.



“Anu, wo jo kal tum kuch kehna chah rahi thi...” he could barely wait for her to say what her eyes and actions had announced already.



“Anuj” she tried again...” woh mai”



“Anupama please kehdo isse pehle ki meri jaan nikal jaaye”



“Anuj mai..I...mujhe aapse...”



Trying to get her to look at him he tilted his head and went a little closer making her insanely nervous.



“ Anu please?“ he begged while his phone rang continuously in the bedroom.



“Anuj....aapka phone...” she reminded .



annoyed by another interruption he said,” it can wait, par mai ab aur wait nahi kar sakta Anu” giving her a longing look he leaned against the wall and waited patiently when the door bell rang.





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just wrote a quick something while I was waiting for the episode to upload...batao kaisa laga, havent read it myself so excuse me if it dont make sense.


Yaar tum bhi makers ki tarah half story pe rukti ho 😂


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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Yaar I am 100% sure hinz ki door Bell malvika ne bajai hai teri iss story ke agle part mein uski entry ho jayegi

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

It's really beautiful ❤️ Anuj already sensed his Anu's feelings. The desperation with which he asked Anu to accept her feelings uff... Phir cliffhanger pe chod diya.. not fair Haan. Pls update jaldi

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

I'm a fan of your write-ups! Seconding all the posts above me. Everyone single one feels as if it's off an episode!


Way too good. Please continue to write more❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Ye os itna sanskari thi jitni tumhari niyat hai, hinz (detect the sarcasm please😛)

Sare sanskar os main yaad aate hain tumhe.

You really elaborated the look of anuj from when he was trying to read anu during nazar utaro scenario nahe was intense then

Making her insanely nervous

Kasam se❤️.

Mahol banakar kat leti ho tum😛

Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: moksha89

I feel like I’m watching an epi 😍


ps: I’m all about the “lean” - proximity always makes my heart race and face flush

tharki ps: hope he leans, slips on water and they roll all over each other


i blame your anatomy thread for the last ps 🤣



aww thank you ❤️


ps: same her dude, we can bond over that at some point😆


tharki p.s: well she kinda did slip but didnt land all on him, wo bhi hoga agla OS uske liye likhoongi

abhi ke liye haath pakding is what we'll get for a while😳


the anatomy threads are such a hit man🤣 har ek Anuj fan mein ek tharki chupa hai.🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Good start. Anupama's ... "Woh.... woh ... woh mai” “Anuj mai..I...mujhe aapse...” she will keep on saying this till the directors bring another road block.

Hinz ... in your OS, please make Anupama confess nicely.... we will replace the original with your OS and let's celebrate.

Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: arya212002

Beautiful you have written 🥰🥰🥰🥰

Waise tere OS mujhe aaj ke episode se bhi zyada pasand aaya❤️❤️
Especially the morning part 😘😘


oye yaar thanks so much🤗


wait karte karte epi ka I wrote to keep myself awake😳

Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Koms9

its lovely Hina. I love this smart Anuj of your OS, is ko sab samajh aa gaya


mera Anuj hai, iske saath mai jo chahe karoon😳 🤣

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