Ms. Shayar would be Kapadia😉 |MaAn OS|

Posted: 3 years ago
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Anu eagerly kept checking the door for his arrival and wondered what was taking him so long...How did he even wait for 26 long years when she struggled waiting for 26 minutes she thought....Trying not to look flustered she got busy with the preparations for the anniversary celebration.


The last couple of days had been a roller coaster ride for her and he was the reason behind it all. She was totally besotted by him, lost in his thoughts and couldn't make sense of anything she did. The mention of the magnets that day made her realise how dearly he cherished her love.


Though she needed no reminders to know how much he loved her when he had confessed it to the world and to her with all his heart. She would never have given ‘them’ a serious thought if Bapuji hadn't given her the push she needed. Loving him back was long due and she knew he had earned every bit of it...His magnetic aura was impossible to ignore and she was slowly giving in to his strong pull.



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The change in her was apparent to him, there was something going on with her he thought. The constant stares, the cheeky glances and the occasional day dreaming, was all unlike her...Yet, all of them being familiar symptoms, he wondered if the thing he had waited for all his life was finally in the making.....



When she brought him the chocolate cake that morning, he could taste the flavour he craved. She had made chocolate halwa for him before and that was to mark the start of their new unique relationship and now the cake? was it to mark the start of another? trembling with giddiness he hoped it was.



With no other stop to this lovebound train, Anuj went weak in the knees at the mere thought of her falling in love...And to test the waters he complimented the cake with an ‘I love you’, her reaction to it made him the happiest... is this what I think it is? he wondered and left it to love to works its magic.



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With bated breath and eyes glued to the door, she mentally rehearsed the shayari she wrote for him earlier, Mr Shayar Kapadia was sure in for a surprise..



chaahna hamein hai aadat aapki

par ab ban gayi hai ye zaroorat hamari

dosti se shuru hua tha jo hamara ye safar

ab pyaar tak aa pohonchi hai ye manzil hamari






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thank you, thank you, thank you☺️

shayari original hai bilkul apne Anuj ki tarah♥️

just thought I’d post a little something to add to my daily series, hope you like it!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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not many may know this song but the album is my all time fav


https://youtu.be/K0_Dt09Rq18



and for those who like newer songs, another one I like



https://youtu.be/8wetdNcXpU4

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Posted: 3 years ago
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👏👏👏🥳🥳🥳

Amazing

wah wah wah wah

Sach me shayari bahut bahut bahut achi thi (In Anu's style).


Amazing penned down every bit of emotion of both Anu and Anuj. God bles to ur writing dear and to u as well..


Well Thank-giving me you have given such a beautiful gift in this form of writing.

Posted: 3 years ago
#4

I loved it! ❤️👏👏

You are brilliant dear. You've captured Anuj's side of thought process so well.

I'm desperate to watch how Anupamaa and Anuj's love story proceed...n this work of yours is like honey candies! 👍🏼❤️

N the shayari is just 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow did not expect it to be a beautiful one-shot. 👏


Well Anu is putting in all her efforts.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ok let me repeat it for 35383628th time just like anupamaa repeats "orat" and "mard" word in her every speech "tu kya mast kaam karti hai re hinz"🤗

Itni variety to lays k flavour me nahi hoti jitni teri har post me hoti hai (that's the foody and hungry me complimenting you with all my heart...nah..better say with all my empty stomach)

Coming to the story....ammm...at this point do I even need to tell you that I loved it...I guess no...me commenting on your write ups would be like salman khan judging a dance reality show so phewww😆


chaahna hamein hai aadat aapki

par ab ban gayi hai ye zaroorat hamari

dosti se shuru hua tha jo hamara ye safar

ab pyaar tak aa pohonchi hai ye manzil hamari

Waah tujhe shayari bhi aati hai 🙏🙏

trust me the best shayari that I am capable of writing is

"Moti marti mote pe

Chhoti marti chhote pe

Master Ji k hai do bete

Par mai to marti chhote pe"


Ab ye parhne k baad tu khud hi bata if I am qualified enough for giving any kind of tippani on your awesome shayari😆



How did he even wait for trying 26 long years when she struggled waiting for 26 minutes she thought

Wo kya hai na anu humare shayar sahab me aur kuch ho na ho par sabar bahut hai😆


The constant stares, the cheeky glances and the occasional day dreaming, was all unlike her...Yet, all of them being familiar symptoms,


Who knows the symptom better than the patient himself😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Your posts are feast to us MaAnians.. itni variety itni emotions kaha se le aati hai Hinz👏 Shayari maze dhaar ki hai

Great work❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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waise hinzee mujhe bhi bhoolll gayiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😒😒

woh tho main ghoom rahi thi, dekh liya, padh liya and tarif kar di .......waise hinzeee u should write short novels and sell it...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#9

You've woven hope and realisation so beautifully in this OS, Hinz.


I loved your poetry ❤️


What better way to show ki usske rang mein dhalne ki koshish bhi hai aur arzoo bhi hai.

Posted: 3 years ago
#10


so sorry Sunny behen tu always meri first lot of tags mein hoti hai G ke sath, dunno how this happened, agli baar na hoga, maafi de do yaar🤗

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