Main hoon teri, tu hai mera|Karwachauth Special MaAn/DeBu SS| Pt4 Pg4 - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Such a cute one ❤️

Romantic Anuj is so cute and adorable ❤️

And Devika being Devika 😆

And on top of that married MaAn is a treat to read ❤️😳


Please update the next part. Waiting for it 😃

Posted: 3 years ago
#12

“ Anuj chodiye mujhe” she yelped trying to unlock his firm tug on her waist. “ jaane dijiye mujhe aapke liye breakfast banana hai”......and he instantly let her free and hesitantly uttered “breakfast? woh toh...maine kar liya! “ he cheered hoping she would believe him but did she? ...

”arey haan ..karliya maine breakfast....subah ko...I mean early morning...you know...healthy hota hai and all....subah.....early......breakfast karna?”....muttering with frequent pauses between his words he slyly tried to check if she was convinced but her look suggested otherwise...the. quickly dodging her curious gaze he turned around and walked to the window....


she followed him inquisitively and awed at the cute look he wore as he stood there innocently fidgeting with the belt of his bath robe “Anuj... aapne bhi vrat rakha hai?” she asked in a crackled voice ...cupping his face in her palms, she tried to get him to look her in the eye and he knew he’d be caught red handed the moment their eyes locked...


He didn’t have to answer that cause his face did all the talking. Anu felt a huge rush of emotions clouding her eyes...It wasn’t the first time he made her feel this way but every one of his endearing gestures made her feel that she was the luckiest person in the whole wide world to be sharing a life with someone who could sweep her off her feet. She couldn't believe the kind of life he had given her and religiously thanked her lucky stars for the man in her life...one who made her complete.


“Anu? kahan kho gayi?” he asked with a slight worry in his tone.... “huh? kuch nahi” she nodded breaking out of her trance and discreetly mopped the tears in the corner of her eyes.... “Anu, yahan dekho meri taraf” he said pulling her to face him and gently lifted her chin so he could see her closely....he knew exactly what she was thinking and feeling...and this time it was him who felt a giddy rush of emotions as she plunged her face into his chest and he replied by grasping his arms around her until she could count his heartbeat.






I know this was a chotu sa part and also it was meant to be a two shot originally but please manage karlo..will try and post more very soon....aur haan please bolna kaisa laga

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Cute sa. I can imagine Anuj fidgeting when trying to lie. You portrayed that very well😀

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

The connections of the characters is so nice, that they can understand each other without speaking. You potrayed that beautifully. 👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Both the parts are amazing❤️

Part 1 main devika and anuj banter was🤣 and then devika sending message to anu😆 that girl is our humor factor.

Coming to part 2, i really liked the line where anu cupped Anuj's face and asked him if he had kept fast too. I imagined it way too cutely

Eagerly waiting for next part.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

This was so so cute and beautiful hinz

Totally like our maan very beautiful.

I could picturise it I didn't know there was a sec part I missed it

U need to write more

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Aw what an endearing life you've conjured heena. Both so lost in each other. Anupama is getting smart. I think smartness is rubbing off from partner and consultant.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Ufffff.....this made my day ❤️

Hinz you have amazing sense of humour and at the same time you are good at writing romantic ffs as well....matlab itni variety kaise😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19


Love kyu bhai arrange marriage mein bhi sab hota hai...but not so cheesy...subtle wala romance 😛


And thanks much for liking the story 🤗🤗


@Hinz Pls can I borrow this Anuj of yours? Vrat rakhne wala pati kise nai chahiye 😍

Posted: 3 years ago
#20

“yaar Bunty tu samajh kyu nahi raha... kaise karega tu ghar par saare arrangements jab Anupama bahar jaane ke liye mana kar rahi hai? usko pata chal gaya hai ki maine bhi vrat rakha hai” grumped Anuj on the call as he paced the balcony floor.... “hahaha kya? tune bhi vrat rakha hai? matlab ab do channiya order karni hongi?” Bunty laughed pulling his leg...”Buntyyyyy ...focus!” yelled Anuj “ yaar mera vrat rakhna is not the issue here, Anu keh rahi hai ke ghar par hi rahegi poora din spend...ab kya karein?”



Bunty continued laughing at his crazyily and hopelessly in love friend and said “ yaar Anuj tu toh mahaan aashiq se ab ek aadarsh patnivrata mahapurush ban gaya hai“ and carried on laughing....”bas kar yaar Bunty, bakwaas na kar, agar tu kuch nahi kar sakta toh main De-vi-ka.....” and Bunty quickly sobered up. Anuj knew this would work and it did... Bunty was miffed and said “dekh yaar uss Devika ka naam na lena, badi hi nakchadi aur moohphat bandi hai...mai kar raha hoon na tera kaam, tu bas sab mujh par chod de aur tu bhabi ke saath quality time spend kar main sab sambhaal loonga” he assured.


on the other side of the balcony


“Devikaaaa bata ne kya karu?” begged Anu..she wanted to plan something special for Anuj...she knew she could never match him when it came to ways of showing love but this time she wanted to try and put in extra effort to make Anuj feel loved and appreciated for all that he does. She also knew that these things came to Anuj naturally while she was a novice in the area and that she could rely on her dear friend Devika to share her expertise but...”Anu meri baat sun, tu kyun ye sab karna chahti hai? uske liye ye sab matter nahi karta yaar!” Devika knew them both very well... “jaanti hoon Devika...Anuj ke liye ye sab jaroori nahin hai par mera mann karta hai ke mai unhein saari khushiyaan doon aur unhein batao ke main unse kitna pyaar karti hoon...pyaar karna hi kaafi nahi hota na Devika, jatana bhi toh padhta hai...” reasoned Anu in a melancholic tone realising her desire to make up for the lost time.

“ chal ab zyada senti na ho...Anu yaar main jaanti hoon tu kya keh rahi hai, aur ye bhi jaanti hoon ke Anuj ko bas tu chahiye aur kuch nahi” Devika sensed Anu’s guilt and didnt want her to be upset...” par Devika...” said Anu and Devika quickly perked up the conversation saying “accha chal mai kuch romantic sa plan karti hoon tum dono ke liye aur tu ab jaa aur wo kar jo Anuj ko actual mein chahiye tujhse...samajh gayi na mai kya keh rahi hoon? “....Anu turned a pale red as smiled and hung up the call saying “paagal....”


a few hours later.....


“Devika tu help kar sakti hai? ye Bunty se kuch nahi hoga” sighed Anuj on the call. “kaun Bunty? scooter wala?” Devika tried to place him. “haan wahi” said Anuj hoping Devika didn’t remember what happened the last time they had all met. “ Anuj tune mere hote hue uss Bunty ki help li? tu bhool gaya kya ke 26 saal pehle uski scooter ki wajah se tu Anu ko...” she reminded...” Devika..Devika woh sab purani baatein hai, ab toh Anu meri hai na, tu woh sab chod aur meri help kar! “ ...Anuj was glad she only remembered Bunty from back then and if she knew it was the same guy who tried to flirt with her at the reunion she would have bitten his head off... He sighed with relief when Devika shared her plan for the evening and signed off saying “ jaa ab tu Bunty ke sath team up kar aur mai apni biwi ke saath you know ______. ________. ___________”.




precap:

“Anu!!!!!” she screamed with joy seeing her friend clad in a beautiful and elegant red saree “Anuj toh gaya kaam se”







ok so that was a decent sized update? and DeBu are the new couple as you can see brought in on popular demand😂 please batana kaisa laga, thenx

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