|Fantasy|- MaAn shots ( Act 13-A-ii PG 40 UPDTD 14 march)(16+) - Page 7

Oh this was amazing❤👏👌. Kept me on the edge till last min. I so hope even in the show anu joins the dots with the hints she is getting and figure out anuj's love for her. 😢❤

Amazing!...

just finished reading last three acts...

Krish toh bada hi shana nikla, Devika's banter on the phone hahaha, mandir mein shadi bhi karli and Emraan Hasmi😆

Latest act- had me glued to my phone's screen..maa wala kya twist daala hai, sundar ati sundar! 26 years ki fal ab milega, his tears reminded me of Humpty crying...

kya mast likha hai yaar, please agla act de do jaldi se, make maa and Devika team up or something. kuch bhi kar but MaAn ko ek kar

Wow this is so so beautiful yaar

Pls update pls pls

I'm sure jn the show too anu is soon gonna catch him red handed

I didn't know this was updated

Thank goodness I came to the second page

My first thought was “nnnnnoooooo! It can’t be cut just yet” 😀

I was so engrossed in flashback. Superbly imagined and written 👏🏼👏🏼

Why I m always late

Usne wait kiya jab tak vo safe ghar na pahochi....I mean...ahhhhh..feel so good...I need to show this character of anuj to my friends(pyar to hamara he nai koi)kutte ese he ki ladki hoke muje unko drop karna padta he...kisi kaam ke nai...I need to send this work of urs to them so they can realize kitne gadhe he vo..

S-Stay Anuj…just stay”,😭😭can feel this...really feel good tht she stopped him..

Anuj is such a gentleman yaar

She caught anuj while he was at door...tht was amazing...

Anu ko bhi sarre dots join karte karte dhire dhire pata chal jayega

I just love devika..she is gem❤

Anuj anu ke ghar pe wow...

Chod gayi mujhe vo! She left me! K-Kisi a..aur kki ho gayi. I— main us..se bata bhi nhi p..paa.ya that I…that I..” 😭😭sach bolu muje ese scene me I mean ese me Rona ataa he I can't handle emotional scene or any convo In real tooo...baat kisi ki b ho I started to cry ...I feel really bad...

So his mom knows ko vo tha...and anu b sare points jod ri..

N u said cut...a big big big NOOOOOOOOOOOOO.....

😭😭how can you do this...ese nai stop karna chahie tha...let her do tht ..I mean let her join the points...wrote more on this...its my request...

Have no more words...will just say that...YOU ARE MY FAVORITE...AND I JUST LOVE YOUR WORK❤❤

THE CLIFFIE. OMG THE CLIFFIE. I WAS NOT READY AAAAHHHH BUT IM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT ONE NOW

Again a Nyccc Act dear....but short one....plz ryt next Act as long

Amazing yaar....mtlb shyad ab anu ko anuj ke dil ki baat bina bole smjh aa jaye....kitna difference hai na vanraj ne kbhi uthne nahi diya anu ko aur anuj kbhi girne nahi deta hai

Finally free hui and am up just to read your update.

Worth staying up. Every word kept me hooked till the end. So well written.

Anu ki mom ne aate hi boundry mardi. Isko rakho yaar story mein 😁

Loved the moment when she holds on to him and doesnt let him turn. 💔

Do continue. 😊

Oh my!

Anupama’s mummmmmmm! She saw everything and hopefully Anu will now join all the dots that have been laid so neatly in front of her. She can answer her own question… why is he so like that?

There are so many bits that I throughly enjoyed and struck a chord with me today.

Her heartache but his heartbreak 💔 I think we all feel and see that.
Her pain can be seen through his eyes.

Anuj and his patience and Devika being Devika. I am glad Anu was able to cry her heart out to her and Devika was able to use a few well chosen words for Vanraj…. Something Anuj wouldn’t say or do as that’s not him.

I took in a huge breath reading the last bit and a huge sigh at the end… filled with mixed emotions, I am smiling, pondering, re-reading …. Just so much! You have really left us on tender hooks waiting for the next part!

Keep the next part coming!