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Posted: 3 years ago

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Again a nycc part dear ....mindblowing plz update part B soon

Thank you!❤️ will bbe updating today, do read!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Act 9B


But as she opened her fist to reveal medicines, he glanced at her from the corner of his eyes and pressed his lips. GK!!

Obliging,as he took his medicines, Anupama settled on the sofa by his side and stated,“Aapko panic attack hua tha”.

“Hm”

“Kyun?”

“Vo toh aise h—

“Anuj!Be honest”, as she cut him off, her tone terse, Anuj placed the empty glass onside table and looked straight ahead.

It starts now.

“I thought that after the mess I had put you into, you would probably break off…this friendship, and I couldn’t bear that. Also, my guilt regarding that was immense so I wanted to leave your life for good but apparently….” Anuj laughed then as he added, “I couldn’t bear that either…going away from you that is”.

Anupama looked at him overwhelmed, “Aap mujhse…itna py..prem…kese…kese kar sakte hain?Mujh mein aisa hai kya?”

“Sab kuch”, Anuj replied pat as he fixed her with his gaze brimming with love, “Sab kuch hai tum mein. Aur tum hi mera sab kuch ho”

As she lowered her gaze embarrassed, he looked away realizing that he was being too fierce. But wasn’t that his only chance.

“I…love you Anupama. I always have and I always will. Ab jab baat saamne aa hi gayi hai, toh tumse chupaunga nahi, aur na hi chupa sakta hu. US gaya tha kyuki…kuch nahi bacha tha yahan, pehle mom dad aur fir tum….toh chala gaya. Aur 26 saal baad wapas bhi aaya, toh sirf tumhare liye. Devika had always known of my love for you and kept me informed about you throughout….”

Anuj paused a bit and looked at Anupama for her reaction while she looked back,smiling slightly, “I can imagine that. Even at the reunion, she was going on and on about me being your college cr..crush”, she stammered at the end, and Anuj laughed.

“Crush that got crushed, as it usually is”, Anuj acknowledged, trying to lighten the mood and continued, “Then I got to know that you were going through a harrowing divorce and I couldn’t just stay still and hear about your suffering. I…was determined to help you from the shadows but for the first time in a long while,qismat mujh par meherban hui aur ek ke baad ek, hamare raste milte hi chale gaye. And I didn’t have to do much to help you; I was merely the means while you wriggled your way through the murky waters and into the limelight. Trust me, I have always known of your pride and thus never once offered you something that you didn’t earn”.

She was teary eyed by now, thankful for Devika. She was the most amazing person she could ever meet. And she was thankful for this angel that kanha ji had bestowed her. This man had given her wings the platform they needed to unfurl and soar.

“I-I don’t have words to express how grateful I am, Anuj. Up till now, I’ve always thought that no one cared; only I did. But to think that someone cared and so much at that, to know that there was someone who kept me in their memories and cherished me…I cannot express how happy I am to know that. Thank you…thank you so much. Main bhi kisi ke liye khaas hu,ye jaankar khushi hi nahi…apne upar mera bharosa bhi badh gaya hai”.

He offered her the handkerchief as he heard her whimper. “Nahi Anu, tumhe kisi ke validation ki zaroorat nahi hai. Kisi aur ki nazar se nahi, khud ki nazar se apne aap ko dekho…tum khoobsurat ho, anmol ho”.

She agreed as she clutched the hanky and took in a deep breath, “Divorce ko kuch hi time hua hai, and I’ve barely started to pick up the broken pieces of my self-respect and heart. Neither is it easy to forgive nor is it easier to forget. To look back on your life, and realize it is no longer yours, it hurts here”, she pointed to her heart and carried on, “Uss rishte main agar kabhi sachai thi bhi, toh ab vo bhi jhooth lagti hai. Aksar sochti hu, ki kahin meri wo meethi yaadein bhi toh ek khwaab nhi hai. Vishwas nahi hota ab kisi par bhi”.

She looked into Anuj’s eyes, warmly,“Anuj, main aapke pyar ki izzat karti hu par badle main aapko pyaar nhi de paungi. Abhi, toh main khud apna dil samet rahi hu, aapko kya hi dungi”, she chuckled sadly.

Anuj pressed his eyes tightly, as his heart was pierced. He had seen it coming but it didn’t hurt any less.

He smiled still, "Tum apne aap se pyaar karo Anu . Itna hi kafi hoga"

She acquiesced, "I have no space for a new relationship in my life, as of now. Aage kya hoga, vo kise pata hai and so I won't give you false promises. But in this moment, you are the most precious person in my life after my family. That pedestal, on which I put love, is no more but there is another one, a bit more than friendship; some shy of love and that is the pedestal where you stand, Anuj”.

Anuj was awestruck as Anupama opened her heart to him. He was wiping his cheeks now, his eyes wet as Anupama offered him his handkerchief back.

"Kya ye sab jaan ne ke baad bhi aap mere dost rahenge?"

She held out her palm in his direction and nodding between tears, Anuj put his hand in hers as they clasped each other's tightly.

"I will always be a part of your life, I promise".

"Forever"

"And ever"

Both laughed, feeling light as if they were floating.

"Vese— Anupama trailed as they let go of each other's hands, "-maa would be so shocked to know that the girl you cried for that night, was her daughter, who she had married off”.

Confused, Anuj looked at her as she hinted, " Meri shaadi ke din…"

Eyes and mouth going agape in realization, Anuj hid his face in his palms while she laughed, "Oh no! God,No!! Mujhe bilkul bhi idea nhi tha apni surroundings ka uss din”.

He whined then, "You should not have told me this! How will I face aunty now?"

Anupama shrugged mouthing "no secrets" making Anuj grin, amidst his complaints.

"Oh", she looked at her phone as the screen glowed, “Samar is calling, I will be right back".

He nodded and as she walked away, he leaned back feeling relaxed and drained at the same time. Thus he closed his eyes, a peaceful smile playing on his lips.

When Anupama came back 5 minutes later,she found Anuj asleep and smiled. Quietly, she put his dangling legs up on the sofa and put a pillow behind his back. Then she spread a blanket over him and removed his glasses gently, placing them on the side table.

She still had a few more documents to go through, so she picked up her bag and tiptoed her way out to the balcony, not before glancing in his direction one last time.

“Glad to have you back, Anuj”.


Act 10A- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159530190


And that's the end of my confession arc. Phew, finally a breather😆. Do leave your views!

Edited by nish_vir - 2 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Anupama looked at him overwhelmed, “Aap mujhse…itna py..prem…kese…kese kar sakte hain?Mujh mein aisa hai kya?”

Nish yaar I totally cracked up at 'prem' part of the dialogue🤣matlab itni shuddh Hindi was not expected from you....kaha tu Shakespeare ki cheli aur kaha itni shuddh hindi...itni hindi to mai anupamaa se bhi expect nahi karti😆


Jokes aside your acts are so good

I loved the ending part so muchhhhh.... Anuj sleeping on the sofa... awwwwwwww

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful beautiful nish

Lovdf reading this

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Posted: 3 years ago

The confession and understanding potrayed beautifully.👏


However, I was hoping for more scolding by Anu . 🤣

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She acquiesced, "I have no space for a new relationship in my life, as of now. Aage kya hoga, vo kise pata hai and so I won't give you false promises. But in this moment, you are the most precious person in my life after my family. That pedestal, on which I put love, is no more but there is another one, a bit more than friendship; some shy of love and that is the pedestal where you stand, Anuj”.


This is beautiful, ❤️


In the show I expected Anuj alone scene continuation to the confrontation like sleeping peacefully.. i am happy you added it here..

Edited by naadhiraa - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Everyone need anuj in there life....how can be some one so understandi how...love this part...keep writing

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow! It keeps on getting better!

Loved Anuj’s honesty and confession and him being kept up to date on Anupamaa’s life via the wonderful Devika.

He came back for Anupamaa to help her but she didn’t really need him she just needed belief in herself and confidence. Only Anuj could tell her to love herself not even want her to love him back.

Anupamaa saying she has no time/space for another relationship not realising that the relationship had already started…. Just needs to blossom.

Anuj at peace and falling asleep at Anupamaa’s house… home is where the heart is and we all know where his heart is.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Sabse pehle, mujhe itni motivation dene wale mitron ko mera aabhar🤗Seriously yaar, my thirst for your awesome and detailed views keeps me going. And I do read them all, bas aaj kal respond nahi kar pa rahi. I really really appreciate the love.

Now moving on from senti baatein, socha nahi tha but I got a good idea and then you know, imagination happened😆

Act 10 A

As Vanraj had watched Anupama sit with Anuj in his car, his chest had clenched unnaturally. He continued to watch with pained expression, as Anuj made someremark and despite the situation, a smile found its way onto her features. And then Anuj stared at her, his face betraying the expanse of his feelings. That man cherished her while expecting nothing in return. And he realized it now,she was worth it. He had himself destroyed his happiness and he could blame none for it.

**************

She had been in the office then when samar had called her, and her features had been colored by shock. Vanraj had suffered heart attack. She had rushed out of the office in hurry then after informing him. He had wanted to offer her ride, but he hadn’t. He was human after all. And he was in love with her. The last thing he wanted to see on her face was concern for her ex-husband. And he knew it would be there because she was that kind of person. And most importantly, he was afraid that if were to lay his eyes on Vanraj, he might as well curse the man to disappear for good from her life.

“Patience!”Anuj murmured as he took in a deep breath and leaned his head against the bedpost.

It was 10 PM now. Thankfully, it had been a minor heart attack and vanraj was to bekept under observation for the night and if his reports were to come alright,he would be due for discharge tomorrow.

And she would come back. To him.

Right?

*********

She was still in the hospital with Samar. She managed a slight smile as Samar offered her coffee and sat by her side. Her fingers circled around the rim of cup absentmindedly. So much had transpired these past few days. The news of Vanraj having a heart attack had shocked her, but looking back on it now, it didn’t seem far fetched considering his extreme emotional tendencies.

And that brought her thoughts to Anuj. She wondered how he was holding up. He wouldn’t tell her but he was just as emotionally taxed. She had felt it in his voice when he had called her an hour back.

“Wha— Tum abhi tak hospital main ho? But kyun?”

His voice was edgy.

“Samar hai na wahan? And where is that Paritosh?I mean why should you—

His tone was impatient.

“— I’m sorry Anupama. I didn’t mean to…I..let’s talk tomorrow. Apna khayal rakhna”.

He had been infinitesimally tired as the call had been cut.

She had wanted to tell him that she wasn’t staying of her own accord. Bapuji had offered to stay but she couldn’t have him staying in the hospital in such a fragile state of mind. Baa had been hysterical too. Only when she had offered to stay, had the two of them agreed to go back home. And soon her conscious drifted into oblivion as sleep took over.

***********

“Baa…. Aap ye kya…” Anupama trailed, troubled.

As soon as Samar had taken vanraj inside his room, she was about to walk away when Baa had held her hand, tears pooling in her eyes as she requested Anupama to come back to Shah house.

Anuj was standing at door, his eyes hard. She met his gaze across the length of hall and could see his jaw tick. He wanted to speak, he wanted to rage but all he did was fist his fingers, gulp his heartbreak, spin on his heels and walk away.

She had extended her hand in his direction, his name had been at the tip of her tongue but baa’s repentance was way louder. Seeing him walk away, Anupama had closed her eyes briefly and turned around to face baa.

“Main tujhe kabhi koi tana nahi doongi, tujhse akele ghar ka kaam bhi nahi karwaoongi…bas tu wapas aaja”, Baa pleaded while Anupama just shook her head, her fingers surprisingly not reaching out to console the woman.

Pakhi stepped forward too, hugging her mother. “Yes, mummy. Papa needs you, please come back”.

Toshu nodded in the background too. “Haa mummy, papa ki yeh halat uss kavya ki wajah se hui hai. Ab aap hi papa ka support hai”.

Before Anupama could get another word in, baa folded her hands in plea and Anupama had to stop the woman midway.

“Tu maanegi na apni maa ki baat?” As baa asked, Anupama nodded, the sullen face of Anuj hounding her conscience.

“Main sab sambhal loongi, baa”

*********

Anuj was rebuking himself continuously. The cabin was empty, just like his heart and still he was looking at the door every time he would feel even the slightest tap against the floor.

He was expecting her, hoping against hope. But wasn’t he expecting too much? Wait, was he allowed to expect? He was not! He had long since relinquished the rights to do so and now he had his words to abide by. To be with her forever and ever, in the boundaries of this wretched friendzone, while that douchebag once again basked in her love.

“Hell no!” Anuj screamed frustrated, banging his hand against the table. “Shit!” He cursed as he removed his spects and pushed his hairs back before scrubbing his face real hard.

He was meant to support her but his face had been a mixture of disappointment and disbelief when she had started to contemplate baa’s plea.

Why was she soo….

Anuj groaned. His pain was presenting itself in the worst form as anger. What right did he have to feel betrayed? Anupama had never made him promises then why was he despairing right now? He had already lost his control last night. He was outraged still. Why must she look after Vanraj? Like what the heck!

Had he stayed one more second at the doors of shah house, he would have scolded Anu’s head off for even considering returning to that hell hole. But how could he scold her? He could not! He had no bloody rights!

Anuj laughed mirthlessly. “Iss rishte main haq bhi tumhara hai aur manzoori bhi, bas dil mera hai”.

He was bitter, so very bitter that he wanted to barge straight into Vanraj’s den and shake the man out of his problematic state and deliver some home truths to baa.But he could not!

That relief, contentment, satisfaction and nada nada feelings that had washed over him after receiving Anu’s reply to his confession were now threatening to drown him whole and choke out his air.

Was she even going to come back to the office? She must’ve moved back by now. Was she once again going to justify her service to vanraj because he was a good father,a good son?! Was she going back to her life as a doormat again?!

And he could do nothing! His hands were tied!

Anuj clutched his head. He was starting to feel anxious. Anupama uski nahi thi par kisi aur ki bhi nhi thi. He feared, if she would give in to the plight of her so called first love. He dreaded that she would no longer fuss over his eating habits, too busy in regulating vanraj’s. He was afraid that they would no longer share those glances because she would be too enamored by his.

“F*ck!”

Anuj sprung from his seat and walked over to the window. He needed to concentrate and get his head straight. Allowing negative thoughts to take reign of his rationale was not a choice becoming of a man like him. He must keep his cool.

He settled down on the setee then and closing his eyes, started deep breathing. As he was starting to feel his temper coming to normal, he felt fingers sneak across his face and envelope his already closed eyes.

Act10B - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159537501

Annnnnnd Kaun hai wo?!!😎

Hope you'll enjoy the update!


Edited by nish_vir - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: nish_vir

Sabse pehle, mujhe itni motivation dene wale mitron ko mera aabhar🤗Seriously yaar, my thirst for your awesome and detailed views keeps me going. And I do read them all, bas aaj kal respond nahi kar pa rahi. I really really appreciate the love.

Now moving on from senti baatein, socha nahi tha but I got a good idea and then you know, imagination happened😆

Act 10 A

As Vanraj had watched Anupama sit with Anuj in his car, his chest had clenched unnaturally. He continued to watch with pained expression, as Anuj made someremark and despite the situation, a smile found its way onto her features. And then Anuj stared at her, his face betraying the expanse of his feelings. That man cherished her while expecting nothing in return. And he realized it now,she was worth it. He had himself destroyed his happiness and he could blame none for it.

**************

She had been in the office then when samar had called her, and her features had been colored by shock. Vanraj had suffered heart attack. She had rushed out of the office in hurry then after informing him. He had wanted to offer her ride, but he hadn’t. He was human after all. And he was in love with her. The last thing he wanted to see on her face was concern for her ex-husband. And he knew it would be there because she was that kind of person. And most importantly, he was afraid that if were to lay his eyes on Vanraj, he might as well curse the man to disappear for good from her life.

“Patience!”Anuj murmured as he took in a deep breath and leaned his head against the bedpost.

It was 10 PM now. Thankfully, it had been a minor heart attack and vanraj was to bekept under observation for the night and if his reports were to come alright,he would be due for discharge tomorrow.

And she would come back. To him.

Right?

*********

She was still in the hospital with Samar. She managed a slight smile as Samar offered her coffee and sat by her side. Her fingers circled around the rim of cup absentmindedly. So much had transpired these past few days. The news of Vanraj having a heart attack had shocked her, but looking back on it now, it didn’t seem far fetched considering his extreme emotional tendencies.

And that brought her thoughts to Anuj. She wondered how he was holding up. He wouldn’t tell her but he was just as emotionally taxed. She had felt it in his voice when he had called her an hour back.

“Wha— Tum abhi tak hospital main ho? But kyun?”

His voice was edgy.

“Samar hai na wahan? And where is that Paritosh?I mean why should you—

His tone was impatient.

“— I’m sorry Anupama. I didn’t mean to…I..let’s talk tomorrow. Apna khayal rakhna”.

He had been infinitesimally tired as the call had been cut.

She had wanted to tell him that she wasn’t staying of her own accord. Bapuji had offered to stay but she couldn’t have him staying in the hospital in such a fragile state of mind. Baa had been hysterical too. Only when she had offered to stay, had the two of them agreed to go back home. And soon her conscious drifted into oblivion as sleep took over.

***********

“Baa…. Aap ye kya…” Anupama trailed, troubled.

As soon as Samar had taken vanraj inside his room, she was about to walk away when Baa had held her hand, tears pooling in her eyes as she requested Anupama to come back to Shah house.

Anuj was standing at door, his eyes hard. She met his gaze across the length of hall and could see his jaw tick. He wanted to speak, he wanted to rage but all he did was fist his fingers, gulp his heartbreak, spin on his heels and walk away.

She had extended her hand in his direction, his name had been at the tip of her tongue but baa’s repentance was way louder. Seeing him walk away, Anupama had closed her eyes briefly and turned around to face baa.

“Main tujhe kabhi koi tana nahi doongi, tujhse akele ghar ka kaam bhi nahi karwaoongi…bas tu wapas aaja”, Baa pleaded while Anupama just shook her head, her fingers surprisingly not reaching out to console the woman.

Pakhi stepped forward too, hugging her mother. “Yes, mummy. Papa needs you, please come back”.

Toshu nodded in the background too. “Haa mummy, papa ki yeh halat uss kavya ki wajah se hui hai. Ab aap hi papa ka support hai”.

Before Anupama could get another word in, baa folded her hands in plea and Anupama had to stop the woman midway.

“Tu maanegi na apni maa ki baat?” As baa asked, Anupama nodded, the sullen face of Anuj hounding her conscience.

“Main sab sambhal loongi, baa”

*********

Anuj was rebuking himself continuously. The cabin was empty, just like his heart and still he was looking at the door every time he would feel even the slightest tap against the floor.

He was expecting her, hoping against hope. But wasn’t he expecting too much? Wait, was he allowed to expect? He was not! He had long since relinquished the rights to do so and now he had his words to abide by. To be with her forever and ever, in the boundaries of this wretched friendzone, while that douchebag once again basked in her love.

“Hell no!” Anuj screamed frustrated, banging his hand against the table. “Shit!” He cursed as he removed his spects and pushed his hairs back before scrubbing his face real hard.

He was meant to support her but his face had been a mixture of disappointment and disbelief when she had started to contemplate baa’s plea.

Why was she soo….

Anuj groaned. His pain was presenting itself in the worst form as anger. What right did he have to feel betrayed? Anupama had never made him promises then why was he despairing right now? He had already lost his control last night. He was outraged still. Why must she look after Vanraj? Like what the heck!

Had he stayed one more second at the doors of shah house, he would have scolded Anu’s head off for even considering returning to that hell hole. But how could he scold her? He could not! He had no bloody rights!

Anuj laughed mirthlessly. “Iss rishte main haq bhi tumhara hai aur manzoori bhi, bas dil mera hai”.

He was bitter, so very bitter that he wanted to barge straight into Vanraj’s den and shake the man out of his problematic state and deliver some home truths to baa.But he could not!

That relief, contentment, satisfaction and nada nada feelings that had washed over him after receiving Anu’s reply to his confession were now threatening to drown him whole and choke out his air.

Was she even going to come back to the office? She must’ve moved back by now. Was she once again going to justify her service to vanraj because he was a good father,a good son?! Was she going back to her life as a doormat again?!

And he could do nothing! His hands were tied!

Anuj clutched his head. He was starting to feel anxious. Anupama uski nahi thi par kisi aur ki bhi nhi thi. He feared, if she would give in to the plight of her so called first love. He dreaded that she would no longer fuss over his eating habits, too busy in regulating vanraj’s. He was afraid that they would no longer share those glances because she would be too enamored by his.

“F*ck!”

Anuj sprung from his seat and walked over to the window. He needed to concentrate and get his head straight. Allowing negative thoughts to take reign of his rationale was not a choice becoming of a man like him. He must keep his cool.

He settled down on the setee then and closing his eyes, started deep breathing. As he was starting to feel his temper coming to normal, he felt fingers sneak across his face and envelope his already closed eyes.

Annnnnnd Kaun hai wo?!!😎

Hope you'll enjoy the update!


You made our Sunday ✨✨✨!! Nish!! Thank you! Damn Anuj's pain is something we fans can't handle😭!! But you nailed it you nailed with the discription of his state and pain.👏I can feel it! If it would happen in serial, this is how Anuj gonna feel.💔😭but totally loved it.

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