Bench - one hand distance OS

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I know guys the abstract ending of the episode made is all wondering what is in store for us on Monday. I don't know if I will be able to do the justice to the intense emotion.

She was devastated with what happened. Her forehead is red by the sindoor which was the blessings from her Babuji. She has thousand thoughts coming to her mind. She don't know which to address first. She was going up to an unknown road which is going nowhere. Her phone rang on which she didn't gave attention or her brain is not taking that phone ring because of noise of thoughts she has. She did all she can for the family which in return never appreciated but insulted with foul words and questioned her character. The people who are questioning her were the ones who themselves are questionable, their actions, character, reactions.

She was sitting on a bench alone in the park. There were people for morning walk, kids playing. One man was looking at her from the distance. His eyes were wet, but he can't do much as per him he don't have the right to say anything. But today he decided to take one step closer no matter he has the right or not. If it is right or wrong. Because his love is sitting shattered on a bench. For him he lost his everything.

For him, he is poor today. But then he thought of making and gathering everything from scratch.

With baby steps he went closed to her. Sat at a one hand distance. He so wanted to hug her and hide her in his arms but he cannot do it even in his wildest dreams. With blurred and deep voice, he said, Anu...

She looked at him with red eyes and tears but those were not ready to come out. This time he is not shocked to see her but is disappointed in himself even more. Per him it is all because of him not for the night that she took care of him but for 26 years ago that he was not able to say a word to her. He decided to just sit there for her support as he knew that she wants to be alone. But she opened up.

Anu: Aapko pata hai maine kabhi kuch us ghar se nahi manga tha, bas respect or bharosa manga tha but wo bhi nahi mila. Mai agar apni jaan bhi de du phir bhi koi farak nahi padega.

His heart teared apart listening this. Anu continued.

Anu: Toshu is my first born, but bura tab laga jab usne bhi ungli utha di. Mujhe Mr. Shah ki baat se koi fark nahi padta but jise Maa se bhi jyada respect di usne itne bure words bole. But ab mai us ghar ke liye aanshu nahi bahaungi.

Anuj very well knew that he needs to support her no matter he too is shattered now seeing her like this.

Anuj so wanted to put the whole world in her feet but knew that she is strong enough to do that by her own. She is his queen. Its just the matter of time and this time too will pass too. And when she will be fine and gather herself, he knew that what havoc he needs to create for people who did this to her. But today, now at this second, she and only she is his priority.

He managed his specs and all the courage he put his hand on her head.

Anuj: mai ye to nahi bolu nga ki mai samjhta hmm, bz I am not a parent but I know ki kaisa lagta hai jab aap sahi ho or duniya sawal kare.

Anu: aapko lagta hoga na ki Anu jaise hi life me aayi aapki izzat pe ungli uth rahi hai. Aap...

Anuj (cutting her word): Please Anu, aaj bol diya but aaj ke baat ye baat ni. Mai Anuj Kapadia hmm, Vanraaj Shah nahi, jise tumhari respect, importance nahi hai.

Anu: Surri, Surri. But wo baatein kitna bhi karu, kitna bhi bhulne ki koshish karu, wo baatein mere mind se nahi jati hai. But wahi bolte hai na to Jo jaisa hai use puri duniya waisi hi lagti hai. Mujhse galti ho gayi ki maine un logo ko samman diya jo uske haqdaar nahi they kabhi kabhi. Aap kahtey hai ne ki aapki kismat pyar me kharab hi rahi hai, to meri kismat pyar me, samman me kharab rahi hai.

Anuj: Mai ek baar phir bol raha hai ki mai kaisa koi kaam nahi karna chahta jisse tumpe aanch aaye but kitni koshish ki but aanch aa hi gayi. I am sorry Anu.

Anu: Nahi nahi aapne kuch galat nahi kiya, infact humne kuch galat nahi kiya, agar kisi ki soch hi aisi hai to kya kare.

Anuj: Mujhe tumhare dimag me daalna hi nahi chahiye tha, ghar chhodne ke baare me.

Anu: Agar aap nahi boltey tab bhi mai ghar chhod deti. Aapne kaha tha na ni pyar duriya sah sakta hai but nafrat nazdikiya nahi. Kisine 26 years pyar me duriya sahi hai, sabr kiya hai but nafrat 26 minutes bhi nahi rakh payi sabra.

Anuj couldn't believe what he heard right now. He couldn't understand what it meant, he somewhere knew that it seems that his secret of 26 years is now in open, he wanted to confirm but couldn't. He just knew that he needs to support her and she is his priority.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It is hard for one to fathom her pain as we've never walked in her shoes but his desire to be her support system to be there for her in whatever way he can is something we can relate to. Watching mutely not being able to take on the folks that caused the pain but giving her the reassuring presence is all he can do now. Beautifully expressed.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: moonwearer

It is hard for one to fathom her pain as we've never walked in her shoes but his desire to be her support system to be there for her in whatever way he can is something we can relate to. Watching mutely not being able to take on the folks that caused the pain but giving her the reassuring presence is all he can do now. Beautifully expressed.


He wanted to be her support system, I tried to bring more of Anuj as we didn't see him today.

Thank you for the appreciation.

Posted: 3 years ago
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beautiful 👌

her pain is too long bearing and she will need a while to come to terms with her current life.

Anuj❤️ good to see more of him



thank you for this

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so beautiful yaar.

I so eantyan angst scene in maan day and also some light hearted moments plees.

Make it our maan day pleej

This was so so so beautiful. I guess we can expect something along these lines in the show hopefully makers won't disappoint till now I be liked the way they've progressed with maan hopefully I won't get disappointed.

Do writr more it's fantastic

And ty so so much for the tag ☺️☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: hinz

beautiful 👌

her pain is too long bearing and she will need a while to come to terms with her current life.

Anuj❤️ good to see more of him



thank you for this

Actually idea of writing it came from your post where you said koi to FF likh do😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meriam25

This is so beautiful yaar.

I so eantyan angst scene in maan day and also some light hearted moments plees.

Make it our maan day pleej

This was so so so beautiful. I guess we can expect something along these lines in the show hopefully makers won't disappoint till now I be liked the way they've progressed with maan hopefully I won't get disappointed.

Do writr more it's fantastic

And ty so so much for the tag ☺️☺️

Thanks for appreciating and liking it🤗

Yaar bas title kabhi bhi ni samjh aata mujhe 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Anu's last dialogue😳....ufff that was unexpected turn in the story...Anuj k sath sath mai bhi shocked thi😆

How did anu know about his feelings....plzzz is par ek aur part likh de😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrizz

Anu's last dialogue😳....ufff that was unexpected turn in the story...Anuj k sath sath mai bhi shocked thi😆

How did anu know about his feelings....plzzz is par ek aur part likh de😃


I will surely try.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This feels like it should be the next scene in the show. So well written and skits in beautifully. It’s what Anuj would want to do and say…. He would be feeling awful and would be thinking that it happened because of him. But as we know things were going to explode at some point.

But like the show you have left us yearning for more with Anupama’s last dialogue….. maybe Anuj did blabber in his sleep whilst suffering from his fever the night before 🤔

Please do continue

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