OS - The moment - Page 2

Yes. I cannot wait for their first hug. And all the other firsts.

Originally posted by: iamcurious

Meine nahi kiya to tum bhi mat karo...aise saath milkar #MaAngiri karte hai na 😆

Jaldi batao ab kaisa laga.

Tum sab ki comments ki bhukhi hu...tabhi to likhne ka mann karta hai 🤗

Ok I'm back

toh kahan se shuru karein?

first of all what amazing flow you have in your stories, ekdum visialise karne jaisa

and the story itself, kaash ye saara ho jaaye ya atleast 10% bhi ho jaaye toh it'll be amazing...

loved how he kept their maryada in check and was everything she need him to be

though all of it was beautiful, let me post my fav lines, absolutely loved them!

His single platonic warm touch is all it took. Her hands still covering her face, she involuntarily dropped her head on his shoulder and cried her heart out.His gentle hold had freed her off of all or any mental strings and she gravitated to him, like her soul had heard his calling.

He'd dared to rest his chin on her head

He'd felt needed. Wanted She looked for a confidante, a guide, a friend in him. She needed his reassurance. And he silently wanted to be all of it. Anything that could bring solace to her.

His arms may not have enveloped her into him but his heart had

bas tum aise hi likhti raho and keep filling the void for us fans❤️

Originally posted by: iamcurious

Author's Note

Mein firse aaa gayi 😆...for all those who wanted a hug at the end. This is for you. Hope it makes up for that half left there scene. Not sure if its good enough but did try my bit. Tell me how you like. 😊

Roz aaya kar aisi hi ek story likh kar...mai to kehti hu idhar hi forum par ghar basa le to humara bhala hoga

OS - A moment

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Like a shadow not leaving her even for a moment. Even shadows quit in dark, he never did.

Kaise likh leti hai behen tu itne mast lines....tu mera dil permanently rakh hi le apne pas❤️(sambhaal kr rakhiyo😆).

Before Anuj could offer her water, she took the tray from his hand and offered him instead.

Ye maara anu ne chauka...that's what I do when mom asks me to bring water....kitchen se bhaai Lata hai paani aur mai bas tray me se utha kar de deti hu...saara credit mera😎

Anuj hated seeing her so vulnerable. So crestfallen. So weak.

Chal fir beta Anuj Isi baat par ek kiss kar le...I swear bandi apni saari weakness bhul jaaegi😆

'Anupamaa please....sambhalo apne aap ko', Anuj struggled to keep her from breaking down further.

To tu kya karega Anuj meri jaan agar wo khud ko khud hi sambhaal legi...chal kaam pe lag jaa.. shabaash😆

'Kya mein itni buri hu?', she covered her tear stained face with her palms and broke down copiously.

Anu bete bahut tej ho rahe ho tum....you very well know Anuj ka jawaab kya hoga😆....but I understand....I also play this reverse pshycology with my bf by saying "bahut buri hu na mai" taki wo meri tariff kare🤪

'Kya mein itnii...buri hu...Anuj?', she asked through clenched teeth in utmost despair.

I don't know why but my saddist heart wants Anuj to say "haan haan bahut buri hai tu"😃

. He was sceptical if reaching out to her like this would be crossing the imaginary boundary they'd drawn between them.

According to Anuj, everything other than staring means crossing boundary😕

His single platonic warm touch is all it took.

Aakhir hai to anu bhi aurat hi

Anuj was so worn out in that emotionally charged moment, he didn't realise his finger had stroked her right temple collecting the loose hair strands sticking on her wet face in the process, whose ends had stuck to his stubbled chin and tucked it behind her ear.

This....this is the best part of the story.... I will never dare to spoil it with my weird sense of tumour....you deserve all the applause for this🤗

`Am sorry,' she said. 'I...didn't mean to..,', she fumbled for words....'wo.... am sorry',

Aree waah Apni anu modern ho gai😎

Ab wo "soori" se aage barh kar "I'm sorry" bolne lag gai hai👏

Thanks for this👍🏼

'You were right when you said, you as a daughter are enough and there is no need to be a son to take care of a father. So, don't forget this and keep moving ahead. Don't let anything or anyone to stop you'.

Ab kahani anupamaa ki hai to ek mard aurat wala line hona to banta hai👏

She nodded affirmatively and said', Why don't you get some rest? It's been a long day again. You look awful.'

Awful but still more handsome than majority of men out there😛

'Uff...Go, before I scold you and you complain about it too.'

She should have said "go before I start my bhashan....I guarantee banda panch second me bhaag jata"

Anupamaa looked on at him in complete admiration. What did she do to deserve this man she thought.

You don't need to do anything dear...tu bas exist kar maze se aur Anuj ko tujh se pyar hota rahega baar baar

`Kya hua? Aise kyu dekh rahi ho? Any problem?'

I want anu to sing " tu cheez badi hai mast mast tu cheez badi hai mast" in reply to this

'Aap bahar sofa pe rest karlo. Mein yaha couch pe thik hu. I'll be able to watch bapuji also', she offered sincerely.

Ek doubt tha....kya couch se anu Anuj ko nihaar sakti hai raat bhar???😳dono aas paas hai kya?😆

'Are you sure?'

Bhai is ko mukka maar dungi mai...ek khushi pachti nahi hai bande se....jab bandi khud saamne se bol rahi rukne ko to kyu bakwas kar raha....baad me anu ne apna man badal liya to

'Never been before', she smiled.

Aur ye mara anu ne sixer

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End.

Kyu end ho gaya😭

And plzzz don't mind my bakwas... agar kuch bura lage to take it as a joke as I don't think much before writing...ye mera pyaar jatane ka tareeka hai🤗

Yaay. Ye itna dil se padhne ke liye bahut bahht thenkyou 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: yuvanaa

Awww. Such a beautiful version yet within the boundaries of anuj and anu's characters.

Beautifully written yaar👌👏👏👏❤❤❤

And thanks for giving us this version of d hug. ❤

As much as I want to see these two not so sanskari but this is what we shoudl accept 😂

Thank you for reading and liking.

Originally posted by: HpTheChosenOne

OMG this is so beautiful!! Totally loved it!! 👌👍🥰👏😊

Thank you so much. Cannot wait for yours to proceed. 😳

Originally posted by: sunshine36

Petition to add you to the team of writers of Anupamaa..woh log toh kuch karre nahin..pls tum hi script likdho😋😋 amazinh OS..was so involved in it I could picturize each moment and dialogue...aaah how amazing would it be if they can incorporate this...keep writing plsss🤗🤗😍

Waah. I like this one. Lelo bhai free mein likh dungi 😆...

On a serious note thank you for reading and liking.🤗

This was such a lovely feedback. It gives writer so much encouragement when you take time to tell what you really liked.

Bilkul yahi hai aur bhagwan kare likhne ka mauka milta rahe for all 😊

Haye what we all are yearning for ty for satisfying us ...

Makers pls give us ek hug half hug shoulder head touch hi sahi plleej

A very beautiful OS at an apt moment ❤️❤️