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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guys so I am shivani and i know this wery well that you want to read a story that is very romantic, adventure and relaxing. That why i got a story, but please let me told you that i am very nervous about this 😆 because this is my first time. So if you like it comment below 😃
Now here this story is a very interesting loving and full of viditi moments story.
Hoping that you like it..



(aditi is pondering about vikrant after his disappearing from the forest.
She is sitting in the jungle thinking that why he left her in this strange world in the stranges
And suddenly she feels giddiness and fallen down on the ground)



Aditi open her eyes and look at all around she noticed that she is in the hospital.
Suddenly suresh sir come in the hospital room and asked her


Sur=aditi tum kaise ho ab kaisa feel kar rahi ho?
Aditi = sir (she walk up and sit on the bad carefully) it was vanraj. Believe me sir vo tha vahan or vo.(suddenly a tear came out of her eye).. Vo vikrant ko ley gya.
Sur= aditi vikrant ne jab vanraaj ka naam liya to ek baar ke liye mai bhi soch batha ki use illustration ho rhe he par tum bhi, aditi mai samajh sakta hoon tum par iss samaye kya beet rahi hai par i suggested that tumhe rest ki zarurat hai. (says that he moved out)

After that aditi looked at her bag and put out a copy and a pan from it and started writing)

Aditis copy = I loose my everything but i find It all in you
That was the day we met
It was strange and i was an stranger for you.
But you! When i saw you you was becoming everything to me
May be you was confused because you remember some one else after looking me.
But me, it was nothing to remember without you.
After that i transfers to Mumbai and started working with you. I cant say anything about you but every single moment that i spend with you was best moments in my life.
I remember that when i was injured and when i was kidnapped, you was with me. To protect me.
But good time not always stay and no person can get aal things in life that same happens with me. We got the case of vedpur. And i found each and every answers that i was finding in my whole life but i also knew a thing that i should not know that "soon you will left me" .
I searched my answers whole life but when i get them i wist to forgot them all.
But when i knew ki vo mere bhai or bahen the jinhe maine kho diya bina mile to mujhe tumhe khone ka dar lagne laga.
Agar mujhe ye peta hota ki uss aakhrie symbol ko dhundne par tum mujhse juda ho jaaoge to mai kabhi vo symbol nahi dhundne ki koshis karti
But really vikrant..?



"I have already loose my everything
Do i have to loose you too"?

(After writing this she dropped the pan from her hand)


So, dosto mai jaanti hon ki ye wala bohot bohot bohot boring tha par iske baad wala bohot interesting hai jo ki mere dimag mai hai bas use final touch dena hai to agar ye aacha lega to mai aage likhungi varna i will definitely go too hell. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome yaar nervous hone ki baat nahin hain we r with u 😉 it waslike DIARY OF YOUNG GIRL but better version DIARY OF MY LIFE 😊 fab keep going 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome yaar nervous hone ki baat nahin hain we r with u 😉 it waslike DIARY OF YOUNG GIRL but better version DIARY OF MY LIFE 😊 fab keep going 👏[/QUOTE

Thanks for your support riya di
I really need you support. And this time most .. 😊 can you advise me to make another ep batter?
Edited by shivaniaditi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice very nice the update was really really heart touching and no need to be nervous hum sab yahan seekh rahein hain
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mitras

Nice very nice the update was really really heart touching and no need to be nervous hum sab yahan seekh rahein hain

Waiting for next part

thanks for that and you are right "ham sab yahan seekh rahen hai". You both got confidence in me. And dont worry about the next part i will update it soon but as i have written before I have to give it a final touch. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nervous hone ki zarurat nahi hai
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very very nice update I am so excited and not able to wait for next part so please update soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Shivani title me clear kr do ki ye exactly kya hai,OS (one shot) ya TS (two shot/three shot) ya ss (short stories) ya FF (fanfiction,10+ chapters hai agar toh hi ye ff hai)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Babygirl728

Shivani title me clear kr do ki ye exactly kya hai,OS (one shot) ya TS (two shot/three shot) ya ss (short stories) ya FF (fanfiction,10+ chapters hai agar toh hi ye ff hai)

Bilkul di i will do it definitely 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So friends so here i am with an excellent update
First i will thank you all for commenting.
Now this one is a little heart breaking but the truth not always looks like we see.

Ep2

Afer one day aditi arrived at chouki. When she put her leg on the chouki she remembered vikrant. She was too regretfully for vikrant that she didn't save him. She came near to his table and suddenly a drawer opens with her hand. And she looked at a thing that was kept in there by the one she loved. That was an diary. She took it up. And open it too read it.

Vikrants diary= aaj mai ek ladki se mila ek connection sa feel hua uss se. Vo mujhe jin halato mai mili vo to normal nhi the par ek aur baat hai jo normai nji hai usse mil kar i feel my heart beating fast, and it doesn't end here, jab mai gjar jaane ke liye nikla to mujhe kuch thik nhi lega. Asa nhi hai ki mai iss se pehele kisi ladki se nhi mila par usse mile kuch alag lega. Her name is shivani.

(at this time aditi has broken from inside. That diary destroyed her heart, tears came out from her eyes. She feels to die. But without wasting time she continued to read. But when she read the lines she feels that vikrant also love her.)


So how was this one? Suspanse full? Or super boring? Please comment yaar varna mai idea kaise le kar aaungi.

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