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Posted: 7 years ago
Amika tumhari story padh k mere gaal laal ho gye but maza bhi aya ;-) please do continue it.
Bengali ur ff is so cute and emotional, agar age continue ho skta hai to please continue karna.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Babygirl287

thanks yaar but maine age ka kuch socha ni abhi tak par dekhti hu shayad kuch dimag me aa jaye.

Waise wo E actually key ka symbol tha,wo chanda hamesha apne khilone ki key ghumati thi na or wahi thi main key uss duniya se nikalne ki isi liye kids and Aditi wo key draw krtethe jo E ki trh dikhti thi.


woh chabi ki symbol thi, ab samjhi. thanks yaar. show mein kuchh explain nahin ki thi.

haan abhi tabiyat nasaz hai toh tumhe story sujh nahin rahi par thik hone ke baad shant man se sochogi toh apne ap ideas ayenge..ff toh puri karna hai na.

tab tak rest karlo.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bengali271

Next part of OS: The weather outside was becoming more dark causing the inside fears to get increased to match the dark intensity of weather.it was like that the weather was also reflecting its grief on such a situation where the two partners who were destined to b together & destined to b partners in life too were suffering in such a way .after listening all that frm Vikrant Suresh sir immediately left wd Vikrant towards the hospital where Aditi is admitted.Vikrant being restless to see his partner yes his partner where at a point of time he exclaimed to his mother he is better to b single in his cases & life too & doesn't need any partner but today it was a different Vikrant who always want his partner to accompany him , he even cant tolerate her disappearance for few seconds he made the driver leave & much to Suresh sir's dismay got on driver seat as he wanted to reach his Aditi as soon as possible.the fierceness in the weather & of Vikrant's raging emotions were competing against each other he was driving like manic breaking all signals inspite of being an ACP but that time nothing seemed more important to him than Aditi .yes this girl started to drove away his senses after the day he lost her in the hospital during a case & made him overprotective of her which was even noticed by Aditi & even Suresh sir also.he was reminiscing all the time Aditi saved him even during her absence & how he started to believe her paranormal instinct after she was absent.thinking all this he kept on driving all his thoughts came to hault as the tyres of cars also haulted in front of hospital gate immediately when he saw that they reached hospital.without wasting a second more he jumped out of his car & runned inside the hospital seeing his this condition Suresh sir also runned behind him in order to avoid any fight there as he knw after loosing his cool & control Vikrant just don't care about anything.on entering upon Vikrant immediately went to reception to enquire about Aditi who told him Aditi in being OT now.listening this Vikrant runned towards OT where he wanted to meet Aditi & when doctors & nurses tried to make him understand that he cant go in he just lost his cool & hold doctor's collar but got rescued by Suresh sir who apologized on behalf of Vikrant to doctors.like a 10 year old kid Vikrant started to complain Suresh sir that they r not letting him go to meet Aditi he just want to meet her once want to hold her hand once seeing him like this even it was becoming unbearable for Suresh sir also .soon one nurse came & asked Vikrant" sir r u Vikrant singhal?" Which was replied by Vikrant in a small nod only after getting the nod the nurse turned to go & came after few minutes holding a poly bag which she handed to Vikrant stating that sir its the personal accessories that we got frm patient.holding all those accessories of Aditi something turned sad inside Vikrant then suddenly his eyes went on a pocket diary although its not a good manners to read someone's private stuff but this time Vikrant's mind forgot all mannerism as it related to Aditi.so he opened the diary to read the thing which attracted his attention was the date mentioned on the first page of that diary which was same on the day when he was attacked by vanraj & when his fall on the matter written on first page a lone tear escaped his eyes & fell on that page making her name written below on page wet .he read it aloud " I'm sorry Vikrant I couldn't save u !"


Yaar you made me cry😭.Loved Vikrants potrayal
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Posted: 7 years ago
Are yaar.. ek hasati Hai aur ek rulati hai.. babygirl ur ff made me smile.. it's really sweet.
Bengali urs a bit on angsty side and it's good too..👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
good morning everyone . i wrote something for the first time but didn't knew that it will turn so drastic to make u guys cry or sad.so that os of mine wont b updated more.it was not to end now but seeing the reaction I'm pulling it off
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bengali271

good morning everyone . i wrote something for the first time but didn't knew that it will turn so drastic to make u guys cry or sad.so that os of mine wont b updated more.it was not to end now but seeing the reaction I'm pulling it off


No.. why?? Don't mind us crying.. please continue.. I'd really like to see how vikrant reacts when he finally gets to see aditi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: loveinshi


No.. why?? Don't mind us crying.. please continue.. I'd really like to see how vikrant reacts when he finally gets to see aditi

Exactly, you don't stop writing
Very few writings have the ability to make people cry
You should be happy that you have got such an amazing talent
Pls continue yaar😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for sharing siya di ,
I wish Anjaan comes soon in top50 list 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Babygirl287

Hi guys thanks for your appreciations,soch tha sunday subah update karungi but tabiyat jara nasaaz ho gyi. Anyways here is the next part. Enjoy :-)

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(Sham ka time hai aur Aditi abhi ayi nahi hai but jald hi ayegi)
Maa: vikku beta aao khana taiyar hai,mai laga deti hu
Vikrant: maa abhi nahi thoda ruk kar,wo Aditi ko bulaya tha na apne toh woh aa jaye fir sath khate hai sab
Maa: ha thik hai. Waise ye Aditi hai bahut pyari ladki,sundar hai,sanskari bhi hai,hoshiyar bhi hai,hai na?
Vikrant: ha maa achi hai I mean partner achi hai intelligent hai and communication skills bhi hai.
Maa: ha waise shadishuda toh lagti ni sagai hui hai kya uski?
((Chal beta maa ne shuru kar apni investigation))
Vikrant: nahi,nahi hui
Maa: acha, kahi baat chal rahi hai kya uski?
Vikrant: yaar maa aap bhi kya,wo kya mujhe apna relationship status update karti rehti hai aur mujhe na ache se pata hai aap ye uska bio data kyu nikal rhi hai? Maa partner hai wo meri baksh do uss bechari ko
Maa: chup kar nalayak, aur kaha likha hai k partner ko life partner nahi bana skte,bilkul tere type ki hai. Tujh se baat nahi ho paye toh main karu kya?
Vikrant: nahi bilkul nahi,jo jaisa hai waisa hi rehne do Vikrant singhal filhaal single hi thik hai aur jab mingle hona hoga tab apko bata dunga shagun le kar aa jayiyega.
Maa: pichle kayi salo se yhi bol raha hai,ab itni achi ladki mili hai toh mauka mat gawana intezar k chakkar me.
Vikrant: maa
(Doorbell baji,vikku ki dulhaniya aa gyi )
Maa: Aditi hogi mai dekhti hu
Vikrant: nahi aap rukiye mai dekta hu
Vikrant: hi aao
Aditi: hi,ab tabiyat kaisi lag rhi hai?
Vikrant: pura dun soya hu to acha lag rha hai
Aditi: ha,namaste auntie
Maa: namaste beta,tum thodi der baitho mai chai bana k lati hu
Aditi: arre nahi auntie aap takleef mat lijiye vaise b mujhe jaldi jana hai case se related kaam hai,apne itne pyar se dinner k lie bulaya tha toh thode samay ka break leke aa gyi
Maa: acha thik hai tum log aao baitho mai khana lagati hu
Aditi: auntie aap akele kyu karengi mai b ati hu
Maa: acha thik hai
Vikrant: mai bhi hu yaha mujhe b thoda khana de dena
Maa: nahi tujhe toh bhuka hi rakhte hai hum
(Aditi giggles)
(At dinner table)
Vikrant: acha Aditi wo uss lash ka kya hua koi aya pehchanne ya nahi
Aditi: nahi abhi tak toh koi nahi aya but Mumbai k sabi police stations me photo bhej di hai shayad jaldi hi kuch pata chal jaye
Vikrant: ha waise bhi face to pura kuchal dia tha uska,pehchan me thoda time to lagega hi aur...
Maa: offo vikku ye kya khana khate hue lash wash ki bate kar rha hai,thode samay to ye apna ACPpana chod
Aditi: auntie sahi keh rhi Vikrant aise khane k time pr iss trh ki bate nahi karte
Vikrant: ha main akele hi toh bate kar rha tha ap to apni auntie ki bat man kr chup chap khana kha rahi thi haina?
Aditi: ha bilkul
Vikrant ha? Wah or photo bhejne ki baat kisne ki?
Maa: woh toh tune pucha tabhi wo boli
Aditi: ha bilkul thik kaha auntie ne
Vikrant: wah bimar kya ho gya mere against to teaming hone lagi,jaldi thik hona padega ab toh warna ap log to puri AntiVikrant force bana loge
(Sab iss baat pr has padte hai)
Maa: acha Aditi tum Mumbai se hi ho ya job k liye ayi ho?
Aditi: auntie mai Delhi ki hu,yaha par to kuch time pehle hi posting hui hai
Maa: acha or tumhare maa papa wo bhi yaha aye hai tumhare aath ya wahi hai?
Aditi: nahi papa Delhi me hi hai apne business k liye or meri mumma ki kayi saal pehle hi death ho gyi
Maa: oh sorry. Waise tumne aage ka kya socha hai?
Aditi: koi khas planning ni hai auntie bas aise hi cases solve krke promotion pana hai or ek aisa ACP banna hai jo sadu na ho
((Acha ji main sadu ruko tum ab maa k samne badi hoshyari dikha rhi ho na ek bar wapas ane do tab batata hu))
Vikrant: ha bilkul
Maa: bohot achi baat hai pr mai kaam ki ni personal life k plan k bare me puch rhi thi mtlb shadi ka...
Vikrant: maaa... Kya ap bhi shadi wadi ki baat krne lgi,chodo na
Maa: khud to shadi krta ni dusro ko bhi mat karne dena
Vikrant: Aditi kitna time jaldi khao or niklo matlab case k lie late ho rha hoga na,jaldi karo jaldi
Maa: tu usko kyu bol raha hai,khud jaldi kha or dawai kha k aram kar
Vikrant: samajh ni aa rha ghar pr hu ya training camp me
(Dinner khatam,Aditi ko chodne Vikrant darwaje par jata hai and uski maa bhi hoti hai sath)
Aditi: acha auntie mai chalti hu namste or khana bahut tasty tha,bohot time baad maa k hath ka khana khaya,thank you
Maa: are isme thank you kaisa tu bhi to meri beti jaisi hai mere vikku ko jhelti hai pura time...
Vikrant: maa yaar apni pyari pyari baate karo na mujhe kyu bich me khich rhi ho?
Maa: chup,acha Aditi abhi jab tak mai yha hu tab tak khane or nashte k liye tum yhi ana aur ispe koi behas ni
Aditi: ok auntie
((Khana? Beta Vikrant maa ne Aditi ko chun lia apni bahu k tor pe,abhi tk to maa ne sapne me shagun k kangan bhi de dia hoga usko,waise uspe ache lagenge wo kangan,bohot hi pyare,wait mai kya soch rha hu,Vikrant tu b kya vikku jaisi bate kar raha hai,hosh me aa))
Vikrant: chalo mai tumhe car tak chod du
Aditi: ok
(Vikrant ki maa k thoughts: kitni achi jodi hai dono ki ek duje k liye bane ho aisa hi lgta hai. Bhagwan mere vikku ko akal de apni feeling ko samjhne ki,in dono k alawa inke bich ka pyar sab ko dikhta hai bas jaldi se inhe bhi ehsaas ho jaye)
( Aditi & Vikrant gadi ki trf jate hue)
Aditi: tumhari maa bohot sweet hai
Vikrant: ha pata hai tabhi to mujhe lagta hai k papa or inki arrange marriage hui hai
Aditi: kya? Kaise?
Vikrant: are maa jaisi sweet si ladki papa jaise ladke ko pasand kare,na nahi ho skta. Papa mera senior version hai.
Aditi: nahi aisa nahi hai kabhi-2 sweet & caring ladki ko sadu & PJ marne wale ladke bhi pasand aa jate hai
Vikrant: acha? Waise tum b sweet and caring ho toh kya tumhe pasand ayega koi sadu?
Aditi: pata ni dekhte hai. Anyways ab mai chalti hu,you take care. Bye.
Vikrant: bye and tum bhibapna dhyan rakhna kisi musibat me mat padna jab tak mai wapas na au,samjhi
Aditi: yes sir.
(Aditi k jane k baad bhi Vikrant waha thodi der ruk k sochta hai:- ajib ho tum bhi Aditi ek toh mai aise hi itna confused hu aur ab tum ye baate kar k chali gyi.)
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Ok everyone toh ye fiction khatam,tabiyat thik ni thi to shayad mistakes jada hingi so unhe ignor maar k VikrIti ko enjoy karna.


Loved the bond Aditi and Vs mother shared.I just hope that Vikrants mother isnt the typical serial saas.

ANTI VIKRANT! you nailed it girl!🤣

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