A night to remember... MAAN FF.. Part5 PG 15- 28/11 - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

Haye finally tum ne padh li I thought many weren't interested even thought of leaving it for a while.

Happy u enjoyed it .

The mystery of the box .... Hope it remains a mystery till I write the next part .

Kaafi experienced hain yahan sab đŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€Ł

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Posted: 3 years ago
#82

Real mein to Anuj hug nahi karega, plz atleast fanfiction mein karva do 😄 your next update is needed for #maan fans!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#83

I so want to đŸ„°đŸ„°đŸ„° will do soon ty â˜ș

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awesome chapter đŸ„°đŸ„°... please update soon it's been Soo many days

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Posted: 3 years ago
#85

Ohh no. Plz don’t give up on it.. we need our regular dose of MaAn 😀

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ok thank you very much for the lovely comments and feedback .... I took a really long time to post this because honestly I dk how well I can describe mush..... Something I'd love to see and read rather onyl if it's a couple I love not a big fan of romance novels....... Never was dk why đŸ€”đŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€Ł


Anyways I really hope I don't disappoint as we are all (incl myself) awaiting this with bated breath đŸ«đŸ«.

Chapter 4 : Maan's consummation( yep this is the one đŸ˜‚đŸ€ŁđŸ˜…đŸ˜…đŸ˜…đŸ„°đŸ˜).


Anuj rushed off to the rest room taking his night dress along it was the usual night wear but it was brand white symbolical of a new fresh start in their relationship like a new page . Anu had ordered one in white for him as he didn't have any in white ... So thoughtful of Annu she planned the entire thing tonight all by herself giving me a heart attack in the name of surprise... How beautifully she had planned the entire thing thr colour thr flowers the fragrance was all his choice .





Was the box her idea too ???


No no no can't be m sure Annu mustn't be even aware of the contents of thr box 🎁 as the receptionist did say something along the lines of it being a complementary.... Or did I not hear it right but how? Anu? Wasn't she his innocent anu ,?


Anuj took a hot shower bath changed into his night clothes.. but was hesitant to go outside...

Anuj ; I was ok since I saw the box . I was thinking she has never experienced to making love as with her ex it was more of a duty and even the fulfilment of desire was one sided . I was thinking I'll make her experience love pleasure desire and make her see the real meaning of making love 💕. Not everyone experiences the actual beauty of it . But the box if annu had kept it she must have some wild ideas .. ab main nervous ho raha hoon.

Anu: Anuj!!!! Itni der tak kya kar rahe hain đŸ€Ș bahar ayiye na ..

Anuj : haan araha hoon 😳😳😬 jaaon ya na jaaon ..jaana toh padega

Anu: bahar ayiye na bohat der nahayenge toh bimar ho jayenge . Bahar ayiye kaada bhi peena hai

Anuj: ek toh main already nervous hoon aur madam ko khaada ki padi hai.

Anu kaada nahi

Anu: Anuj apko peena padega . Bahar ayiye... Arre yeh kya hogaya

Anuj opens the door of thr bathroom and comes outside to see jos wife standing back facing him ... Anu has worn a deep cut almost backless blouse for her sari .... Her chain has got stuck to one of the decorations in the room and she was finding it hard to remove it ..... All the while exposing her almost bare back to Anuj making him go excited and turning on the deep desires in him again .

He sees her struggling and as a result a small scratch on her neck . He asks her to hold still and comes behind her gently pushing her hair in front trying to remove the tangle of her chain .

His hands esp his fingers were touching her almost bare back sending shivers up her spine. She had never been touched so intimately before . With his gentle touch and his closeness coupled with his fragrance was driving her on edge she jus wanted to pull him and kiss him all over. There was this rising passion but both mellowed down as Anuj removed the tangle she turned and looked at him with eyes down like a shy new bride .

Anuj was looking at her eyes her sweet cute nose that always flared when she was angry sick or blushed and it was flaring now. He didn't even ask her in his life but kanha ji gave her to him made her fall in love with him , confess her feelings in the most dramatic passionate way and now with tonight they're gonna remove all hurdles all boundaries in their relationship and come together literally as man and wife

Anuj raised her chin with his fingers gently .

Anu always loved his touch so gentle... He was indeed the perfect replica of her kanha ji his love was devotion and she felt blessed to share this life with him .

Anuj: pata hai annu aj subah se main pareshan tha ki kahi tumhari tabiyat kharab thi nahi. Kyunki tum off nahi aayi pehli baar .. ab yeh sab dekh kar meri haalat kharab ho gayi hain. Maine socha nahi tha ki tum mere liye itna sochogi aur itna karoogi...

Anu: kyun main apne pyaar ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakti hoon . Aap mere.liye kitna kuch kiya . Bale hi aap mujhe kahogi maine khud kiya par apke bina kuch nahi kar paati naahi mere liye naaahi un auroton ke liye aap sach mein mere liye kanha ji bankar aye hai.. divorce ke baad bhikar ne ke baad main ek dum se toot sa gaya tha maine soch bhi liya ab jeeungi sirf parivar ke liye .... Kisi aur se pyaar karna toh door mujhe kisi ki saath bhi nahi chahiye tha

Anuj: pata hai reunion mein hi tumne bola tha

Anu: pata nahi dheere dheere aapne mere liye meri parivar meri bachon ke liye jo kuch bhi kiya despite them having utter disregard. Main aur Mera dil apke aur kheeche chale aya pata nshi kab aur kaise pyaar ho hi gaya aur jo maine 25 saal tak pyaaar samjha tha woh toh sirf ek duty thi woh soulmate wala pyaar mujhe sirf apke ke paas feel hota tha ek hi saal main is liye jab aapne wapas us jaane ka faisla liya meri parivar ke kaaran main apne aap ko rok nahi paayi aur jo dil mein tha sab kuch bol diya

Anuj : haan tum kaise entry maari filmi andaaz mein chok gaya tha... Par Honestly anu I never thought I'll ever witness this day . Devika mujhe tumhari zindagi ki baarein mein parivar ke baare mein bits and pieces mein baat kar thi thi lekin toshu ke baad maine utna sunna bhi nahi chaha dil ko bohat takleef hoti thi isliye toh door gaya tha lekhin itne saal baad jab india wapas aane ka mann bana tha tum bhi ek kaaran thi tumhe dekhna chahta tha .

Anu: yeh sab sad moments abh se max yaad nahi rakhenge aur inko mitana ke liye bohat saari happy moments banayenge milkar .. aj se

Anuj : aaj raat se ?? (Coming closer wrapping his arms her waist .

Anu blushed and tried to push him away .

Anu: pehle apna khaada pee lijiye bhukar hojayega

Anuj : yaar tum moments aise spoil mat karo aur pls itne sweet yaadon mein khada mat pilana kuch meetha ho jaye .

Anu: nahi pehle chup chaap khada pe lijiye. Ek dam chup

Anuj : ok ok peeta hoon

Anu : daant ke liye sorry nahi bolungi

Anuj;; sorry nahi chahiye tumhare haq hai .

Anu : waise mujhe bohat bhookh lag rahi hai yeh box mein kya hai. Shayad kuch chocolate honge haan hogi shayad isliye rakha hai complementary

Anuj almost choking on his khada ..

Anu: kya hua abhi se khaansna shuru kardiya

Anuj: nahi kuch nahi

Tumhe nahi pata box ke andar kya hai

Anu; nahi mujhe nahi pata

Anuj; tumne yeh sab nahi ordr kiya

Anu: maine nahi kya sirf decoration ke liye instructions de di thi. Kya hua kya hai isme

Anuj: annu rehne do side mein rakh do hamara kuch kaam ka nahi teekh hai

Anu: par hai kya isme

Anuj: maine bola na kuch nahi almost hiding his blush

Uski annu yeh sab kaise jaanti hogi

despite trying to take away the box from her . She opened the box and was seeing the contents jn a perplexed manner.

Anu: yeh sab kya hai

Anuj: anu rehne de kuch nahi. Rakh lo side se

Anu: are yeh sab handcuffs kis liye aur yeh blindfold yeh kisliye kisi ko arrest karne ke liye hotel mein rakhte hai kya galti se galat box bhej diya kya .waise yeh handcuffs kuch ajeeb sa hai itne furry or soft hain

Anuj: (smirking) tum he sach mein pata nahi yeh kis liye hai đŸ˜‚đŸ€Ł.

Anu: nahi toh ...apko pata hai toh boliye na main bhi jaana chata hoon .

Anuj : woh ........main.......... kya batao

Anu; arre boliye nAA

Anuj: boldun? Boldun?

Anu : arre boliye nAA .

And Anuj explain it to her the usage of the handcuffs and blindfold making anu face go red in embarassment and blush

Anuj : toh basically I tie u to the bed blindfold you. And can do whatever I want with you while you're driven wild

Tho what say mrs Kapadia shall I ?

And Anuj came near anu with the handcuffs .

Anuj; so first ull tie or I'll tie ,😍😘

Anu: Anuj yeh sab karna zarorri hai kya ajeeb nahi lag raha

Anuj: are hubby wifey ke beech kya ajeeb

Anuj came closer to anu with the handcuffs trying to grab her . Anu pushed him in the bed and got up to move frim there resulting in a cute chase by anuj right behind her with the ongoing chase there was a switch on the side table which got switched on accidentally

The room was lit in a romantic set up and suddenly flowers fell on them followed by disco lights and eventually music turned on automatically with ooh la la playing in thr bgm.

That

Anu and Anuj wer shocked with the sudden turn of events that before they could absorb or realise what was happening the flowers were on them and they had tripped and literally fell in eo arms on thr floor.

Anuj looked at anu lovingly and tucked some of her hair behind her ear . His fingers slowly traced her back and rested on her bare waist sending chills into Anupama's heart . He held her tightly.

Anu: Anuj chodiye naa

Anuj: hotel room book kardi aisa romantic mode set kardi ab kaise chodun

He said and held her even tighter...... Amidst surrounded by flowers in the floor they had their first proper kiss starting slowly subtle and then a bit fast paced eventually driven with desire pasion snd emotions never felt before they were exploring each other mouths and tongues until they had to stop as they couldn't breathe

Anuj looked at his dear wife anu his wife annu his dear wife annu she was his only his .... He bent down to lift her in his arms

Anu : Anuj let it be u can't carry me I'd be heavy

Anuj : says who well j should be bothered about it and not yu darling 😘😘

Saying so he planted a soft kiss on her forehead and lifted her easily taking her to their bed all the while looking at her ...staring at her beautiful face while she was blushing and kept her gently on the bed

Anuj: pehle mein yeh loud music ko off kardeti hoon

Saying so he switched off the music

Anuj made anu lie down in the bed and started showering kisses all over her body from head to toe making her squirm with pleasure. She never felt thr rush of emotions she was feeling at the moment . He nuzzled around her neck planting kisses and simultaneously removed the sari and the fragments of her clothing. He kissed her naked body in all the sensitive areas and slowly started doing down the pleasure was adding upto for anu until she could bare it no more.

She came on top of her kissing him passionately her desires were in overdrive. She had completely lost control over her actions and took Anuj by pleasant surprise while she removed his night dress all the while kissing him in everywhere .

Both of them had made love but it never had the passion the desire it had today . They simply couldn't stop kissing and touching each other's body everywhere and when they couldn't hold it any longer Anuj came on top of anu filling her with love for them it was like the floodgates of emotions literally broke down and they were entwined in a true act of love ❀. .....


Eventually they felt exhausted and Anuj literally fell on anu tiered .


They both didn't realise that they had so much passion still stuck inside and it came out jn the most beautiful pure manner . Anuj cupped anu face

Anuj: tysm annu aj keliye mere liye itna kuch karne ke liye mujhe yeh haq apne upar dene ke liye. Main bata rahi sakta main kitni badi khush kismat hoon .

Saying this all the while kissing her face and neck and anu reciprocates with the same passion.

Anu: thank you aj ke liye mere zindagi mein wapas aane ke.liye ab aap ke.bina zindagi ke.baare soch bhi sakta hoon . Apna khayal rakhna

They fell satiated and cuddled in eo arms suddenly Anu realised how she was pushed away by her ex as it was an obligation with him so she tried to move away

A bit to give anuj space and sleep in a comfortable position.

Anuj: tum.kahaan ja rahe ho??

Anu: woh main ... Ap space.lijiye sukoon se comfortably soye ga

Anuj: par mere space, comfort aur sukoon toh tumhari baahon mein hai na . Pls mujh se woh sukoon space mat cheeno

Saying so he spread his arms and she came.swifftly into his embrace happily beaming with joy as how she always wanted to cuddle and sleep post love making and this was the first time she had .. come to think of it, this was the first time she had made love.

Anu Anuj hugged eo tightly wearing nothing but eo love 💕. Anuj saw the handcuffs lying in one corner of the bed showed it to anu both started laughing. And anuj handcuffed his hand with anu's.

.After. A while anu was feeling cold and found anuj's night coat thrown on the bed during their encounter and Wrapped it around herself .

Anuj checked the time it was 12:30 AM . He nuzzled anus neck and bit anu's ear lobe and whispered

Anuj: goodnight mrs Kapadia.

Anu: goodnight Anuj

She pouted which made him go weak again

They slept off satiated happy thankful for the night for their journey which has truly broken all the shackles














Anuj suddenly woke up and saw the time it was 4:00 Am

He saw Anu wrapped in his arms tightly sleeping . As and when he became completely conscious he felt her bare skin rubbjng against his and was getting affected.

He nudged a sleepy anu who opened her eyes half awake and whispered in her ear.

Mrs Kapadia....... Round 2???







Ok this is the max possible mush I could think of hopefully u ppl like it and I haven't disappointed any one

Writing this lying next to my son and husband who has no idea what the mommy is typing into thr mobile

Edited by Meriam25 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#87

I read it again from part one.

Behan this is freaking awesome.

Latest part, I clutched my pillow while reading it. Now u can understand.

Means round 2, seriously, skin blush me red huyi meri. God.


Awesome, do write more

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Posted: 3 years ago
#88

Too good yaar 😀 Funny in the beginning and sizzling hot towards the end 😉

Please do continue. Can’t imagine VanYa’s reaction when they know about the MaAn’s “Night to Remember” 😜

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Posted: 3 years ago
#89

Love love love it 😊. Mature passionate meaningful love making. Starting with sweet and hotter at the end. Do write more dear. 👍😊

Edited by ayushijindal - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#90

I was so skeptical to write the mushy part and yest late night I wrote so was dozing off while writing in itself ...đŸ€ŁđŸ€ŁđŸ€Ł

Had edited out some inconsistencies do try reading it once again đŸ„°


Tysm glad u liked it ...

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